The Drafter (The Peri Reed Chronicles)
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The Drafter (The Peri Reed Chronicles)

Hardcover – September 1, 2015

Price
$8.05
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Hardcover
Pages
432
Publisher
Gallery Books
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ISBN-13
978-1501108693
Dimensions
6 x 1.2 x 9 inches
Weight
1.3 pounds

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“Absolute perfect anytime read. Go find a comfy spot and sit down, because Harrison has provided an afternoon of sheer fantastical suspense.” (Suspense Magazine)“The amazingly gifted Harrison is back… the multifaceted layers of this storyline will keep readers guessing—and riveted. This is going to be one truly wild wide.” (RT Book Reviews, 4 stars)“A kick-ass start to a new series!” (BookRiot)“Entertaining…Harrison delivers moments of lyrical intensity.” (Publishers Weekly)“In this action-packed near-future urban fantasy novel…the puzzle of piecemeal memories is intriguing, and all the action keeps things interesting.” (Locus Magazine) Kim Harrison, author of the #1 New York Times bestselling Hollows series, was born in Detroit and, after gaining her bachelor’s degree in the sciences, she moved to South Carolina, where she remained until recently returning to Michigan because she missed the snow. When not at her desk, Kim is most likely to be found landscaping her new/old Victorian home, in the garden, or out on the links. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. The Drafter CHAPTER ONE FIVE YEARS LATER Peri Reed reclined in the plush leather chair across from the CEO’s desk, her feet up on the coffee table, enjoying the adrenaline pooling as she waited in the dark for Jack to find what they had come for. His mood was bad, but that wasn’t her fault. Bored, she helped herself to a foil-wrapped, imported chocolate from a nearby dish. “Really, Peri?” Jack said at her mmm of appreciation. “So hurry up.” Licking her lips, she deftly folded the foil into a tiny hat, which she set jauntily on the statue of the naked woman holding the dish. “This guy knows his chocolate.” “I prepped for glass. Wave technology isn’t even on the shelves yet,” Jack complained, his tan face pale and distorted through the holographic monitor. The touch-screen projection hazed Jack’s athletic shape and black Gucci suit, and Peri wondered whose ass the CEO of Global Genetics was kissing to get the new holographic touch-screen technology. “My good heels are in the car. Waiting. Like me,” she prompted, and he hunched, his jabbing fingers opening and closing files faster than a texting fourteen-year-old. Impatient, Peri stood and ran a quick hand through her short black hair. Her mother would hate its length, insisting that a woman of quality kept long hair until she was forty, and only then allowed it to be cut shorter. Moving to the window, Peri smiled at her manicure in perverse satisfaction. Her mother would hate the color as well—which might be why Peri loved the vibrant maroon. Shaking her hem down to cover her low-heeled boots, she exhaled her tension and focused on the hazy night. The black Diane von Furstenberg silk jumpsuit wasn’t her favorite, even if it had been tailored to fit her precisely and was lined with silk to feel like ice against her skin when she moved. But add the pearls currently in the car with her heels, and it would get second and third glances at the upscale pool hall she’d picked out as a spot where she and Jack could decompress. If we ever get out of here, she thought, sighing dramatically to make Jack’s ears redden. The projected monitor was the only spot of light in the office suite with its heavy furniture and pictures of past CEOs. Surrounding buildings were lit by security lights dimmed to save power. Low clouds threw back the midnight haze of Charlotte, North Carolina. This high up, the stink of money had washed away the stink of the streets. The corruption, Peri thought, stretching to run a finger over the lintel to intentionally leave a fingerprint, is harder to hide. “One of these days, that’s going to bite you on the ass,” Jack said as she dropped back to her heels. Her print would come up as classified, but it would also tell Opti that they’d been successful—or at least that they’d come and gone. Success was beginning to look questionable. Five minutes in, and Jack was still searching for the encrypted master file of Global Genetics’ latest engineered virus, the hidden one that made it race-specific. The faint clunk and hum of the elevator iced through her. Her head tilted to the cracked door, and she shocked herself with the sweet candy still on her lips. She never would’ve heard it had the floor been busy, but in the silence of a quasi-legal, government-sanctioned break-inxa0.xa0.xa0. “Don’t leave my sight,” Jack demanded as he hooked the rolling chair with his foot and pulled the leather throne toward him to sit. His fingers hesitated, jabbed the holomonitor, then waved the entire field to the trash. His brow was furrowed, and the glow of the projection made his face appear gaunt and his blue eyes almost black. Feeling sassy, Peri sashayed to the door, liking being paid to do what anyone else would be jailed for. Jack looked too sexy to be good at the computer stuff, but in all fairness, he was as proficient as she in evasion and offense. Which is why we’ve survived this long, she thought as she slipped the flexible, palm-size wafer of glass out of her pocket and powered it up. Her Opti-augmented phone was glass technology, and up until seeing the CEO’s wave, she’d thought it was the best out there. Hitting the app that tied into the building’s security, she brought up the motion sensors. The screen lit with a harsh glow. Dimming it, she crouched to peer into the secretary’s office. One wall of the outer office was open to allow for a view of the common office area beyond. Intel said the night guard was cursory, but intel had been wrong a lot lately. The app finished its scan and vibrated for her attention. No movement, she thought as she looked at the blank screen, not trusting it. “I can’t do my job from here,” she whispered, tensing when the elevator hummed to a halt and a beam of light lit the ceiling. Keys jingled. The translucent screen in her palm lit up with a bright dot. Shit. “I can’t do mine if you leave my sight,” Jack said. “Stay put, Peri. I mean it.” Arcs of harsh light played over the ceiling—closer, coming closer. Adrenaline coursed through Peri once more, and the soles of her feet began to ache. “Catch,” she said, rolling the phone into a tube and tossing it at him. He scrambled for it, his silhouette tight with anger against the city lights. “Let me know if we get more than one,” she said as she yanked on her pendant, jerking the tiny felt marker from its cap. “Otherwise, keep working.” “Don’t go out there without me,” he said, his sudden alarm at the click of the pen uncapping jerking through her. “Just find the files. I’ll be right back.” J IN OFFICE she wrote on her palm, avoiding him as she blew it dry, recapped the pen, and tucked it behind her top. “Perixa0.xa0.xa0.” “I wrote a note,” she said, nervous at his angst, and she slipped out, easing the door nearly closed behind her. Dropping to the flat carpet, she wiggled across the receptionist’s office and peered around the end of the desk, propping herself up on the flats of her arms to wait for a visual on the guard. Jack was right to be concerned. He had to witness a draft to anchor her. But to fail meant the deadly virus might reach an already decimated Asia. That’s why they were here, to find and remove the files concerning the virus before a second wave of death washed through what had once been nearly two-thirds of the world’s population. Opti had commissioned the first wave three years ago, when Asia’s political hierarchy thumbed their noses at the new CO2 levels set by the United Nations and therefore threatened the entire world with continued rising global temperatures. But this second wave of tactical bioengineered population reduction was illegal, funded by the Billion by Thirty club with the sole intent of broadening their financial interests in Europe. Peri thought it amusing that she and Jack had helped almost half of its members gain their admission. The light on the ceiling became focused. Warning prickled her skin as the jingling keys grew louder and a uniformed man came around the desks. Peri’s brow furrowed. It wasn’t the guard that Bill, their handler, had told them would be here. This man was younger and thinner, and wasn’t singing along with his phone. As Peri watched, he tucked his flashlight under his arm and used a card reader to go into one of the private offices ringing the floor. Lips pressed, she waited until the guard came out with a square bottle of something sloshy. Damn. He was a lifter: familiar with every office and comfortable with treating the building as his personal, no-card-required shopping mall. The best case would have him on the alert for anything out of the ordinary as he strove not to get caught. The worst case would have him in the CEO’s office sampling the chocolate. Breath held, Peri crept back to Jack. He looked up from her phone as she eased the door shut, frowning when the lock clicked on and a red light from the door pad glowed in the dark. “Don’t leave my sight!” he whispered, yelling at her in a soft hush. “We got a lifter,” she said, and Jack’s fingers hesitated. “He coming in here?” “Give me a second, I’ll go ask him.” Mood sour, he returned his attention to the crystalline projection. Peri padded over for her phone, breathing in the light scent of his sweat as she tucked it away. Her mind drifted to the sensation of his touch on her skin as his quick fingers searched folders and files. “Maybe the files have a biometric lock?” she suggested. “No. I simply think it’s not here. We might need to hit the labs downstairs,” Jack grumbled, doing a double take when he realized her lips were inches from his ear. “Peri, back up. I can’t work when you’re that close.” “The labs? Good God. I hope not.” Peri leaned to put her arms across his shoulders. Her bag—filled with all sorts of interesting things that needed an artist’s touch to get past TSA—rested on the desk, and she wondered if she should get something out of it, but everything was noisy. “Why don’t you shut it down. He’s just shopping, and we’ve got all night.” “It’s not here,” he muttered, and she pushed off his shoulders and went to listen at the door. Hearing a sliding clatter, she roughly gestured for Jack to cut the light. Grim, Jack stood, fingers still flicking files about the screen. “I thought wave technology had a sleep corner,” he whispered. Peri tensed. Footsteps. Coming closer. “Shut it off. Now!” Jack’s face was creased in the dim glow. “I’m trying.” The guard was in the secretary’s outer office, and she settled into a balanced readiness beside the door. He was coming through it—she knew by the prickling of her thumb and the itch in her feet. “Damn it, Jack. I haven’t drafted in six months. Don’t make me do it now.” “Got it!” he whispered, fingers waving across the monitor as he found the off switch. “Got it” wasn’t good enough, and with a tiny beep from the locking pad, the door clicked open and the security guard came in, flashlight searching. He was a cool customer, she’d give him that. Silent, he took in Jack, standing behind the desk like a guilty teen found looking at his dad’s porn. Expression twisting, the man dropped the bottle and reached for the pistol on his belt. Peri moved as the bottle clunked on the carpet. The man yelped, shocked when her crescent kick slammed out of the dark and into his wrist, knocking his handgun into the secretary’s office. Hand to his middle, the security guard dropped back. His shock turned to anger when he saw Peri’s slim figure cloaked in chic black. True, it looked suspicious, her in the dark and in an upper office where she had no right to be, but add some jewelry and Louboutins, and she was ready for a five-star restaurant. “You’re nothing but a little bitty girl,” he said, reaching for her. “I prefer the term fun-size.” Grinning, Peri let him grab her, spinning around and levering him up and over her shoulder. He’d either go where she sent him or he’d dislocate his arm. He went, hitting the carpet with a muffled thump. “Ahhhhoow!” the guard groaned as he pulled the unbroken whiskey bottle out from under him. The flashlight rolled, sending shiny glints across the black panes of glass. Jack frantically worked at the computer, his head low and blond hair hiding his eyes. Enjoying the chance to take the big man down, Peri gathered herself to fall on him. Eyes wide, the guard jerked away, and she changed her motion into a heel jab that never landed, then fell into a ready stance between him and the handgun. We have to get out of here, like now. The guard spun upright, fumbling for the radio on his belt. “Put a wiggle in it, Jack!” she exclaimed, lashing out with a crescent kick, a front kick, then a low strike to his knee as she drove the guard back—anything to keep him from his radio. She loved the adrenaline, the excitement, the knowledge that she had what it took to beat the odds and walk away without reprisal. The man shook it off, and she lashed at his ear, lurching when she hit his jaw instead. A solid thump on her right shoulder sent her reeling. Peri stumbled, feeling the coming bruise. Anger fueled her smile. He was good and liked to cause pain. If he landed a clean strike, she’d be out—but beating those odds would only make her win more satisfying. “Quit playing with him!” Jack shouted. “I need to burn off some calories if I want cake tonight,” she said as the guard felt his lip, thoughts shifting behind his eyes when his fingers came away shiny with blood. Suddenly he ran for the door and his handgun. “We’re having pie, not cake, and stay where I can see you,” Jack called. She jumped the guard, snagging a foot before he reached the door. He went down, dragging her across the carpet. Chin burning and eyes shut, she let go when he kicked. Peri jerked away, gasping when the guard turned, looming over her with his fist pulled back. “No!” Jack shouted as the guard struck her full in the face and her head snapped backward. Dazed, Peri wavered where she sat. “Don’t move! Or I fucking shoot her!” the guard shouted. She couldn’t see straight. The gun pointed at her held no meaning as she tried to figure out what had happened. Dizzy, she felt her face, jerking when the pain exploded under her fingers. But it focused her, and she looked at Jack behind the desk. Eyes meeting, they silently weighed their options. Jack had a handgun and she had a blade in her boot. They’d never needed extraction from local authorities in their entire three years together. She wasn’t planning on starting now, and certainly not getting fingered by a dirty rent-a-cop. “You at the desk!” the guard barked, and Peri’s gaze on his handgun narrowed as she estimated the distance. “Come here where I can see you,” he said, one hand fumbling behind his back for his cuffs. “Hands up. You make a move to lower them, and I shoot her.” Hands in the air, Jack edged out from behind the desk. He coughed, and the barrel of the guard’s gun shifted to track him. “Bravo!” a clear, masculine voice exclaimed from the doorway. The guard turned, shocked. Peri lashed out in a spinning kick. Impact against the guard’s hand vibrated through her even as she followed through and rose into a crouch and from there to a stand, the flat of her still-swinging foot slamming into the guard’s head. Spittle and blood sprayed and the guard crashed into the coffee table. His handgun fell, and she kicked it to the far windows. Jack went for the man in the doorway. Knowing he had her back, Peri followed the guard down, fist clenched to hit him somewhere painful. But the guard was out, his face bloody and his eyes closed. Resisting the urge to hit him anyway, she looked up as Jack shoved an older man in a suit into the office at gunpoint. “Impressive,” the man said, nodding to the guard. “Is he dead?” “No.” Peri stood. What the hell? she thought, unable to read Jack’s tight expression. This couldn’t be a test. They’d already had their yearly “surprise” evaluation job. “Good. Keep it that way,” the man said as if he was in control, regardless of having no weapon, if Jack’s hasty but thorough pat-down was any indication. “I’ve been meaning to take him off the payroll, but I’d prefer unemployment over a death benefit to his wife.” This isn’t how we do things, Peri thought as Jack shoved the man into one of the cushy chairs, where he fixed his tie, affronted. Peri looked from the slightly overweight man to his photograph on the desk, posing with a stiff-looking woman in too much makeup. This was his office. Bloody toothpicks, Bill will have a cow if I off a CEO. “I have what you came for,” the manicured, graying man said, his soft fingers reaching behind his coat to an inner pocket. Peri lunged. Her knee landed between his legs and he gasped at the near miss. One hand forced his head back; the other pinned his reaching hand to the arm of the chair. “Don’t move,” she whispered, and irritation replaced his shocked pain. He wiggled, wincing when she shifted her knee a little tighter. “If I wanted you dead, I wouldn’t be here myself,” the man said, his voice strained but angry. “Get off me.” “Nah-uh,” she said, fingers digging into his neck in warning, then louder, “Jack?” Jack eased close, the scent of his aftershave familiar as he reached behind the man’s coat to slip free an envelope. It had Jack’s name on it, and Peri went cold. He knew we’d be here? “Get off,” the older man said again, and this time, Peri eased back in uncertainty. Jack passed his handgun to her, and she retreated to where she could see both the CEO and the downed guard. The crackle of the envelope was loud, and the older man readjusted himself, giving Peri a dark look. “What is it?” she asked, and Jack unfolded the paper inside and shook a pinky-nail-size memory chip into his hand. “Is it the files?” Her attention shifted to the CEO when he palpated his privates as if estimating the damage. “No. I printed out the highlights to justify my request. You tell Bill that what I found warrants more than a paltry three percent,” he said, shaking his arms to fix the fall of his coat. “Three percent. I just saved his ass and he thinks I’m going to take three percent?” “Jack?” Peri whispered, disliking her uncertainty. He knows Bill? What’s going on? Face white, Jack angled the printed page to the faint light coming in the window. Fingers fumbling, he tipped the chip onto his glass phone. It lit up as the data downloaded, and Jack compared the two, going even more pale as he verified it. The man leaned toward the side table, his gaze lingering on the foil hat before he took a chocolate from the dish. “You’re very good, missy. Watching youxa0.xa0.xa0. I’d believe you myself.” He smiled, white teeth gleaming in the ambient light. Jack looked more angry than confused. Peri’s gut knotted. The CEO knew Bill. Was he proposing a deal? “You made a mistake.” Jack folded the paper around the chip and tucked it away with his phone. The man snorted and put an ankle on a raised knee. “The only mistake is Bill thinking he can get something for nothing. He can do better. I only want a fair price for what I have.” Shit, Peri thought, her alarm mutating to anger. He was trying to buy them. They were Opti agents. Drafters and anchors had to be trustworthy to a fault or the government that trained them would literally kill them. Drafting time was too powerful a skill to hire out to the highest bidder, especially now. Fear settled in her like old winter ice, cracked and pitted, as Jack cocked his head at the angle he always had when he was thinking hard, and a weird light was in his eye. “Jack?” she said with sudden mistrust. “What’s that list?” His expression cleared. “Lies,” he said blandly. “All lies.” The CEO bit into a chocolate. “The truth is far more damning than anything I could invent. It’s a list, lovely woman, of corrupt Opti agents,” he said as he chewed. “Your name is on it.” Read more

Features & Highlights

  • In the first explosive book in the Peri Reed Chronicles, Kim Harrison, #1
  • New York Times
  • bestselling author of the Hollows series, blazes a new frontier with an edge-of-your-seat thriller that will keep you guessing until the very end.
  • Detroit 2030.
  • Double-crossed by the person she loved and betrayed by the covert government organization that trained her to use her body as a weapon, Peri Reed is a renegade on the run. Don’t forgive and never forget has always been Peri’s creed. But her day job makes it difficult: she is a drafter, possessed of a rare, invaluable skill for altering time, yet destined to forget both the history she changed and the history she rewrote. When Peri discovers her name is on a list of corrupt operatives, she realizes that her own life has been manipulated by the agency. Her memory of the previous three years erased, she joins forces with a mysterious rogue soldier in a deadly race to piece together the truth about her fateful final task. Her motto has always been only to kill those who kill her first. But with nothing but intuition to guide her, will she have to break her own rule to survive?

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Mary Sue in a Jaw-Clinching Thriller

If your boyfriend is a bad dude, and you like bad men in general, does that make you a bad person? You'd think that a futuristic spy novel could come up with a better premise than that, but "good woman in love with a bad man" is about as thought-provoking as it gets in this lame thriller.

I like science fiction and urban fantasy, so I was excited when I heard good things about this novel. Unfortunately, it was a stale ripoff of every thriller and near-future science fiction cliche you can think of. Most of the science fiction elements - fancy electric cars, facial recognition software, etc. - were so much window dressing.

Every scene was pretty much the same - Peri, the time-erasing protagonist, vaults into a room, hits some guy with a gun and knocks it out of his hand, then points said gun at the guy. They have a heated argument with their jaws clenched - and their jaws clench a lot. Some stomachs clench, faces clench, a heart clenches, but mostly it's the jaws - the phrase "her jaw clenched" or "his jaw clenched" appears on nearly every single page. No, I'm not exaggerating - sometimes, multiple jaws clench on any given page. They sometimes clench a few sentences apart (the record, at least while I was counting, was three sentences from one clench to the next). There's nothing wrong with a good jaw clench, but that phrase is used literally hundreds of times.

That's pretty much it for this book - heated arguments with jaws clenched while people point guns at each other. And if you think I'm exaggerating, there's a scene about two thirds of the way into the book where two guys, Silas and Allen (who are sort of friends, but may or may not be on the same side) are having a heated, clenching argument. Silas is angry and pulls a gun on Allen - Silas is angry with Allen for a variety of reasons, but mostly because Peri pulled a gun on him earlier. "If she didn't shoot you the first second she saw you, she wasn't going to," says Allen. Silas replies "This isn't about her pointing a gun at me... You think she's never done that before?" In other words, they're having a gun-toting argument about previous gun-toting argument, and Silas's defense is that they've had so many gun-toting arguments that he's no longer phased by them. It also illustrates the point that Peri is constantly pointing guns at people, most of whom (like Allen) are aware that despite all the jaw clenching and gun toting, Peri rarely intends to actually shoot anyone, and they all know it. Almost every scene in the book is just angry, pointless posturing.

I also didn't like Peri as a character. Her constant waffling over "bad men" was tiresome. She's also probably the worst "Mary Sue" I've ever encountered in fiction. Despite the constant gun-pointing and jaw-clenching anger, almost every man in the book was in love with her. People she just met suddenly dropped everything in their lives to help her. When she wasn't actively in a scene, the people involved usually just talked about Peri, how awesome she was, and argued about who was really cared about her the most. If there's a Mary Sue reverse-Bechdel test, this novel failed miserably.

Is there a redeeming feature of this book? Well, the initial premise was interesting- the idea that a select group of people have the ability to rewrite time, & then used that ability to be secret agents. If you like the premise of rewriting time, I'd highly suggest "All You Need is Kill" (which was made into the movie alternately known as "Live. Die. Repeat" and "Edge of Tomorrow"). And the movie "Memento" already covered a lot of this ground. There's just nothing original or interesting enough in the book to overcome its many jaw-clinching flaws.
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I really wanted to love it...

I really loved Kim Harrison's The Hollows series. I absolutely fell in love with the characters, the world it was set in, everything about it. The same thing with her Truth series (as Dawn Cook). I wanted to feel the same way about Peri Reed, but I just couldn't. It was ok. That's all I have for it. The writing itself was great, Kim Harrison/Dawn Cook is an excellent author, no question. Peri Reed's character was definitely interesting, and I felt like all the characters were fairly well developed.
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However, the storyline felt too contrived and forced to me. The odd style of third person viewpoint used for this novel felt awkward and at times annoying. Time travel isn't something I usually like at all, as it is often an all too convenient plot device and ends up being convoluted and over-used. I was intrigued by the premise of "drafting" and the mechanics of the drafter-anchor team, and I still find that to be an interesting dynamic. The thing that really started to grate at me was the multiple times the main character was "scrubbed" and reset back into compliance. Sure, it may have been done that way to set up her heightened level of pissed offedness at the end of the book and prepare us for the next installment, but I felt that it went way overboard. I was ok with the first reset, it gave us an idea of what she was going through and set up the corruption storyline. I was really annoyed with the second one, thinking "really? Another one? She JUST figured it out again and now I have to read through her confusion and paranoia all over again?". I almost quit the book after the third reset. The ONLY thing that kept me reading was how much I hate leaving a book unfinished, and how much I like the author's other books. It reminded me of the time I watched the movie Memento. The guy's memory kept resetting itself and it drove me insane. I absolutely hated that movie and in some ways, this felt like the book version.

It was not a terrible book, but I have finished it and am still not sure whether I liked it or not. I haven't decided yet if I'll read book 2 when it comes out, but if I do, I really hope there are no more Peri memory resets. Then I will have to quit for sure.
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Trust No One

Peri Reed is a drafter. She works for a government agency which stops terrorists and anyone who threatens freedom. She has her own anchor, Jack Twill. He's also her boyfriend. Besides being a drafter, Peri has two years of military experience and she knows how to defend herself. During the last five years, she has proven her worth bringing down her marks. But, lately something feels off. When she questions her latest assignment and she discovers there is a list of corrupt agents and her name is on it, she is determined to prove her innocence. The problem is that she doesn't know who to trust. Jack and Bill seem to be lying to her. Her only chance to learn the truth might be by trusting Silas, an agent for the Alliance.

Silas is determined to help Peri. He needs to find the list with the names of the corrupt agents. He knows he can help Peri since he's an anchor too. He wants to bring Peri's memories back although they might hurt her.

The Drafter was spellbinding. I. Couldn't. Put. It. Down. I didn't want to stop reading it in case I missed a very important detail. I love the feel of the story, the idea of bending time, lost memories, recreating them. It reminded in a weird way of Memento at times. Peri had to use her own type of code to remember things which I thought it was pretty cool. It was an action-packed book with all sorts of questions including who is really trustworthy.

I don't want to give anything else away. I do expect this trilogy to become a favorite for me. I'm already eager to read the next one. I hope the movie comes next.....

“You never forget, you just don’t remember.”

5/5 Fangs
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Excellent new series by Kim Harrison

First book in the Peri Reed Chronicles.

Imagine a world where some people have the ability to jump back in time just far enough to change the outcome of an event or an action; however, the person doing the jumping afterwards gets memory knots reconciling the different timelines. You don't forget what happened, you have the memories but just can't remember them. That's the premise of this book.

Now imagine a wealthy organization that wants to reduce the world's population to one billion within 30 years. A US government agency employing time jumpers, called drafters, is tasked with stopping the organization from achieving its goals. Unfortunately, some members of the agency were co-opted by the organization.

Kim Harrison does a terrific job in presenting this story. Her protagonist, Peri, is a drafter who is unable to recall nearly three years of her life. The memories she does recall were manipulated and aren't entirely true.

There are a lot of twists and turns to the plot and I suspect the author must have enjoyed writing it.
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Very disappointed. At 66% and will not read more.

Very frustrating book. The execution is horrible. ***SPOILER*** She is a spy / assassin yet she will not kill her enemy who is trying to kidnap and erase her memory. She is supposed to be an ace fighter yet gets distracted by stupid stuff in the middle of her fight and so gets killed. She gets killed because Ms. Harrison needs her to get killed all the time. Very poor decisions all over this book. The main character is so stupid all the time and makes decisions that makes no sense except because the author needs her to be put back in danger so she can use her special skills. Very disppointed.
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Gah!!!

This review is for the Audible version of this book.

I'm a major Kim Harrison fan and I miss Rachel Morgan more than I can say. It pains me to write this review.

The problem with writing from Peri's perspective is that the book starts over every single time her memory gets re-written. No doubt the story continues to progress behind the scens with Silas, Allen, Taff, Bill, etc. but we don't get to hear about that. I was so sick of hearing her say, "I won't forget this," and then in the next chapter - you guessed it - Peri forgets! The book goes in a never-ending circle of discovering Opti's betrayal, escaping, being caught, and forgetting, to start all over again.

Peri whines quite a lot and gets carried, drugged, cajoled, taken shopping and comforted far more than I would like. There is an endless supply of panel vans. Everyone tells Peri how awesome she is. We meet no other drafters so this may indeed be true.

January LaVoy is as wonderful as Peri is supposed to be. Her characters are varied and natural and she brings a lot of life to an otherwise disappointing book.

I think the book would be really good if Ms. Harrison wrote it from the perspective of one of the other characters and treated Peri like the chess piece she is. Silas, or even Allen, have the continuity of story and the continued management of Peri's growing awareness that would make for a suspenseful story with a beginning, middle and end.

Until she makes that change, don't waste your credit.
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No heart, No depth, Just a waste of time

I hate having to write this as I truly love Kim Harrison but this is total garbage...I don't know how many ppl can actually read this crap and leave a good review. I am so disappointed in this novel. I read most of the 1 star reviews and completely agree with them. I feel the only way Kim could have written this so poorly is if her publishers stood over her forcing her to pump out a new series speedily so they could publish it. The characters are absolutely obnoxious, I just wanted them all to be killed off. Especially Perri, what a little brat and a stupid one at that! The repetitiveness of drafting and having to go over everything again was agonizing to listen to. I don't know how many time I rolled my eyes while listening to this. And the narrator , my God...AWFUL. This is not a true narrator...If you cant properly do both male and female voices do not narrate! She just lowers her voice in a whiney male voice that sounds ridiculous , I even mimicked how she does it and sounded just like her...why Kim chose her I have no clue. Marguerite Gavin who narrated The Hollows is a true narrator...I miss her ....And oh the technology...we get it...glass and cool cars and apps oh my! Like another reviewer said " just cause you say its cool doesn't make it cool " . I am only leaving this review in hoping more ppl are honest about how terrible this book is so hopefully Kim will take the time to write a new series, one that she actually puts heart and soul into. This series is not bad because it's not The Hollows, the series is bad because it is awkwardly written with no depth whatsoever. This world she tried to create is a mess of boredom and shallowness... I could go on but I already wasted so many hours listening to this book and I am just done with it. Sorry for Kim who had to have been pressured to write a book fast.
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Disappointed- great idea, not the best execution

Kim Harrison wove an amazing series with The Hollows. The connection between Rachel and Kisten was especially captivating. That said, this new series has fallen very flat. I was lost from the beginning. Not a horrendous read, but I struggled a lot at understanding what was going on, keeping the characters in line, relating, etc. I've given up 70% through (Kindle book, no page number). Here are a lot of excellent ideas here, but I think the author got caught up in the world and didn't execute the storytelling well.
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I have to say that I love Kim Harrison

I have to say that I love Kim Harrison. Her Hollows series is amazing and I have a set of her other series waiting for attention.

Ms. Harrison said in an interview that this book was very different from the Hollows and she didn't know if her current fan base would feel the same way about Peri Reed as they did about Morgan. I think she is right.

I loved Peri Reed. Her intense frustration about loosing her life over and over again was well written and I could feel her anxiety and heartache. I don't normally enjoy time travel books - but this was well written, well thought out and I am really looking forward to the next installment.

The other characters are well rounded and enjoyable. Their sorrow every time Peri forgets them feels so real.

Well worth the time to get to know these characters. However - if you want a book laid out end to end that flows from beginning to end - this isn't the book for you.

There is a lot of repetition - as we have to rediscover Peri's life every time she does. It is frustrating to know where she hid something and have her not remember it. But the journey was well worth the frustration.

I can't wait for the next book to see where this goes. Thank you once again Ms. Harrison for sharing your world with your readers!
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I loved the Rachel Morgan series

I loved the Rachel Morgan series. Well written, creative and entertaining. The Drafter just doesn't meet that standard. Kim Harrison is a very good writer and obviously put a lot of thought into developing a new character for a series but this one falls short. It's repetitive. How many times do we have to read through her recovering her memory? And, what I also missed was the variety of supporting characters and humor that was in each of the "Witch" books. It evolved throughout the Morgan series but was there from the start. If there had been more of that in The Drafter, although I'm not sure how this plot could have been made humorous, I would have rated it higher. Don't think I'll be back for more.
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