Marked: A House of Night Novel (House of Night Novels, 1)
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Marked: A House of Night Novel (House of Night Novels, 1)

Hardcover – September 29, 2009

Price
$18.31
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Hardcover
Pages
320
Publisher
St. Martin's Press
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ISBN-13
978-0312360252
Dimensions
6.05 x 1.35 x 8.8 inches
Weight
14.4 ounces

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“From the moment I stuck my face in this book it hooked me! Totally awesome new take on vampires! Marked is hot and dark and funny. It rocks!” ―Gena Showalter, author of MTV’s Oh My Goth“Cast reeled me in from paragraph one. I snorted and giggled through the whole thing, and devoured it in one sitting.” ― MaryJanice Davidson, New York Times best-selling author of the Undead series From the Inside Flap Enter the dark, magical world of the House of Night, a world very much like our own, except here vampyres have always existed. One minute, sixteen-year-old Zoey Redbird is a normal teenager dealing with everyday high school stress: her cute boyfriend Heath, the school's star quarterback who suddenly seems more interested in partying than playing ball; her nosy frenemy Kayla, who's way too concerned with how things are going with Heath; her uber-tough geometry test tomorrow. The next, she's Marked as a fledgling vampyre, forcing her to leave her ordinary life behind and join the House of Night, a boarding school where she will train to become an adult vampyre. That is, if she makes it through the Changex97and not all of those who are Marked do. It sucks to begin a new life, especially away from her friends, and on top of that, Zoey is no average fledgling. She has been chosen as special by the vampyre Goddess, Nyx. Zoey discovers she has amazing powers, but along with her powers come bloodlust and an unfortunate ability to Imprint with Heath, who just doesn't know how to take "no" for an answer. To add to her stress, she is not the only fledgling at the House of Night with special powers: when she discovers that the leader of the Dark Daughters, the school's most elite group, is misusing her Goddess-given gifts, Zoey must look deep within herself for the courage to embrace her destinyx97with a little help from her new vampyre friends. Enter the dark, magical world of the House of Night, a world very much like our own, except here vampyres have always existed. One minute, sixteen-year-old Zoey Redbird is a normal teenager dealing with everyday high school stress: her cute boyfriend Heath, the school's star quarterback who suddenly seems more interested in partying than playing ball; her nosy frenemy Kayla, who's way too concerned with how things are going with Heath; her uber-tough geometry test tomorrow. The next, she's Marked as a fledgling vampyre, forcing her to leave her ordinary life behind and join the House of Night, a boarding school where she will train to become an adult vampyre. That is, if she makes it through the Change―and not all of those who are Marked do. It sucks to begin a new life, especially away from her friends, and on top of that, Zoey is no average fledgling. She has been chosen as special by the vampyre Goddess, Nyx. Zoey discovers she has amazing powers, but along with her powers come bloodlust and an unfortunate ability to Imprint with Heath, who just doesn't know how to take "no" for an answer. To add to her stress, she is not the only fledgling at the House of Night with special powers: when she discovers that the leader of the Dark Daughters, the school's most elite group, is misusing her Goddess-given gifts, Zoey must look deep within herself for the courage to embrace her destiny―with a little help from her new vampyre friends. P.C. Cast is the author of the House of Night novels, including Marked , Betrayed , Chosen , and Untamed . Ms. Cast is a #1 New York Times and USA Today Best-Selling author and a member of the Oklahoma Writers Hall of Fame. With more than 20 million copies in print in over 40 countries, her novels have been awarded the prestigious Oklahoma Book Award, YALSA Quick Pick for Reluctant Readers, Romantic Times Reviewers’ Choice Award, the Prism, Holt Medallion, Daphne du Maurier, Booksellers’ Best, and the Laurel Wreath. Ms. Cast was born in the Midwest and grew up being shuttled back and forth between Illinois and Oklahoma, which is where she fell in love with Quarter Horses and mythology. After high school she joined the United States Air Force and began public speaking and writing. After her tour in the USAF, she taught high school for 15 years before retiring to write full time. She now lives in Oregon surrounded by beloved cats, dogs, horses, and family. Kristin Cast is a #1 New York Times and #1 USA Today bestselling author who teams with her mother to write the wildly successful HOUSE OF NIGHT series. She has editorial credits, a thriving t-shirt line, and a passion for all things paranormal. When away from her writing desk, Kristin loves going on adventures with her friends, family, and significant other, playing with her dogs (Grace Kelly and Hobbs the Tiny Dragon), and is obsessed with her baby. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. Marked A House of Night Novel By Cast, P. C. St. Martin's Press Copyright © 2009 Cast, P. C.All right reserved. ISBN: 9780312360252 CHAPTER ONE Just when I thought my day couldn’t get any worse I saw the dead guy standing next to my locker. Kayla was talking nonstop in her usual K-babble, and she didn’t even notice him. At first. Actually, now that I think about it, no one else noticed him until he spoke, which is, tragically, more evidence of my freakish inability to fit in. “No, but Zoey, I swear to God Heath didn’t get that drunk after the game. You really shouldn’t be so hard on him.” “Yeah,” I said absently. “Sure.” Then I coughed. Again. I felt like crap. I must be coming down with what Mr. Wise, my more-than-slightly-insane AP biology teacher, called the Teenage Plague. If I died, would it get me out of my geometry test tomorrow? One could only hope. “Zoey, please. Are you even listening? I think he only had like four—I dunno—maybe six beers, and maybe like three shots. But that’s totally beside the point. He probably wouldn’t even have had hardly any if your stupid parents hadn’t made you go home right after the game.” We shared a long-suffering look, in total agreement about the latest injustice committed against me by my mom and the Step-Loser she’d married three really long years ago. Then, after barely half a breath break, K was back with the babbling. “Plus, he was celebrating. I mean we beat Union!” K shook my shoulder and put her face close to mine. “Hello! Your boyfriend—” “My almost-boyfriend,” I corrected her, trying my best not to cough on her. “Whatever. Heath is our quarterback so of course he’s going to celebrate. It’s been like a million years since Broken Arrow beat Union.” “Sixteen.” I’m crappy at math, but K’s math impairment makes me look like a genius. “Again, whatever. The point is, he was happy. You should give the boy a break.” “The point is that he was wasted for like the fifth time this week. I’m sorry, but I don’t want to go out with a guy whose main focus in life has changed from trying to play college football to trying to chug a six-pack without puking. Not to mention the fact that he’s going to get fat from all that beer.” I had to pause to cough. I was feeling a little dizzy and forced myself to take slow, deep breaths when the coughing fit was over. Not that K-babble noticed. “Eww! Heath, fat! Not a visual I want.” I managed to ignore another urge to cough. “And kissing him is like sucking on alcohol-soaked feet.” K scrunched up her face. “Okay, sick. Too bad he’s so hot.” I rolled my eyes, not bothering to try to hide my annoyance at her typical shallowness. “You’re so grumpy when you’re sick. Anyway, you have no idea how lost-puppy-like Heath looked after you ignored him at lunch. He couldn’t even . . .” Then I saw him. The dead guy. Okay, I realized pretty quick that he wasn’t technically “dead.” He was undead. Or un-human. Whatever. Scientists said one thing, people said another, but the end result was the same. There was no mistaking what he was and even if I hadn’t felt the power and darkness that radiated from him, there was no frickin’ way I could miss his Mark, the sapphire-blue crescent moon on his forehead and the additional tattooing of entwining knot work that framed his equally blue eyes. He was a vampyre, and worse. He was a Tracker. Well, crap! He was standing by my locker. “Zoey, you’re so not listening to me!” Then the vampyre spoke and his ceremonial words slicked across the space between us, dangerous and seductive, like blood mixed with melted chocolate. “Zoey Montgomery! Night has chosen thee; thy death will be thy birth. Night calls to thee; hearken to Her sweet voice. Your destiny awaits you at the House of Night!” He lifted one long, white finger and pointed at me. As my forehead exploded in pain Kayla opened her mouth and screamed. When the bright splotches finally cleared from my eyes I looked up to see K’s colorless face staring down at me. As usual, I said the first ridiculous thing that came to mind. “K, your eyes are popping out of your head like a fish.” “He Marked you. Oh, Zoey! You have the outline of that thing on your forehead!” Then she pressed a shaking hand against her white lips, unsuccessfully trying to hold back a sob. I sat up and coughed. I had a killer headache, and I rubbed at the spot right between my eyebrows. It stung as if a wasp had bit me and radiated pain down around my eyes, all the way across my cheekbones. I felt like I might puke. “Zoey!” K was really crying now and had to speak between wet little hiccups. “Oh. My. God. That guy was a Tracker—a vampyre Tracker!” “K.” I blinked hard, trying to clear the pain from my head. “Stop crying. You know I hate it when you cry.” I reached out to attempt a comforting pat on her shoulders. And she automatically cringed, and moved away from me. I couldn’t believe it. She actually cringed, like she was afraid of me. She must have seen the hurt in my eyes because she instantly started a string of breathless K-babble. “Oh, God, Zoey! What are you going to do? You can’t go to that place. You can’t be one of those things. This can’t be happening! Who am I supposed to go to all of our football games with?” I noticed that all during her tirade she didn’t once move any closer to me. I clamped down on the sick, hurt feeling inside that threatened to make me burst into tears. My eyes dried instantly. I was good at hiding tears. I should be; I’d had three years to get good at it. “It’s okay. I’ll figure this out. It’s probably some . . . some bizarre mistake,” I lied. I wasn’t really talking; I was just making words come out of my mouth. Still grimacing at the pain in my head, I stood up. Looking around I felt a small measure of relief that K and I were the only ones in the math hall, and then I had to choke back what I knew was hysterical laughter. Had I not been totally psycho about the geometry test from hell scheduled for tomorrow, and had run back to my locker to get my book so I could attempt to obsessively (and pointlessly) study tonight, the Tracker would have found me standing outside in front of the school with the majority of the 1,300 kids who went to Broken Arrow’s South Intermediate High School waiting for what my stupid Barbie-clone sister liked to smugly call “the big yellow limos.” I have a car, but standing around with the less fortunate who have to ride the buses is a time-honored tradition, not to mention an excellent way to check out who’s hitting on who. As it was, there was only one other kid in the math hall—a tall thin dork with messed-up teeth, which I could, unfortunately, see too much of because he was standing there with his mouth flapping open staring at me like I’d just given birth to a litter of flying pigs. I coughed again, this time a really wet, disgusting cough. The dork made a squeaky little sound and scuttled down the hall to Mrs. Day’s room clutching a flat board to his bony chest. Guess the chess club had changed its meeting time to Mondays after school. Do vampyres play chess? Were there vampyre dorks? How about Barbie-like vampyre cheerleaders? Did any vampyres play in the band? Were there vampyre Emos with their guy-wearing-girl’s-pants weirdness and those awful bangs that cover half their faces? Or were they all those freaky Goth kids who didn’t like to bathe much? Was I going to turn into a Goth kid? Or worse, an Emo? I didn’t particularly like wearing black, at least not exclusively, and I wasn’t feeling a sudden and unfortunate aversion to soap and water, nor did I have an obsessive desire to change my hairstyle and wear too much eyeliner. All this whirled through my mind while I felt another little hysterical bubble of laughter try to escape from my throat, and was almost thankful when it came out as a cough instead. “Zoey? Are you okay?” Kayla’s voice sounded too high, like someone was pinching her, and she’d taken another step away from me. I sighed and felt my first sliver of anger. It wasn’t like I’d asked for this. K and I had been best friends since third grade, and now she was looking at me like I had turned into a monster. “Kayla, it’s just me. The same me I was two seconds ago and two hours ago and two days ago.” I made a frustrated gesture toward my throbbing head. “This doesn’t change who I am!” K’s eyes teared up again, but, thankfully, her cell phone started singing Madonna’s “Material Girl.” Automatically, she glanced at the caller ID. I could tell by her rabbit-in-the-headlights expression that it was her boyfriend, Jared. “Go on,” I said in a flat, tired voice. “Ride home with him.” Her look of relief was like a slap in my face. “Call me later?” she threw over her shoulder as she beat a hasty retreat out the side door. I watched her rush across the east lawn to the parking lot. I could see that she had her cell phone smashed to her ear and was talking in animated little bursts to Jared. I’m sure she was already telling him I was turning into a monster. The problem, of course, was that turning into a monster was the brighter of my two choices. Choice Number 1: I turn into a vampyre, which equals a monster in just about any human’s mind. Choice Number 2: My body rejects the Change and I die. Forever. So the good news is that I wouldn’t have to take the geometry test tomorrow. The bad news was that I’d have to move into the House of Night, a private boarding school in Tulsa’s Midtown, known by all my friends as the Vampyre Finishing School, where I would spend the next four years going through bizarre and unnameable physical changes, as well as a total and permanent life shake-up. And that’s only if the whole process didn’t kill me. Great. I didn’t want to do either. I just wanted to attempt to be normal, despite the burden of my mega-conservative parents, my troll-like younger brother, and my oh-so-perfect older sister. I wanted to pass geometry. I wanted to keep my grades up so that I could get accepted into the veterinary college at OSU and get out of Broken Arrow, Oklahoma. But most of all, I wanted to fit in—at least at school. Home had become hopeless, so all I was left with were my friends and my life away from my family. Now that was being taken away from me, too. I rubbed my forehead and then messed with my hair until it semi-covered my eyes, and, with any luck, the mark that had appeared above them. Keeping my head ducked down, like I was fascinated with the goo that had somehow formed in my purse, I hurried toward the door that led to the student parking lot. But I stopped short of going outside. Through the side-by-side windows in the institutional-looking doors I could see Heath. Girls flocked around him, posing and flipping their hair, while guys revved ridiculously big pickup trucks and tried (but mostly failed) to look cool. Doesn’t it figure that I would choose that to be attracted to? No, to be fair to myself I should remember that Heath used to be incredibly sweet, and even now he had his moments. Mostly when he bothered to be sober. High-pitched girl giggles flitted to me from the parking lot. Great. Kathy Richter, the biggest ho in school, was pretending to smack Heath. Even from where I was standing it was obvious she thought hitting him was some kind of mating ritual. As usual, clueless Heath was just standing there grinning. Well, hell, my day just wasn’t going to get any better. And there sat my robin’s egg–blue 1966 VW Bug right in the middle of them. No. I couldn’t go out there. I couldn’t walk into the middle of all of them with this thing on my forehead. I’d never be able to be part of them again. I already knew too well what they’d do. I remembered the last kid a Tracker had Chosen at SIHS. It happened at the beginning of the school year last year. The Tracker had come before school started and had targeted the kid as he was walking to his first hour. I didn’t see the Tracker, but I did see the kid afterward, for just a second, after he dropped his books and ran out of the building, his new Mark glowing on his pale forehead and tears washing down his too white cheeks. I never forgot how crowded the halls had been that morning, and how everyone had backed away from him like he had the plague as he rushed to escape out the front doors of the school. I had been one of those kids who had backed out of his way and stared, even though I’d felt really sorry for him. I just hadn’t wanted to be labeled as that-one-girl-who’s-friends-with-those-freaks. Sort of ironic now, isn’t it? Instead of going to my car I headed for the nearest restroom, which was, thankfully, empty. There were three stalls—yes, I double-checked each for feet. On one wall were two sinks, over which hung two medium-sized mirrors. Across from the sinks the opposite wall was covered with a huge mirror that had a ledge below it for holding brushes and makeup and whatnot. I put my purse and my geometry book on the ledge, took a deep breath, and in one motion lifted my head and brushed back my hair. It was like staring into the face of a familiar stranger. You know, that person you see in a crowd and swear you know, but you really don’t? Now she was me—the familiar stranger. She had my eyes. They were the same hazel color that could never decide whether it wanted to be green or brown, but my eyes had never been that big and round. Or had they? She had my hair—long and straight and almost as dark as my grandma’s had been before hers had begun to turn silver. The stranger had my high cheekbones, long, strong nose, and wide mouth—more features from my grandma and her Cherokee ancestors. But my face had never been that pale. I’d always been olive-ish, much darker skinned than anyone else in my family. But maybe it wasn’t that my skin was suddenly so white . . . maybe it just looked pale in comparison to the dark blue outline of the crescent moon that was perfectly positioned in the middle of my forehead. Or maybe it was the horrid fluorescent lighting. I hoped it was the lighting. I stared at the exotic-looking tattoo. Mixed with my strong Cherokee features it seemed to brand me with a mark of wildness . . . as if I belonged to ancient times when the world was bigger . . . more barbaric. From this day on my life would never be the same. And for a moment—just an instant—I forgot about the horror of not belonging and felt a shocking burst of pleasure, while deep inside of me the blood of my grandmother’s people rejoiced. Copyright © 2007 by P. C. Cast and Kristin Cast. All rights reserved. Continues... Excerpted from Marked by Cast, P. C. Copyright © 2009 by Cast, P. 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  • Enter the dark, magical world of the House of Night series by bestselling authors P.C. Cast and Kristin Cast, a world very much like our own, except here vampyres have always existed.
  • One minute, sixteen-year-old Zoey Redbird is a normal teenager dealing with everyday high school stress: her cute boyfriend Heath, the school's star quarterback who suddenly seems more interested in partying than playing ball; her nosy frenemy Kayla, who's way too concerned with how things are going with Heath; her uber-tough geometry test tomorrow. The next, she's Marked as a fledgling vampyre, forcing her to leave her ordinary life behind and join the House of Night, a boarding school where she will train to become an adult vampyre. That is, if she makes it through the Change―and not all of those who are Marked do. It sucks to begin a new life, especially away from her friends, and on top of that, Zoey is no average fledgling. She has been chosen as special by the vampyre Goddess, Nyx. Zoey discovers she has amazing powers, but along with her powers come bloodlust and an unfortunate ability to Imprint with Heath, who just doesn't know how to take "no" for an answer. To add to her stress, she is not the only fledgling at the House of Night with special powers: when she discovers that the leader of the Dark Daughters, the school's most elite group, is misusing her Goddess-given gifts, Zoey must look deep within herself for the courage to embrace her destiny―with a little help from her new vampyre friends.

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Trite, Ridiculous, Extremely Irritating

This is probably the worst book I have ever read. The characters are superficial and cliched, the plot predictable and silly, and the narration is whiny and irritating. Case in point, the main character makes some sort of stupid, childish statement followed by the phrase "hee hee" at least once in each chapter. One chapter ends with a discussion of "poopie" and female body parts are repeatedly referred to as "boobies." I understand that the writers are trying to emulate the thought patterns of a teenager, but even most teenagers aren't this inane and childish. "Poopie" is the phraseology and humor of a 2nd-grader, not a sixteen-year-old.
I rarely write book reviews, even of those books I don't particularly enjoy (which is quite rare, actually), but I was so angry that I wasted precious hours of my life reading this ridiculous tripe that I was motivated to try to save others from the same fate. I cannot recommend strongly enough to avoid this irritating book.
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Not Impressed...

Oh look! A series about a teenager that has been specially marked and designated The Chosen One, with unknown cool powers who will someday save the world! What an original idea! In case my sarcasm isn't apparent, I wasn't exactly thrilled with this book (and it's unoriginality is the least of my criticisms). It comes up short in almost every category. Allow me to ennumerate:

- The characters were all one-dimensional and can be summed up in 1-2 words each. Her best friend Stevie Ray is a hick (a fact Zoey reminds us of by repeatedly describing her "Okie twang") and friendly. Her two other girlfriends are shallow and ....shallow. The only guy friend is smart and gay. Zoey's mentor is wise, and the antagonist (another student) is evil. Comically so. In fact, she utters lines like "This school is cool because I'm here. So stay out of my way" within the first 2 pages of meeting her. What?? Who even talks like that? Which leads me to my next point...

-The dialogue DOES NOT SOUND LIKE TEENAGERS. I may be mistaken, but I thought the job of the younger of the Cast authors was to make the teenagers sound like teenagers. SHE FAILED. MISERABLY. The conversations reminds one of grade-school kids, not high-schoolers. The writing in general was also sub-par.

- The monologues were a bit disconcerting and annoying. Yes, monologues. Zoey randomly goes off on monologues with herself about the dumbest thing, and she often does it in the middle of a conversation with somebody else. This happens at least once with everybody she talks to, and nobody finds it in the least bit odd.

-The plot was unpredictable insofar that I couldn't guess how Zoey would manifest her powers, but manifest them she would. Besides, we readers might not have taken the hint that Zoey is really cool and special, so the climax includes her using said powers to show just how much the vampire goddess (yes, you read that right) favors her.

- Oh ya, and the authors want you to know that discriminating against homosexual people is bad, but doing so against Christians is ok. The one Christian we meet is her step-dad, who is an egotistical, overbearing jerk. Ok, we get they aren't Jesus Freaks, but the Casts need to get out more if this is their view of every single Christian on the planet. Ironically enough, the vampires' view of the vampire goddess is very similar to that of Christians.

- I found all these elements annoying, but my main gripe with the book was its sheer...unrelatable-ness. I mean, what teenager can honestly relate to a 16 year old girl who is destined to be The Almighty Chosen One, has 3 gorgeous guys chasing after her, has "this is right feelings" about random things that do not fall under the conscience category (such as, I decided to take the long way to class today, and I JUST KNEW that it was the right thing to do), has 4 friends who are not really friends but more like starry-eyed adorers of her awesomeness, and who moralizes about everything from sex (girls who have sex in high school are losers!) to smoking (smokers are losers!) to goofing off in class (people who don't pay attention in class are losers!). I actually agree with these ideas, but the manner in which the authors presented them could have been handled more tactfully (i.e. I would have appreciated NOT being beat over the head with them)
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Not Impressed...

Oh look! A series about a teenager that has been specially marked and designated The Chosen One, with unknown cool powers who will someday save the world! What an original idea! In case my sarcasm isn't apparent, I wasn't exactly thrilled with this book (and it's unoriginality is the least of my criticisms). It comes up short in almost every category. Allow me to ennumerate:

- The characters were all one-dimensional and can be summed up in 1-2 words each. Her best friend Stevie Ray is a hick (a fact Zoey reminds us of by repeatedly describing her "Okie twang") and friendly. Her two other girlfriends are shallow and ....shallow. The only guy friend is smart and gay. Zoey's mentor is wise, and the antagonist (another student) is evil. Comically so. In fact, she utters lines like "This school is cool because I'm here. So stay out of my way" within the first 2 pages of meeting her. What?? Who even talks like that? Which leads me to my next point...

-The dialogue DOES NOT SOUND LIKE TEENAGERS. I may be mistaken, but I thought the job of the younger of the Cast authors was to make the teenagers sound like teenagers. SHE FAILED. MISERABLY. The conversations reminds one of grade-school kids, not high-schoolers. The writing in general was also sub-par.

- The monologues were a bit disconcerting and annoying. Yes, monologues. Zoey randomly goes off on monologues with herself about the dumbest thing, and she often does it in the middle of a conversation with somebody else. This happens at least once with everybody she talks to, and nobody finds it in the least bit odd.

-The plot was unpredictable insofar that I couldn't guess how Zoey would manifest her powers, but manifest them she would. Besides, we readers might not have taken the hint that Zoey is really cool and special, so the climax includes her using said powers to show just how much the vampire goddess (yes, you read that right) favors her.

- Oh ya, and the authors want you to know that discriminating against homosexual people is bad, but doing so against Christians is ok. The one Christian we meet is her step-dad, who is an egotistical, overbearing jerk. Ok, we get they aren't Jesus Freaks, but the Casts need to get out more if this is their view of every single Christian on the planet. Ironically enough, the vampires' view of the vampire goddess is very similar to that of Christians.

- I found all these elements annoying, but my main gripe with the book was its sheer...unrelatable-ness. I mean, what teenager can honestly relate to a 16 year old girl who is destined to be The Almighty Chosen One, has 3 gorgeous guys chasing after her, has "this is right feelings" about random things that do not fall under the conscience category (such as, I decided to take the long way to class today, and I JUST KNEW that it was the right thing to do), has 4 friends who are not really friends but more like starry-eyed adorers of her awesomeness, and who moralizes about everything from sex (girls who have sex in high school are losers!) to smoking (smokers are losers!) to goofing off in class (people who don't pay attention in class are losers!). I actually agree with these ideas, but the manner in which the authors presented them could have been handled more tactfully (i.e. I would have appreciated NOT being beat over the head with them)
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Extremely Disappointing

"Marked" follows the progression of Zoey Redbird, a fledgling vampyre in a world (parallel? future?)where vampyres are a fact of life. They're separate from humans, they're dangerous, but they're here, and there's nothing to do about it.

Zoey's an interesting heroine. A normal teenage girl, she is reluctantly chosen as a vampyre, which basically means she's separated from her family. Zoey's also quite believable within the parameters of the story.

Unfortunately, Zoey is the only likeable part of this book.

While the opening sentence is certainly a gripper, the book swiftly falls flat from there. The writing is much too lean, and it seems unskillful; the progression is a little too fast, there aren't any smooth transitions--it's always very jarring, jarring enough to let you know you definitely are reading, and aren't lost in the book--and with the exception of Zoey, nobody's a sympathetic character. In fact, ALL of the sideline characters are incredibly shallow. Neferet is the deepest character after Zoey, and even she's a stereotype.

For instance, Aphrodite is so openly self-centered that, from her first or second sentence, I wondered if I was reading a bullying scene written by a 2nd-grader. Most of the writing style is like that, but Aphrodite saying, "This place is awesome because of me" is so incredibly stupid, even for a villainess, that I almost stopped reading. Aphrodite can easily be a nasty character without throwing it in our faces that like. Having to be so obvious is a mark of bad writing; if the writer has to tell that tidbit, and has no way of showing it for the reader to infer him or herself first, then there's a problem.

Also, Zoey's friends are just as unbelievable: one's the hick-stupid country girl, her human best friend is so without depth, so snarky and vapid, that it was boring; and even her love interest is your basic two-dimensional hero template. Excluding one dirty scene early in the novel, he's the boy next door--without anything to his personality or history beyond that. NONE of them have any personality beyond stereotypical high school roles. It's not that fitting the high school roles into this story is bad; in this novel, which has the potential to be funny, it could have been hysterical. But instead it's only ridiculous.

The plot is also so insanely juvenile. While you expect high school drama here--it's a vampire boarding school-- you would think the underlying plot would be deeper, or at least not so submerged in adolescent melodrama.

I do apologize for the severity here, but for any reader who likes story depth and character development is going to be so disappointed. The story was shallow, a thin plot developed in time to cash in on the vampire craze, an excuse for more adolescent fantasy in relatively clean book-form. I know we all need escapism, but I do think it could be better than this. The writers could have done much better; I don't know why they welshed here.

I'd advise you to skip it. Still, take this with a grain of salt; one man's trash, and all that.
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Extremely Disappointing

"Marked" follows the progression of Zoey Redbird, a fledgling vampyre in a world (parallel? future?)where vampyres are a fact of life. They're separate from humans, they're dangerous, but they're here, and there's nothing to do about it.

Zoey's an interesting heroine. A normal teenage girl, she is reluctantly chosen as a vampyre, which basically means she's separated from her family. Zoey's also quite believable within the parameters of the story.

Unfortunately, Zoey is the only likeable part of this book.

While the opening sentence is certainly a gripper, the book swiftly falls flat from there. The writing is much too lean, and it seems unskillful; the progression is a little too fast, there aren't any smooth transitions--it's always very jarring, jarring enough to let you know you definitely are reading, and aren't lost in the book--and with the exception of Zoey, nobody's a sympathetic character. In fact, ALL of the sideline characters are incredibly shallow. Neferet is the deepest character after Zoey, and even she's a stereotype.

For instance, Aphrodite is so openly self-centered that, from her first or second sentence, I wondered if I was reading a bullying scene written by a 2nd-grader. Most of the writing style is like that, but Aphrodite saying, "This place is awesome because of me" is so incredibly stupid, even for a villainess, that I almost stopped reading. Aphrodite can easily be a nasty character without throwing it in our faces that like. Having to be so obvious is a mark of bad writing; if the writer has to tell that tidbit, and has no way of showing it for the reader to infer him or herself first, then there's a problem.

Also, Zoey's friends are just as unbelievable: one's the hick-stupid country girl, her human best friend is so without depth, so snarky and vapid, that it was boring; and even her love interest is your basic two-dimensional hero template. Excluding one dirty scene early in the novel, he's the boy next door--without anything to his personality or history beyond that. NONE of them have any personality beyond stereotypical high school roles. It's not that fitting the high school roles into this story is bad; in this novel, which has the potential to be funny, it could have been hysterical. But instead it's only ridiculous.

The plot is also so insanely juvenile. While you expect high school drama here--it's a vampire boarding school-- you would think the underlying plot would be deeper, or at least not so submerged in adolescent melodrama.

I do apologize for the severity here, but for any reader who likes story depth and character development is going to be so disappointed. The story was shallow, a thin plot developed in time to cash in on the vampire craze, an excuse for more adolescent fantasy in relatively clean book-form. I know we all need escapism, but I do think it could be better than this. The writers could have done much better; I don't know why they welshed here.

I'd advise you to skip it. Still, take this with a grain of salt; one man's trash, and all that.
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Complete and utter tripe

This book is absolute nonsense! I would advise you not to waste your time or money reading (or even considering reading) this book.

Marked is about a teenage girl who finds out that she is a 'vampyre' and needs to go away to a special boarding school in order to have even the slightest chance of surviving the transition. Sounds pretty interesting, though I warn you not to become too enthralled by the heap of potential this book undoubtedly has, because it will ultimately disappoint you in the execution...

My grievances are thus:

* The book is written so poorly that for the first few chapters I was certain that this book was meant to be a parody about the vast amount of vampire and boarding school literature that fill the shelves at bookstores these days. But the further I read the more apparent it became that this book was not, in fact, meant as a parody (which would have excused all of my other complaints) but as a legitimate piece of young adult literature. The juvenile, amateurish writing is so terrible that it is an insult to teenagers everywhere. Teens are not stupid, they are not so ignorant that books need to 'written down' to them. It was in no way necessary to have a character whose sole purpose in the novel was to act as the stereotypical "Gay-Guy Friend" and constantly define 'big words' that the dumb teenage audience could not possibly understand otherwise...It is inexcusable to assume that your target audience (even if it is for a younger demographic) is not smart enough to handle a novel with intelligent discourse.

* I also had a real problem with the portrayal of religious peoples within the novel. Marked portrays people of faith as being wholly closed-minded, ignorant and intolerant, with absolutely no redeeming qualities. Perhaps if this were restricted to a single character it might be easier to digest, however, it is a recurring generalization throughout the novel that people of faith are terrible monsters full of hatred and intolerance for anyone different from themselves. This is downright insulting to those of us who are religious. If the authors have a problem with religion, or organized systems of belief in general, fine...that is their prerogative, but to attack it so blatantly within a piece of fiction is not only stupid on their part (isolates possible readers) but it is simply in bad taste. Shame on the Casts for such irresponsible degradation.

* Similar to my distaste with the quality of the writing is my distaste of the quality of dialogue and character development. The dialogue is embarrassingly bad. I was humiliated for the authors reading some of the characters conversations because frankly, I would rather lose both of my hands to gangrene than write and publish a book where any character over the age of five used the words 'poopie' and 'boobie'. That is simply disgusting. What teenager actually speaks in this manner? I am 22 years old, not so far removed from my own teenage years, and cannot fathom hearing a real teenage girl say anything like this in casual conversation. The characters are completely unbelievable. They are flat, silly and utterly contrived. Zoey is the epitome of any wish-fulfillment literature character: she is wittier, prettier, more powerful, blessed, and loved than any other character. She is product of the authors own personal fantasies of who they wish they were projected onto paper. The male love interest is boring. The arch nemesis is laughably cheesy and stereotypical. And the new gaggle of friends that Zoey makes at the boarding school have the potential to be interesting side characters, except that the characteristics which make them individually interesting are so overused that by the end of the book I was sick of the twins antics and of the words 'Okie' and 'Twang'.

This book is not worth reading. Trust me, and all of the other people who have posted similar reviews. This book is a disgraceful portrayal of young adult literature, and should have never made it to publication.
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Richelle Mead does it better

I got about half way through this book before deciding I couldn't stand to read another page. Even for a young adult series the writing was unbelievably silly. The superficiality and immaturity of teenagers was highly exaggerated. I found it most amusing that the authors appeared to pride themselves on their "teen" dialogue by using words like "poopie". I don't know a single person over the age of 5 that includes the word "poopie" in their vocabulary. I also found the constant pop culture references to be a distraction from the story. With all the references to current celebrities this series is going to be severely outdated in a couple of years. Overall, a "vampire finishing school" was an interesting plot, but the writers failed at creating interesting characters to drive the plot. I suggest reading Vampire Academy by Richelle Mead instead.
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Richelle Mead does it better

I got about half way through this book before deciding I couldn't stand to read another page. Even for a young adult series the writing was unbelievably silly. The superficiality and immaturity of teenagers was highly exaggerated. I found it most amusing that the authors appeared to pride themselves on their "teen" dialogue by using words like "poopie". I don't know a single person over the age of 5 that includes the word "poopie" in their vocabulary. I also found the constant pop culture references to be a distraction from the story. With all the references to current celebrities this series is going to be severely outdated in a couple of years. Overall, a "vampire finishing school" was an interesting plot, but the writers failed at creating interesting characters to drive the plot. I suggest reading Vampire Academy by Richelle Mead instead.
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Not What I Expected - Not Even Close To Twilight

Recommended Age: WARNING 18+ (due to language, sex, and drug/alcohol content)

After one hundred nine pages, I almost stopped reading. I literally debated for an entire 24 hours whether or not to send the book back...

I didn't. I decided that not all reviews can glow. So I read the entire book, and I'll be honest and let you make a decision for yourselves.

This story portrays a world in which "vampyres" have always existed. Zoey Montgomery is being forced to live with a religious fanatic step-father whose aim is to control her mother so completely that Zoey isn't allowed to exist in her Marked form, when she comes home with a blue crescent moon "tattoo" on her forehead, the sure mark of a fledgling "vampyre." He's an Elder for the People of Faith and would rather see her die slowly than to take her to the school that will save her life and prepare her for the Change into an adult "vampyre."

Zoey flees to her grandmother's house, has a religious experience with the Goddess of Night, Nyx, then wakes up at the House of Night where her teen adventures begin as Zoey Redbird, adopting her grandmother's surname. Zoey faces a buxom blonde bully, shakes an obsessed old flame, starts anew with Erik (the hottest guy at school - which is mentioned several times), and becomes the leader she was meant to be in the group called the Dark Daughters and Sons.

With its spiritual roots right out of a handbook for new Wiccans, this book expresses contempt for "religion," which seems to encompass any faith that includes the idea of God as a singular. Elements and cardinal directions are encouraged to join in their ritual circle, after each person has had a pentagram drawn on their forehead with oil, and exchanged the proclamation, "Blessed be." Rituals are a regular part of their schedules. Freedom to choose your faith and beliefs seems to be lost to all who carry the genetic marker for "vampyrism." They must all worship Nyx, without question. And nobody does question, which totally takes me out of the book's reality. In the real world people get to choose. It's like they've all been fitted with mind control chips: I. Will. Worship. Nyx.

My biggest problem with the religious aspect is that it's so exclusive. As soon as you exclude part of your audience, you risk losing an entire sector of potential readers. If it wasn't so blatantly hateful toward what they call the "People of Faith," then I might be able to scrounge an ounce of quality from the writing, which is not entirely ridiculous. If this book didn't include the dialogue, the overdone teen themes, and could make me care an iota for any of the characters, then maybe I'd consider letting a friend read this. But unfortunately, I can't.

The teen-speak is insulting to the intelligence of today's teenagers and tedious to the adult audience it had potential to harvest some readers from, given the success of another famous vampire franchise with a wide range of age-appropriateness. Marked: A House of Night Novel just doesn't have the sophistication or depth to share air with the big boys.

The swearing was gratuitous: f*** was used quite a few times, as well as sh**, dam*, b*tch, sl*t,and God's name was taken in vain several times within the first page as well as being littered throughout, h*ll is Zoey's "favorite word." There's more, but I'll leave it at that for now.

Drugs and Alcohol. There's talk of kids smoking p*t. The first conversation Zoey has with her first best friend of the book is about Zoey's "almost ex-boyfriend" getting "drunk" the night before. (In the end, Zoey's best friend was secretly seeing the drunk-guy and had been with him on the night in question.) Zoey gets rid of her entire life, family and friends with the exception of her too-understanding grandmother, and gets new friends and feels they're her real family.

Sex. On Zoey's first night of school, she witnesses a sex act in a hallway. Sex is referred to casually on several occasions. This book also contains scenes of "making out," but not in the tender way Edward brushed his lips along Bella's cheek, but in an animalistic bloodlust-induced frenzy.

The specific overall worldview of the author is clear, which doesn't always bring an audience in, but that is merely the beginning of this book's many unresolved issues. I guess the most disappointing part for me was the anticipation of receiving this book (which, btw, came highly recommended from a few Shelfari readers whom I must now hunt down), and the subsequent let-down after realizing I had not discovered some great new vampire series, just recycled bits of Harry Potter, Twilight, and Mean Girls all rolled into one.

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'Marked' kills brain cells

I've always been a fantasy fan, and I've read some truly amazing fantasy and some horrible fantasy, but `Marked' is definitely one of--if not--the worst. I don't know why I read this book. I think it killed some brain cells, but I suppose that's partially my fault for not putting it down as soon as I realized how stupid it was. There are so many things I disliked about it that I can't put them all down, and since other reviewers have done a pretty good job of pointing out all the book's faults, so I'll just mention a couple pet peeves.
Problem #1--The quality of the writing, or lack thereof. I don't know what kind of audience this book could possibly be aimed toward. The blatant vulgarity and sexual content keep it from being appropriate for younger people, and no self-respecting older teen could possibly read this and think, "Oh yeah, this definitely how I talk/act/think! I can so totally relate to these vapid, vulgar, weak, stereotypical teen characters!" Not even Zoey, who's supposed to be the sympathetic protagonist, is remotely likeable. I mean, seriously, guys. I'm a little older than the high schoolers this was obviously written for, but I know that I never talked, thought or behaved anything like the characters from `Marked.' There are also lots of annoying stereotypes, such as the blonde cheerleader villainess, the borderline-racist portrayal of Zoey's African-American friend, the stereotypical gay friend, the hick friend (how many times can one book use the phrase `Okie twang'?). Oh, and it's sexist. No guy ever gets to do anything remotely fun or interesting; the guys are just around to look good and be fought over by the girls. Additionally, the writing itself was bad. Scattered pop culture references do not make it amusing or light-hearted, as I assume the authors intended it to. It's my understanding that the younger Cast was supposed to give the book an authentic teen voice, and all I can say to that is EPIC FAIL.
Problem #2--The in-your-face anti-Christianity. `Marked' is scattered with little anti-Christian barbs that I could maybe forgive if it were otherwise a good book, but in this context I really find it objectionable. Every single Christian that appears in `Marked', most notably Zoey's stepdad, is a horrible, hypocritical, egotistical worthless human being. The Christian faith is ridiculed repeatedly. First of all, this is bad marketing--think of the audience they're losing by doing this. Secondly, I wish someone would have pointed out to the Casts that many of the greatest fantasy writers were Christians--for example, J. R. R. Tolkien, who basically invented modern fantasy, was a Roman Catholic; C.S. Lewis of Chronicles of Narnia and Space Trilogy fame, belonged to the Church of England. Well-known YA fantasy author Madeleine L'Engle was a Christian. J.K. Rowling is as well. I could go on, but my point is, before they go around bashing Christianity, the Casts should probably take into account that some of our best fantasy was built on a Christian worldview.

Anyway, those are the big problems I had with the House of Night series, but as other reviewers pointed out, there are many more. Save your money, save a tree, and don't buy this book. I promise it's not worth it.
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