When She Woke
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When She Woke

Hardcover – October 4, 2011

Price
$14.35
Format
Hardcover
Pages
344
Publisher
Algonquin Books
Publication Date
ISBN-13
978-1565126299
Dimensions
5.88 x 1.06 x 8.56 inches
Weight
1.14 pounds

Description

“[A] chilling futuristic novel.” —O, The Oprah Magazine ( Kirkus Reviews )“Jordan manages to open up powerful feminist and political themes without becoming overly preachy—and the parallels with Hawthorne are fun to trace.”— Kirkus ( Library Journal )“Christian fundamentalists may shun this novel, but book clubs will devour it, and savvy educators will pair it with Hawthorne’s Scarlet Letter . Essential.” —Library Journal ( Booklist )“Jordan blends hot-button issues such as separation of church and state, abortion, and criminal justice with an utterly engrossing story, driven by a heroine as layered and magnetic as Hester Prynne herself, and reminiscent, too, of Margaret Atwood’s The Handmaid’s Tale (1985). Absolutely a must-read.”— Booklist, starred review ( Family Circle )“[A] provocative, politically charged novel... [Hannah’s] journey to reclaim herself is equally chilling and riveting.” —Family Circle ( The Book Case )“It reads like a thriller, and one that makes you think hard, to boot. I’ve already placed this one on my favorite-books-for-book-clubs list.”— The Book Case “An utterly engrossing story, driven by a heroine as layered and magnetic as Hester Prynne herself, and reminiscent, too, of Margaret Atwood’s The Handmaid’s Tale . Absolutely a must-read.” — Booklist , starred review“ The Scarlet Letter could unfurl from no better a speculative pen than that held by Hillary Jordan. She takes the seeds of that story and roots them in a world where ‘right to life’ is the law of the land . . . The result . . . is as compulsively readable as it is thought-provoking.”xa0— The Denver Post “In the chillingly credible tomorrowland of Jordan’s second novel, Roe v. Wade has been overturned, abortion has been criminalized in 42 states and a vigilante group known as the Fist of Christ brutalizes violators . . . Jordan’s feverishly conceived dystopia holds its own alongside the dark inventions of Margaret Atwood and Ray Bradbury.” — The New York Times Book Review “Hannah’s fight for freedom is both a sober warning and a gripping page-turner. Already it reads like a classic.” — AARP “Jordan’s take on the hot button issues of our time—separation of church and state, abortion, an imperfect criminal justice system—is compelling.” — San Antonio Express-News “An inventive tale about a new America that has lost its way . . . When She Woke is, at its heart, a tense, energetic and lively paced story about self-discovery and reclamation in the wake of enormous shame. It is a story about the price of love.” — Minneapolis Star Tribune “[A] provocative, politically charged novel . . . [Hannah’s] journey to reclaim herself is equally chilling and riveting.” — Family Circle “Will spark many an intriguing book club discussion.” — The Cleveland Plain Dealer Hillary Jordan is the author of the novels Mudbound (2008) and When She Woke (2011), as well as the digital short “Aftermirth.” Mudbound won the 2006 Bellwether Prize, founded by Barbara Kingsolver to recognize socially conscious fiction, and a 2009 Alex Award from the American Library Association. It was the 2008 NAIBA Fiction Book of the Year and was long-listed for the 2010 International IMPAC Dublin Literary Award. Paste magazine named it one of the Top Ten Debut Novels of the Decade. Mudbound has been translated into French, Italian, Serbian, Swedish, and Norwegian, and the film version is forthcoming in fall 2017. When She Woke was long-listed for the 2013 International IMPAC Dublin Literary Award and was a 2012 Lambda Literary Award finalist. It has been translated into French, German, Spanish, Turkish, Brazilian Portuguese, and Chinese complex characters. Jordan has a BA from Wellesley College and an MFA in Creative Writing from Columbia University. She grew up in Dallas, Texas, and Muskogee, Oklahoma, and currently lives in Brooklyn, New York.

Features & Highlights

  • Bellwether Prize winner Hillary Jordan’s provocative new novel,
  • When She Woke
  • , tells the story of a stigmatized woman struggling to navigate an America of a not-too-distant future, where the line between church and state has been eradicated and convicted felons are no longer imprisoned and rehabilitated but chromed―their skin color is genetically altered to match the class of their crimes―and then released back into the population to survive as best they can. Hannah is a Red; her crime is murder. In seeking a path to safety in an alien and hostile world, Hannah unknowingly embarks on a path of self-discovery that forces her to question the values she once held true and the righteousness of a country that politicizes faith.

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Where to begin...

I should start off by saying that the writing was actually very good. It was the story that caused my disappointment of this book. The first half of the book was great, and although it was a little confusing that they were in this super-modern world and yet dressing and acting like Little House on the Prarie people, I was hooked on the opening sequence of Hannah waking up as a "chrome", and looking back on the love affair that led her to that state. Forbidden love, sacrifice, betrayal, adventure...I was anxious to hear more and see where the story would go.

Unfortunately, halfway through the book the story takes a strange turn and goes down hill. It's as if the author decided at the halfway point that she wanted to just abandon the direction the story was going and turn it into a completely different story. That's how it felt, like two books in one. First half, tragic love story, second half, action/adventure where woman abandons her religion and becomes a fugitive (and likes it!)

I, like some of the other reviewers, also did not like or understand the sudden lesbian lust that occured towards the end of the book. Yes she was lonely and all but come on.

Also, it was rediculous that throughout the story she was desperate to get back to Aiden, and yet when she finally reunites with him at the end, her attitude is basically, "well it was nice to see you again, but I gotta go". Maybe it's just me, but that's the impression I got. She seemed more interested in her new friends than the love of her life.

So, the second half was full of strange parts and seemed to just drag on to a let down of an ending. I think I see where the author was trying to go with it but it just didn't work. Not for me.

I will not be recommending this one, sorry to say.
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None to subtle.

While the underlying thesis is worth the discussion, this book is like being hit with a hammer when a small poke (intellectually) would have sufficied. Seems to underestimate the reader for the advantage of the author's need to belabor the obvious predjudices that underlie the premise of the book. In this case, it seems less obvious and more substance would have maintained reader interest. As a frequent Amazon purchaser, would say this falls into the teen category of readers.
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Starts Off Strong But Loses Its Way, 3.5 Stars

This was a four-star book until the last 80 or so pages, and then it lost its way. So 3.5 stars it is.

The novel starts off strong with a tale of private shame made very public, and gleeful cruelty masquerading as religious piety. I saw some spooky parallels with the way Warren Jeffs was controlling the FLDS Church a few years ago.

Jordan takes the basic themes from Hawthorne's The Scarlet Letter and brings them into the future with the addition of abortion and extreme fundamentalist rule. Hannah Payne (Hester Prynne) and Aidan Dale (Arthur Dimmesdale) have had an affair. She's a young innocent parishioner. He's a married preacher with a huge following and a spotless reputation. Hannah has aborted their love child. Instead of a scarlet letter, she is punished with a scarlet body.

In this version of America, most criminals serve out their sentences among the general populace rather than behind bars. Their skin is "melachromed" red, yellow, green or blue, depending on their crimes. Being marked in this way makes them outcasts, subject to derision, physical attacks, and even death threats. Prison would seem a more merciful punishment.

After her initial chroming and public humiliation period, Hannah stays in a halfway house meant to prepare her for re-entering society as a "Red." She then makes a series of stops along a sort of futuristic underground railroad. Here is where the novel begins to go off the tracks, so to speak. It slowly collapses on itself with a tedious journey and a rushed ending that is too inconclusive to warrant the buildup. The quick foray into lesbianism is awkward and unrealistic, and thus feels obligatory rather than purposeful.

I was disappointed that Hannah didn't emerge more strengthened by her ordeal. I think Jordan hoped to show a transformation from a mousy, obedient evangelical girl into a fearless, bold, and resourceful woman. Whatever transformation does occur is too fast to be plausible. Hannah never quite reaches the state of maturity and self-knowledge we might wish for her. She's left mired in that late-adolescent stage of defiance versus dependence.

I do recommend the book, despite my middling rating. Just don't expect a strong finish to match the powerful beginning.
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A Progressive's Wet Dream

A woman in my book club says that the premise of the book frightened her, evangelicals run amok. I hadn't read it yet. I just finished it. I thought it started out with promise as a tale of morality, but it morphed into what can only be called a progressive's wet dream. Abortionists, pro-choicers, and lesbians are the enlightened ones in this book. There was absolutely no reason, other than titillation, for the sex scene between Hannah and Simone. The book was heavy-handed against Christianity, but that was the point. I'm sure the author is basking in the limelight of her "gay angels." And, perhaps, that's all she really wanted.
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HIGHEST recommendation - a truly wonderful book!

Hannah Payne committed the unforgivable sin; she aborted her pregnancy. After the Scourge - the STD that turned so many women sterile - Sanctity of Life laws were passed in the majority of the states making abortion not only illegal, but a felony. Then the melachroming laws were passed, and those who had murdered someone - including their unborn children - were turned red. Because Hannah refused to name the person who performed her abortion, nor the father of the child, extra time was added to her sentence. To make matters worse, there is a group named The Fist that took it upon themselves to kill women like her, and she has been targeted. Will she be able to escape? Will she be able to be free?

I was impressed with this book on many levels. Obviously I felt the overall message - about a person's right to choose, and about the dangers of rampant fundamentalism - were worthwhile. But at the same time, the book not only does not bash faith and Christianity, it is actually sympathetic to them. Aidan Dale is a truly Christian man, humble and caring, but also human and fallible. At one point Hannah is succored by an Episcopal priest, an earthy woman who is nonetheless another truly good person. Throughout the book, Hannah faces the fact that her former faith was a weak and wavering thing, one that could not stand against her questioning nature because it was based upon what other people felt was best and right, not upon what she, herself, felt was right in her own heart. When she found her own faith, it is a strong and sturdy thing, because it acknowledges the need for questioning and personal revelation.

The characters in this book are strong and well-developed, unique and interesting. While there are a lot of strings left. The story was enthralling - I've had a difficult weekend finding a good book, spending two days on two different books, neither of which I could finish, before starting this one a scant 8 hours ago and finishing it with only a couple short breaks to fix myself tea. Highly recommended for ANYONE and EVERYONE - you MUST read this book!
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Started out great - follow through fell flat

This book started out as a 4 or maybe even 5 star book (I rarely give 5 stars though) - the premise is fabulous. I love the idea of a dystopian retelling of the Scarlet Letter. Unfortunately, the execution was flawed and I'm giving it only 3 stars.

I loved the first half of the book. The setting of the future world was well done and feels like something that could happen and the idea of "chromes" is unique and interesting. Unlike many dystopias, I did understand how the world had gotten to its current state and it was believable. I thought the dichotomy of a world with advanced science and technology but more primitive (IMO at least) religious beliefs was compelling.

I really liked the character of Hannah (in the beginning) and her relationships with her family.

There were, however, several things I didn't like. *****Minor spoilers ahead*****

The book was fairly true to the Scarlet Letter premise and so I expected the statements around morality & religion and was comfortable with the fact that the book had strong views on abortion and women's rights. I was offput when racism was thrown in (and even more annoyed that it was only mentioned in passing and then dropped - either focus on it, or leave it out). I was even more annoyed when feminism seemed to get tied up with lesbianism. I hated the gratuitous and completely out of character lesbian sex scene.

My Hawthorne is a little rusty but I do think that Aiden was written to be pretty close to Dimmesdale but he still felt a little off and I expected him to be more of a bad guy. I didn't really buy that Alyssa, his wife, would be so suspicious of him and cold to Hannah if he weren't a serial cheater. Most people don't expect their faithful spouses to be cheating on them.

Overall, the last third of the book felt sloppy, rushed and slapped together. The great set-up in the first part of the book was almost wasted and I felt a little bit sad that such a great premise didn't become a great book.
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Truly and utterly amazing!

I read the kindle version of this novel and loved it. I did not know exactly what to expect but it was amazing. It was sort of a dystopian novel. It made me think of The Handmaid's Tale by Margaret Atwood but with an updated twist. I read this novel in a weekend because I could not stop reading it. It was well written, interesting, and the characters had depth. I was so sad when it was over and I highly highly recommend this book!
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What might have been

It's an entertaining enough book, but Hilary Jordan doesn't really have the courage of her convictions.She puts her character into a gruesome situation - being melachromed in a rigid society, where being marked in such a way is an invitation to be molested and attacked - and then protects her heroine at every turn. There are no consequences to anything. In the rehabilitation center, for example, there are hints that the pastor and his wife have a particular interest in who got Hannah pregnant, but this story line is dropped and we never see those two again, because Hannah just walks away. Her sister's husband Cole is a violent thug... but Hannah gets away from him. There is a traitor on the underground who sells Hannah and her friend... but they get away. Out of the blue Hannah has a wonderful lesbian encounter... which doesn't mean enough to Hannah to take her into a new direction. Then she goes off on an extremely dangerous drive - with, guess what, no consequences - and sees her lover and makes love to him. Nobody walks in on them, no trouble comes of it, and it turns out he still loves her, so she never has to feel that she was being used.

I guess all of these things will be resolved in the sequels, but they make for a frustrating and ultimately unsatisfying read, despite how skilled a writer Jordan is.
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Red Flags: First Impression, Second Thoughts

I'll admit: I haven't read the Scarlet Letter, but much like Homer Simpson's lawyer Lionel Hutz who watched Matlock in a bar with the sound off, I think I get the gist of it. So I read the synopsis of When She Woke and I was excited. What a cool idea! And truly, this is a cool book and Jordan has done a good job in making Hannah the protagonist both very identifiable but also very genuine.

I say a good job, not a great job. This is obviously a very politically and personally charged book for the author and I can't help but feel that some of the Texas of the author's personal life has found its way into the future Texas of When She Woke. That is all to the good when it makes the story believable and gives the action a context that is vivid. But there were times when I felt like Hannah's voice was substituted by the author's own in ways that shattered the suspension of disbelief. These moments are few but still inelegant enough to feel like a ham-handed attempt at retribution for modern-day religious hypocrisy.

And maybe that is what Jordan was going for. I just feel that there were moments (especially towards the end of the novel) where Jordan used less than believable events to describe Hannah's internal evolution. But evenso, this book was difficult to put down and now, many days after finishing it, I am still gripped by the ideas Jordan presents. This is a very timely book, especially during this political season in the U.S., and reading it in 2012 makes it all the more engaging.

UPDATE: My second thoughts had second thoughts after I read Atwood's The Handmaid's Tale. When She Woke is a competently written piece of fiction, but with the work that came before and the issues I had after finishing it, I must readjust my initial four-star review to a three-star.
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SHE HAD BEEN DEAD FOR SOME TIME NOW & HAD NOT EVEN KNOWN IT

WHEN SHE WOKE

Having read and absolutely loved Jordan's first novel, MUDBOUND, I was excited and happy to read her latest. WHEN SHE WOKE was a different genre for me; it bordered near sci-fi; however, the book had its feet planted solidly on the ground and I enjoyed the concept of the plot.

Enter into the futuristic world in the USA -- where criminals are punished swiftly and harshly. Once an individual has committed a crime, they are turned into a Chrome -- simply stated, they are injected and their skin is turned into a variety of colors, each tone of color denoting their crime. Hannah, having had an abortion and thus being labeled a murderer, is red in the rainbow of criminal hues.

She is sentenced and sent away to become a Chrome. Her parents then send her to a halfway house where she hopefully will learn to live with her crime, repent, and return to being a good and up-standing citizen. Life is hard and strict at the halfway house; the rules are unrealistic and they must not be broken. Hannah finds her life there to be pure torture. She doesn't trust anyone there until she meets Kayla, another Chrome who thankfully has a sense of humor, some gumption, and doesn't take to life at the center either. Hannah and Kayla become fast friends, looking out for each other, and finally deciding to take make their own destiny and dreams come true. For both girls, it is hard to imagine a future and anywhere near normal life. Hannah feels she can never go back home again; while her dad keeps in contact with her and tries to help her, her mother has totally disowned her.

After Kayla and Hannah decide to make their own independent way through life,
fate takes them by their hands and they come in contact with a group who helps Chromes make a new life for themselves. The road they decide to travel is dangerous, live-threatening, and full of people who are out to stop and/or kill them.

This book was well-written and different. The futuristic setting is certainly a step in a diverse direction for this reader. The characters are life-like, believable, and likeable. Life in the not so far off future is horrifying, the story line was fast-paced, the characters true and solid. We watch Hannah's character grow from a meek and mild young girl to a determined, strong, and free-willed young adult.

For lovers of futuristic material, who love action, along with a love story, and just some darn good writing, this would be a book for you.

Thank you!

Pam
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