Velvet
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Velvet

Paperback – May 12, 2015

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$15.06
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Paperback
Pages
416
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Swoon Reads
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ISBN-13
978-1250057082
Dimensions
5 x 1 x 7 inches
Weight
1 pounds

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From School Library Journal Gr 8 Up—Caitlin Holte's world has just changed forever. Her parents have died and Caitlin is sent to live with her formerly estranged aunt in the unfamiliar mountainous environs of upstate New York. Uncomfortable with her aunt's attempts at consolation, the teen runs off alone. She experiences an intense sense of loss with unfortunate timing as it attracts a nearby shapeshifting demon. Luckily for her, this demon has a handsome vampire son, Adrian, who is alienated from his villainous dad. He rescues Caitlin, brings her home, and becomes her paranormal bodyguard. They create a cover story to explain the time they spend together. The duo decide to faux-date, which comes as a big surprise to everyone at Warren County High. The very attractive and much sought after Adrian has never found any female even slightly interesting. The real reason for his up-to-now unchanged relationship status is that the Vampire Council has decreed that vampires may not get involved with humans. Adrian and Caitlin begin with the best of intentions, but throughout the ongoing danger and fake relationship, they fall in love. Can Adrian save Caitlin? Even if he can, what will it cost him? This romantic Twilight readalike shines with credible dialogue and fully developed characters. VERDICT Paranormal fans who haven't reached their vampire saturation point will cheer and eagerly await the cliff-hanger's resolution in the sequel.—Cindy Wall, Southington Library & Museum, CT “This romantic Twilight readalike shines with credible dialogue and fully developed characters. Paranormal fans who haven't reached their vampire saturation point will cheer and eagerly await the cliff-hanger's resolution in the sequel.” ― School Library Journal "Dude. So this is what Twilight should have been. Velvet is fun and very entertaining with snappy dialogue, awesome characters and some solid teen angst .” ― The Windy Pages "It’s humorous yet dark, cute yet sexy, lighthearted yet heart-stopping . This one is definitely worth the read, if only to get your swoon on!” ― The Eater of Books! "This is just straight up good and steamy! The author has a great voice―fresh, fun and clearly talented. An excellent mix of hip and quirky with the right dash of romance!" –T. S. Reeds, reader on SwoonReads.com The debut author of the YA paranormal romancexa0Velvetxa0is as nerdy in real life as she is on the Twitter. Armed with a very shiny English degree, she spent four months in Oxford holed up at the Radcliffe Camera amongst the hush of ancient books and the rich musk of academia. Returning to Los Angeles, she acquired a concurrent degree in film, mostly as an excuse to write essays aboutxa0The Princess Bridexa0andxa0Hook. She can sew (poorly), drive stick (please fasten your seatbelt), and mostly lift her feet off the ground while stuttering into first gear on a very small motorcycle. She currently lives in Seattle but tends to wander from city to city like the gypsy she is. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. Velvet By Temple West Swoon Reads Copyright © 2015 Temple WestAll rights reserved.ISBN: 978-1-250-05708-2 CHAPTER 1 FIERY TORNADO OF DOOM "By the suits and ties of Tim Gunn, I swear I will hunt you down and eat you for breakfast. " Above me, the flock of birds took off in a riot of indignant squawks while I sat horrified and covered in bird shit. At least, I thought it was bird shit. I dabbed at my cheek with a hunk of rock moss, though a closer examination revealed nothing resembling feces, avian or otherwise. I briefly considered licking the moss to see if it was, in fact, bird urine—so I could be confident in my bird rage—but quickly ruled this out as totally insane. I sniffed cautiously at it instead, and it smelled pretty much like you'd expect: woodsy, and a bit like dirt. Rain, then. "I'm sorry, birds!" I called after them, fully aware that I looked crazy. "That one was my bad." They just honked at me irritably. Well, I'd tried. This part of the mountain was deserted; quiet except for the understandably irritated pigeons and a musical breeze, which was picking up into a full-on wind. My sketchbook whipped open, pages fluttering back and forth wildly. I slammed the cover shut and wrapped my arms around it to protect the design I'd been working on for the past three hours. Above me, the scattered cloud wisps from a moment ago multiplied dramatically, spilling like ink stains across the sky. The sudden weather change was weird, but I'd only been here two days—as far as I knew, storms popped up like this all the time. The thought of trudging back to the ranch in the rain ignited the acidy rage-fire in my stomach, but the safety of my art supplies was more important than not wanting to be anywhere near my aunt and uncle. That's actually why I was out here—Rachel, in a seriously misguided attempt to be comforting, had gone into mom-mode and hugged me. I'd dodged her outstretched arms and escaped into the woods to let my gut-response anger simmer back down to a nonexplosive level. Figured it was better to have a meltdown in the middle of the forest than the middle of their living room. After a mile or two along what seemed more like a deer path than an actual trail, I'd found this gigantic rock and climbed up to sketch, paying little attention to the time or, apparently, the weather, which was beginning to spit a misty rain. Up until two days ago, I'd lived by the ocean my entire life so the rain was nothing new, but the forest was. I was used to being home with my mom, in our town, on our street, wrapped up in our tiny little bubble of suburban normal. Or, well, normal enough, I guess, until my parents died. Separately, of course, from the usual sorts of things, nothing too dramatic. Just life, being a bitch. My dad's death was quick, mostly painless, but I was so young when it happened that I didn't really understand for a long time that he was gone, and he was never coming back. My mom's was more recent—dull by comparison—but by the end she couldn't even speak to me, and she never said good-bye. That was four days ago. But I couldn't think about that now. My basic survival strategy was to keep my mind as blank as possible. Eat, sleep, sketch, repeat. A low rumble of thunder echoed through the mountains, which was my cue to leave. Getting down should have been simple: walk to the edge of the rock and slide down the upturned roots I'd easily climbed up earlier. Unfortunately, a creepy, dense fog was sifting through the evergreens, cutting off the sky, making it virtually impossible to see where I was going. I'd just groped my way to the edge of the boulder, cursing the whole way, when the misting rain sputtered into a hard, freezing downpour. Moments later, a flash of lightning and roll of skull-pounding thunder exploded so close I could feel the vibrations through my fingertips. Rather than illuminating my way, it made the forest feel like an ocean, deep and pressurized and terrifying. I wasn't that far from my aunt and uncle's property, but the trail completely disappeared in the swirling fog. I couldn't see a damn thing, but some primal, gut instinct told me to move. Swinging the messenger bag across my shoulders, I turned, blindly feeling around for anything I could grab hold of. My foot found the nearest root from the overturned tree and I started down, panic making me move faster than was wise. Fumbling in the dark, I lost my foothold at the same moment my fingers tore right through the moss that was keeping me anchored to the boulder. I screamed and fell, still a good six feet off the ground—but didn't hit. Where the ground should have been there was instead someone's chest, which I crashed into, hard. My momentum knocked us both into the prickly brambles, but before I could do much more than finish my scream, the stranger rolled, pinning me to the muddy ground. I started to scream again, but he (it was a he, I could tell that much) clapped his hand over my mouth, looking around quickly as if expecting someone else to be there. The wind rose, shrieking through the trees, whipping at my hair. Above us, another flash of lightning rocked the sky, followed by a bloom of orange light that looked suspiciously like fire. The clouds gathered slowly into a broad funnel. So, unless I was hallucinating—which seemed more and more likely—we were in the direct path of a giant, fire-spitting tornado. Which was totally insane, because upstate New York does not get fire-spitting tornadoes. The temperature plummeted and the stranger's breath bloomed in heavy white clouds. When he finally looked back down at me (perhaps because my struggles had transitioned from "Hey, you're heavy, get off" to " Hey, there's a freaking fire-tornado behind you "), I could only stare at him, all my words forgotten. Because there was something wrong with him. There was something very wrong. His pupils were pinpricks and his irises were liquid, like molten silver. A glowing white light cast the rest of his face into complete shadow so I couldn't make out what he looked like. He slid his hand from my mouth to my cheek, and placed his palm against my temple. I wanted to scream, to say something, to move, but the words were all caught in my throat and I couldn't remember my own name, let alone how to move my arms and legs. He leaned in close—way, way too close—and whispered, "I'm sorry—there's no time." And then the pain began. All the warmth crept upward through my body, away from my fingers and toes, crawling through my knees and wrists on fiery pins and needles. It gathered in my chest and pounded up my throat and into my skull, pulsing behind my eyes. I was going to explode. I was going to splatter all over the forest like lava, or shatter like ice. And all the while, I couldn't look away. Then he muttered one final word and quite suddenly, it was over. My head cleared instantly. I could blink, I could breathe. The pain was gone, but with it went my entire sense of self. On some deep, subconscious level I knew I was still real—I knew I had a name and a family and a purpose in life, aimless as it was—but surface-level me believed that I'd winked out of existence. I didn't think I was dead, exactly. I simply believed that I had never been. Hunched over me, the stranger flinched, once, and shivered, but I didn't think it was from the cold. In fact, the pouring rain was steaming off his skin like he was burning hot. Above us, the night-black clouds pushed closer, crowding out the sky. Looking around, as if expecting once again for someone else—or some thing else—to be waiting in the shadows, he scooped me up effortlessly and sprinted off into the darkness. I tried to grab hold of his shoulder, but none of my limbs were working. I was weak, pure dead weight, but he had no problem hauling me at a full run through the impossibly dark trees. It could only have been a few minutes later that my aunt and uncle's ranch appeared out of the darkness. At the end of the trail that led into the backyard, the stranger stopped for a moment and looked down at me, eyes flickering from gray to molten silver. I tried to look away, but it was too late. I was caught in the light. It could only have been a moment, but when I opened my eyes, I had no idea who was holding me, or why I was in the rain, or why I was outside at all. All I knew was that I wanted to be warm, and I wanted very much to fall asleep. The man kicked urgently at the front door until it opened. I remember my aunt yelling, "Caitlin!" And then I passed out, and didn't remember a thing. CHAPTER 2 BACK TO SCHOOL I couldn't delay by brushing my teeth any longer; I was about ready to gag on the foamy toothpaste and I could hear Rachel calling up the stairs for Norah and me to hurry. It was raining outside, and the Master ranch—where I was stuck living for the next year and a half—was on a road so rural it didn't even have a name. Honestly, "road" was a generous term—it was basically a dirt driveway, and its potholes were currently hidden under a foot of water. Rather than braving the weather on the ancient bicycles parked on the side of the house, Rachel had said she'd take us to school in the truck, which meant my mini-vacation from school was over. Apparently you can only use your dead mom as an excuse to skip algebra for so long. I was nervous. And I felt stupid for feeling nervous. What was I, twelve? To be fair, it had been a hell of a week. Funeral, freak storm, fever—my least favorite "F" words. I stared grimly in the mirror: Dark circles puffed under my eyes, my skin looked pasty, and my lips were chapped. The big burgundy sweater I wore only made my face look more hollow. Skinny jeans, my mom's wedding ring on my right hand, my dad's wedding ring on my thumb, and an old pair of Rachel's boots. Definitely looked like I wanted to be a fashion designer. When I'd shown up at the ranch, I'd spent the majority of the first three days locked in my new room marathoning episodes of Project Runway on Netflix. I'd brought my sewing machine with me to Stony Creek, but the pedal cord had snapped in the back of my grandma's station wagon on the move here, and I didn't have the money to fix it. I did some embroidery to pass the time, but it wasn't the same. I wanted to be a designer—I wanted to go to the Fashion Institute of Technology and open a store in New York. But our insurance was so crappy and Mom's medical bills were so insanely high that they obliterated any chance of going to college. When I graduated high school next year, I would be on my own, totally broke. Next week, I told myself. Next week, I'd start researching internships. I'd make a plan. I'd work on designs, I'd figure out how to get money to fix my sewing machine. I'd use friggin' sheets, if I had to, to make a portfolio to show at the Fashion Institute. I'd find a way. Today, however, I'd let myself feel as miserable as I wanted. A hell of a week, indeed. "Oh, good, you're ready," Rachel said, when I finally came down to the kitchen. "Come on, Norah!" she called up the stairs again. I could hear a muffled response as Rachel grabbed two brown paper bags and handed one to me. I was ruffling their routine, an extra mouth to feed and an extra body to transport. Joe, in his plaid flannel shirt with the sleeves rolled up, sat at the table reading an article on his laptop, completely unaffected by the morning rush. Rachel had tried to get me interested in the ranch, and I might have been, but because she wanted me to like it, I didn't—which was immature, and I knew it was immature, but I didn't care. There were eggs to collect, a cow to milk, a garden to tend (though nothing was growing in mid-October), and, of course, the horses. There were eight, five of which were boarders owned by city people who came by once or twice in the summer to ride them. "That's your lunch," Rachel said, pointing at my bag as she filled her thermos with steaming coffee. "I didn't know what you'd want, so I put in a little of everything." I didn't say anything, but she was already at the foot of the stairs ready to call up one last warning just as my cousin came bounding down. "Ready!" she announced, landing on the floor, grabbing her lunch out of her mom's hands and dashing out the front door, hair still wet from her quick post- barn rinse-off in the shower. Norah was fourteen, a freshman, and completely obsessed with horses. She got up at four a.m. every day to feed them and, I don't even know, muck out their stalls? My only source of farm terminology was Black Beauty, so I honestly don't know what she did for three hours every morning before school. Norah didn't like me and I was indifferent about Norah. I got it, though—I was invading her turf, soaking up all her parents' attention. If the circumstances were different, if I had met her even once before moving into her house, I think I would have liked her. Problem was, I hadn't met her before, and now we had a year and a half to butt heads. "Have a good day, Caitlin," my uncle called as I slid on my jacket. I waved halfheartedly at him without looking back. It wasn't Joe and Rachel's fault my mom was dead, I had to give them that. I was mad at them for other reasons, but not for that. I just didn't understand why they hadn't shown up once the entire time she was sick. They'd sent a few e-mails to ask for updates and to try and cheer me up with these stupid, animated eCards, but they never called, they never asked to speak to my mom, they didn't even show up for the funeral. I had to live with them because the lawyers said I did, but once I was eighteen, I was out of there. Amid the scramble for seat belts in the truck, I managed to slip my earbuds in and spent the twenty-minute drive listening to angry pop music that simultaneously made me want to dance and punch someone in the face—both of which felt better than being depressed. Ever since the storm, my protective shell of anger had mostly given way to a listless sadness, and it pissed me off. Sadness wasn't useful. I guess anger wasn't really useful either, but it at least made me feel less pathetic. Through the fogged-up window the rain-slick trees waved in the wind, beautiful and ghostly. Too soon, we arrived at the center of town and pulled into the parking lot of Warren County School. It was a squat brick building with ivy growing up the side of one wall, an arched roof, a covered picnic area with an adjacent covered playground, and an American and New York flag. I opened the door to the truck, Norah scrambling behind me to get out. "Caitlin," Rachel called from the driver's side. I turned back to look at her. "Have a great day, okay, honey?" I stared at her until her smile faltered and she looked away. "Come on," Norah said, tugging on my arm. I shut the door and my aunt drove back into the rain and fog. Maybe I was a brat after all. Maybe I didn't give a shit. Maybe I really, really missed my mom and didn't want to be here. Norah and I dashed under the cover of the sheltered walkway surrounding the building. "Mom told me to look after you," she announced after an awkward moment of silence. Her face was flat, probably trying to hide a scowl. I decided to let her off the hook. "Just tell me where to check in; I can figure the rest out." "First door on the right," she said, pointing I nodded and left her on the sidewalk. Through the old, warped door, painted over many times and slightly too large for the frame, a cramped waiting room guarded a damp-smelling hallway. To the right, a tiny, feather-haired old lady sat behind her desk, hand shaking as she stamped a stack of papers. She hadn't noticed me so I dinged the old orange bell on the counter. "I'm a new student," I said, as she finally looked up. "Should I sign in, or anything?" She reached a trembling hand out to push a clipboard two inches in my direction and murmured, "Sign here." I scrawled Caitlin Holte on the sign-in sheet and then waited. Mrs. Goode, as her plastic, clip-on name tag stated, seemed to have fallen asleep. "Mrs. Goode? Ma'am?" (Continues...) Excerpted from Velvet by Temple West . Copyright © 2015 Temple West. Excerpted by permission of Swoon Reads. All rights reserved. No part of this excerpt may be reproduced or reprinted without permission in writing from the publisher.Excerpts are provided by Dial-A-Book Inc. solely for the personal use of visitors to this web site. Read more

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  • CAITLIN IS YOUR TYPICAL ORPHAN
  • ...pissed off and grieving. After her mother dies of bone cancer, she's uprooted to Stony Creek, a pitiful excuse for a town in the rural mountains of upstate New York. Stuck living on her aunt and uncle's struggling horse ranch, Caitlin vows to simply survive until she graduates high school.  Then, it's on to New York and wrangling a scholarship at The Fashion Institute so she can become a designer and start her own line.But shortly after arriving in Stony Creek, a freak storm sets her on a dangerous path: right in the middle of vampires, demons, and age-old secrets. The only person she can trust? Adrian, the vampire who rescued her. Problem is, he has to pretend to be her boyfriend in order to keep his status as her personal bodyguard under wraps. And in a small town, it's not long before some secrets get real big.

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If You're Not A Twilight Fan, I'd Look Elsewhere, Despite The Hype.

I normally do not write unfavorable reviews. I'm a writer myself, and I don't like putting negativity onto other writers when most of the time, all the reader needs to do is not read any other books by that author. However, I bought this book because it was, largely, misrepresented by both the favorable reviews, and the cover, and I wish I could get my money back, so I'd like to write an articulate review to try and save other people who might be just as let down after reading it as I was. If you're into this kind of book, buy it, review it favorably, I wish all the best to Ms. Temple, and hope she's writing for a long time to come. I just probably won't be one of her readers.

Some of my annoyance involves things that have nothing to do with the writing, for example, the fact that the title and cover design, which is what originally drew me to the book have literally nothing whatsoever to do with the story. Literally nothing. I know authors don't have a lot of choice in their covers (and I might not understand why an author chose a particular title, but I'm not criticizing that) but my point is, do not buy this book for the cover alone without understanding the story, because you might end up very disappointed.

In the simplest terms, Velvet, is Twilight Fanfiction. Some of the reviews say things like it felt a teeny bit like Twilight, or that they could tell it was influenced by Twilight. They're grossly understating things. If you've read Twilight, then nothing, and I mean literally nothing in this book will surprise you. It is, I can honestly say, the closest book to Twilight, besides Twilight itself, that I've ever read. Some reviews said how much better it was, but I disagree, at least in large part. The grammar was good, the writing was better, in many respects, but it was still a good 200 pages too long for the story, and that story was no 'better' than Twilight. So if you adored Twilight, read it, if you did not, I would avoid.

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I really did go into this book with very high hopes. Even the 'most helpful' critical review promised 'a twist that made the story seem new' and 'a twisty storyline that will keep you guessing'. Frankly, no. As I've already said this book so closely mirrors Twilight that it's not even possible for someone who's read Twilight to be surprised. We've got a complete average, not special girl, Caitlin, who's new to town, and mysterious, untouchable town heartthrob Adrian. The two meet, and Adrian starts talking to Caitlin, despite that he's always ignored everyone else. He's a vampire (but to add a twist 'half demon', not that it makes sense, since his father was a demon, but his mom a human. Where the 'vampire' half comes from is never explained) and he's got the hots for her, but he's not allowed to love humans, and oh, by the way, his demon father is now obsessed with impregnating her - why, is not understood, revenge, maybe. So then Adrian fake-dates Caitlin so they can be together. His family lives in a mansion and is incredibly rich, his sister has visions about Caitlin, and there's a Council who rules the vampires. One of Adrian's bothers doesn't like Caitlin, the other loves her. Do you see where I'm going here? Twilight fan fiction, nothing more.

As far as my deeper complaints go I'm just going to list a few.

Caitlin is billed as an upcoming fashion designer. There is nothing more to this part of her character than her 'sketching things' 'sewing better than anyone' and 'planning to go to design school. Tim Gunn is mentioned in the first sentence, which is the end-all of the designer/fashion industry references. All expensive sweaters are cashmere, and if a guy wears them, he's gay. No design houses are mentioned by name, fabrics are described as 'the fabrics I like to work with are ridiculously expensive' and nothing more, and Caitlin knows that Adrian is wearing 'expensive jeans because they were the type of jeans I would design if I were a menswear designer' which shows the reader nothing about designer jeans.

Caitlin complains that she can't afford to fix her sewing machine because she's broke and doesn't have a job. She never tries to get a job, either. Adrian literally builds a sewing room for her, and stocks it with the most fabulous bolts of fabric one can buy. Caitlin makes the dress that she wears to *the event* out of green velvet that anyone could buy anywhere, which doesn't say much for her fashion career.

Caitlin spends an exorbitant amount of time being angry. At everyone. And everything. She's so angry about stuff that's never really articulated (yes, her parents are dead, but is she angry at life? Angry at fate?) that often times, the story is eclipsed by the fact that she's, just, angry. Also, she 'accidentally' almost commits suicide, which, well, that's not funny, and it's never actually addressed in the book.

Also, along the same trigger lines, there is a pseudo-rape scene. I say pseudo because 1) It's not actually brought to conclusion, the attacker is interrupted, and 2) Caitlin actually *likes* it, because you know, Adrian's dad is a demon, and he seduced her into wanting it. This is never addressed, besides the fact that Caitlin blames herself and is all torn up about it. Not because she almost got RAPED, but because she 'wanted it, of course she'd kissed him, because Adrian had been shoving her away, and she just wanted contact and whatever'. Yeah, not a fan of that s***. Ever.

Despite that the author set Caitlin up as a 'loner' type of girl, who's not popular, not pretty, not smart, not particularly awesome at anything, everyone at the new school instantly loves her and she proceeds to go around with a herd of girls, who constantly make fun of her for not 'doing it' with Adrian, and buy her expensive lingerie to wear for him, and joke about how 'Sex can't fix everything? Sure it can!'

Despite all of the above, Caitlin manages to fall head over heels in love with Adrian despite that she's only ever *really* kissed him once, and half the time, he's acted like a dick to her 'to protect her'. Several reviews commented on the swoon-worthy romance and 'sexual tension' but there is no romance, and there is no sexual tension. I mean, there's not even any description of Adrian physically reacting to the fact that he's spooning with a girl he's super attracted to. I mean, you don't *have* to have sex, but trust me, if you spoon with a guy, things happen that he can't necessarily control. Not every time, maybe, but in the book, Caitlin and Adrian basically slept together for MONTHS. Yeah, there would be some sort of awkwardness at some point.

Beyond all of this, there were random, fragmented and odd things that I presume are supposed to be foreshadowing of the next book, or something. Caitlin's last name is Holte, but when she goes to homeroom for the first time, the teacher calls her Caitlin Master, which she firmly corrects, but it's never mentioned again in the entire book. The *why* of why Adrian's dad is obsessed with getting Caitlin pregnant is never answered. The name of Adrian's dad is never given although it's alluded to ominously several times. His father - during the big fight - insists that the Council wanted him to kill Caitlin because 'of what she is' but exactly 'what she is' is never revealed. Nor is it ever revealed why Adrian is supposed to be guarding her, since every vampire but him is completely indifferent to humans in general. There are a number of things that Caitlin never learns because it's 'against the Council's rules. Lots and lots of disarticulated crumbs that mean literally nothing to the reader because they were tossed out then abandoned throughout the story. Perhaps some of this awkwardness can be attributed to Temple being a debut author, but it only makes a poorly paced story that much more random.

The writing wasn't horrible, I would pick up another book by Temple West, just not one I had to pay for. But the combination of literally nothing new or surprising narrows the scope of this book to only Twilight fans, or, perhaps, people who have never read Twilight, and like that sort of thing. For me, I felt as though the book was the same story with a different wrapper. People talk about how Fifty Shades was Twilight fan fiction, and Fifty was not something I would have necessarily read and then thought 'Omg, it's Twilight for adults!' With Velvet, by page 15, I knew it was literally a remake of Twilight, but I kept reading in hopes that I was wrong. I wasn't.
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***Review posted on The Eater of Books! blog***

Velvet by Temple West
Book One of the Velvet series
Publisher: Swoon Reads
Publication Date: May 12, 2015
Rating: 4 stars
Source: ARC sent by the publisher

Summary (from Goodreads):

First rule of dealing with hot vampire bodyguards? Don't fall in love.

After losing both her parents before age seventeen, aspiring designer Caitlin Holte feels like her whole world has been turned upside down, and that was before the terrifying encounter with a supernatural force. Then, she learns that her hot bad-boy neighbor, Adrian—who might have just saved her life—is actually a half-demon vampire.

Suddenly Caitlin is stuck with a vampire bodyguard who feels that the best way to protect her is to become her pretend boyfriend. Trouble is, Caitlin is starting to fall in love for real, while Adrian can never love a human. Caitlin trusts Adrian to keep her safe from his demon father, but will he be able to protect her heart?

What I Liked:

I honestly had no idea what to expect when I received Velvet for review. I remember browsing through Macmillan’s catalog and seeing the book, and something about this book made me pause. I’ve been on an anti-vampire streak for years, probably since about 2009 ish (that’s about six years, woah). So when I saw the word “vampire” in the synopsis, I should have been deterred, right? But I also saw the world “bodyguard”, and I was curious. Ultimately, I gave this book a shot with absolutely no expectations, and I’m glad I did!

Caitlin just moved to Stony Creek, New York, after her mother died a few days ago. Her father has been dead for years. So she’s living with her mother’s sister now, an aunt, uncle, and cousin that she never knew. They never came to visit her mother when her mother was sick. Caitlin is still grieving, and pushes away her family. She has an emotional meltdown in a forest, and something strange happens, involving a boy who saves her. Caitlin begins school in Stony Creek, and becomes friends with Trish. But the boy who saves her also goes to the school. Caitlin doesn't remember what happened to her, but she remembers him – Adrian. Soon, she’s caught up in a life she never thought would exist. She has a vampire bodyguard, trying to keep her safe from a demon who is absolutely nuts. Caitlin never meant to fall in love with Adrian, but somewhere along the line, she did. But is she just a duty to him, someone to protect? And can he keep her safe from a seemingly inevitable and hopeless fate?

When I first started reading the book, I remember thinking, oh my gosh this is going to be a rip-off of Twilight. UGH. There are definitely some elements that parallel. Like a vampire male and human female together in high school. Female recently arrives, catches his attention like no other (and he catches her attention). Suddenly they're seen everywhere, and the aloof Adrian de la Mara and the new girl Caitlin Holte are inseparable. Sometimes he rescues her, and acts really protective.

Despite these similarities, I wouldn't say that this book is a rip-off from that blockbuster series, nor is it fan-fiction or what have you. There is a lot of humor to this book, and there is angst, but legitimate angst (unlike Twilight). Caitlin's mother died just days before this book begins. She's allowed angst for the whole series!

I think I liked Caitlin a lot! She's a bit reserved, very angry, feisty, caring in her own way. She is angry with her aunt and uncle, for never visiting her mother when she was sick. Caitlin finds it hard to forgive them and move on, which is understandable. Caitlin is tougher than she lets on, and deals with finding out Adrian is a vampire, and that a demon is after her, pretty well. What's more, she comes to care for Adrian's broken little brother, Lucian, who was taken by Adrian's father into a demon world when Lucian was really little. Lucian is a little... messed up. But Caitlin is sweet to Lucian from the start, and cares about him.

Adrian was difficult to read in the beginning of the story, but I grew to like him pretty quickly. He's pretty sweet himself, though he does have a caveman streak at times. I constantly wondered, why her, throughout the first part of the story, but when we got the explanation about the demon after Caitlin, everything starts to make sense. Adrian is a nice bad boy, though he's waaaay older (obviously, vampire), forever young, and restricted by tons of vampire rules.

The explanation about the demon being after Caitlin makes sense, and isn't cliche. It isn't because she's gorgeous (she might be, she might not be), or because she has some sort of immunity to vampires/demons (she doesn't). Caitlin isn't anything special. The demon is after her for a purely coincidental reason, and to me, that reason made sense and wasn't too cliche. Basically, the story was well-developed and very interesting!

There is romance, of course. Caitlin is drawn to Adrian, at first because she vaguely remembers that he carried her home (in the first few pages of the book, no spoilers), but then in school, because he's gorgeous and a bit antisocial and has an air of mystery about him. Adrian is given the duty of protecting Caitlin fairly quickly, so we're sure that it's a job for him. Since this book is written in first-person, limited to Caitlin, we never know when Adrian falls for Caitlin. But Caitlin lusts after Adrian, and eventually, falls for him. The lust-turned-love feelings totally worked in this book. I loved seeing the two of them wrestle with their growing feelings - and their attraction to each other. Of course, there are vampire rules, and Adrian is a good vampire. But there is no shortage of chemistry and romance in this book!

The ending of this book is quite dramatic! There are some things that made me cringe, some things that made me sad, and some things that, well, totally heated up this book. The ending has a bit of everything in it - right until the end, when a huge bombshell is dropped. The ending is slightly cliffhanger-y, but involving a secondary character. Meaning, the protagonists aren't part of the cliffhanger. Someone else is! In any case, it's an ending in which you'll want the next book, but it's not an aching, cruel need. It's more like a gimmee-asap-I'll-wait-not-so-patiently need.

What I Did Not Like:

Mmm, I can't think of anything at the moment. Perhaps the Twilight parallels were a little too much, in the beginning? I can see why some people got frustrated with the book initially. It does have a Twilight vibe at first. But that kind of disappears as the story goes on. In my opinion.

Would I Recommend It:

Coming from the girl that stayed away from vampire books for years on end... yes, I would! I can definitely see why the Swoon Reads imprint of Macmillan picked up this series - it's humorous yet dark, cute yet sexy, lighthearted yet heart-stopping. This one is definitely worth the read, if only to get your swoon on!

Rating:

4 stars. I'm glad I gave this one a chance, on a whim. I had no expectations and had read no reviews nor seen any feedback, and I'm really glad that was the case. This one was a fresh read for me, and it really worked! I can't wait to read the sequel.
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Reads like bad Twilight fan fiction

This book is a Twilight knockoff. I knew this going in, but since I fell hard for Twilight when it came out I figured a little something similar might be fun--and it was, for the first hundred pages or so. After that, it became derivative and tedious.

First, lets go through the Twilight checklist:
-A girl (Caitlin) moves to a small town to live with family she barely knows.
-She immediately catches the eye of the lethally hot loner (Adrian) that all the girls want.
-After witnessing an inhuman feat and Adrian leaps in to rescue her from some unwanted attention, Caitlin learns he's a vampire
-Adrian tries to stay away from her and even tries to be a jerk to protect her for her own good
-Adrian's eyes change color, he's rich, and lives with his family of beautiful loners,
-Adrian has a sister who has visions
-The sister has a vision about Caitlin in danger so the whole family decides to protect her
-Adrian sneaks into her room each night
-So. Many. More.

But honestly, I was fine with the initial setup, and the writing wasn't bad (it was intentionally funny in places), what killed this book for me was the non-Twilight stuff and the overwhelming need for an editor to cut all the extraneous stuff. This book is close to 400 pages which is about 200 pages too long. It drags, big time. If someone told me this book started out as Twilight fan fiction, I wouldn't doubt it for a second. It feels like the authors just wrote extremely long, meandering chapters to meet some arbitrary word count. And as for the non-Twilight stuff involving a demon trying to impregnate teenage girls and really unsettling nightmares, blech. It was creepy with a big side of eww.

Also, cliffhanger. Yep, this is the start of a series.
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Best Vampire book all year!

Dude.

So this is what Twilight should have been.

Debut author Temple West’s vampire danger story is filled with likeable characters, danger, mystery likeable characters and (wait for it!) a PLOT. That’s right friends.

Caitlin’s mom has just died forcing her to move in with an aunt, uncle and cousin she barely knows. And of course, she meets a mysterious gorgeous neighbor who happens to be a vampire. And… her bodyguard.

I loved Caitlin. She has trouble dealing with her grief, lashing out and just trying to make it through the day. Despite her not so cheery attitude, she still manages to grab some friends. She’s talented too. And not in the “oh I’m amazing look at me.” She sews! (I do too) and knits! (same here) and embroiders! (not so much) But that’s what I love about her. She’s different. She makes things with her hands, she’s creative. She wants to be a designer. I’m not just saying it because I also really like the lost art of crafting, but I really appreciated how different she is from other heroines out there. She is not special, or particularly pretty. She’s normal, likes to sew and is going through a really hard time. (One note: I do wish there was a little more sewing/crafting mentioned in the book towards the end when she gets back into it. There doesn’t seem to be enough only a scene or two to further.)

Anyway, so Caitlin is cool and I would have probably been her friend.

Then we get to Adrian, hot vampire extraordinaire. What’s not to love about a super strong bodyguard vampire who likes humans even though he’s forbidden to get attached. Adrian is far from perfect and yes, he is a bit lurky. But he does have a valid reason (His demon father is after Caitlin and can disguise himself as anyone.) He is her bodyguard. He does allow her to have a life without him. And he’s a secret nerd! Really, Adrian is trying to get a handle on all of his new emotions without letting on that he might be feeling them to his crazy vampire family.

Oh yeah, did I mention them? They’re like crazy. I love it.

Listen, I know the YA lit world is overrun by vampire paranormal romances. But TRUST ME. Velvet is fun and very entertaining with snappy dialogue, awesome characters and some solid teen angst.

I have an ARC but I’ve already pre-ordered my finished copy on Amazon. I want it sitting on my shelf with my favorites. I’ve already started recommending it to my friends.

Ms. West, please write fast. That ending kinda killed me.
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Couldn't Stand the Heroine

It may be that I'm just too old for this but I could not take another minute of this ungrateful heroine's whining. What a nasty little piece of work this girl is. I just couldn't stand her and her miserable personality made it impossible for me to get through this story. Instead of having sympathy for the blow that life has dealt her, I couldn't care less. The cover is rather pretty and it's a shame because I was in the mood for a good paranormal romance. Better luck next time.
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I really wanted to like this book more.

ARC/Young Adult Paranormal: There is a lot of teenage angst in this book; along with absent parenting, drinking, an incompetent police department, and sexiness. This book hasn’t not come out yet so there will be no spoilers, but my feelings about the book.

I am not young, but if I was, I would have loved this book. I liked the heroine, Catlin, but as an adult, I wanted to sit her down and scold some of her decisions. The book begins with her going to live with her aunt and uncle after her mother’s death after a long illness. Catlin’s first thought is to leave when she’s 18 (she’s only 16) to be on her own and I think how naive she is. I remember that naivety before leaving home. This really helped me identify with not only the main character, but most of the characters, except Adrian. I’m not spoiling anything if you read the back of the book, that Adrian is a half-breed vampire/demon. From the beginning, he is overprotective of Catlin, but keeps his distance. And of course, he goes to high school. I didn’t like his reasoning for protecting her. Why not let her in harm’s way; he’s a demon after all and the other person he’s protecting is more important to him.

I read the first 100 pages, but I had to put it down and read a grown-up book (The Accident) because I had just finished another YA book, Cemetery Boys and I felt it was unfair that I was comparing the two since each protagonist started the books with a huge loss. The next 300 pages of Velvet went quicker with me trying to get to the part where the title Velvet was coming from. Understanding that she sews, I just knew it was a metaphor for something.

Comparison to Twilight: Yes, there is a comparison to be made: supernatural, parental units with a blind eye to the feelings and actions of a teenager, and star-crossed lovers. I will say that there is no ending, per say. The book is part of a trilogy or series and I left the last page not caring if I read the next book or not. I really wanted to like this book, but it was 150 pages too long and just okay.
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Great Read!!

So great!!! I couldn't put it down :)
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Fun Spin on the Vampire Genre

This was a great read that was full of laughs, action, and the sweetest romance. I know the vampire genre these days gets a bad rap but this is definitely a must-read. There is so much to love with this book, and it's just an overall good time! With a seemingly worn-out genre, I loved Ms. West's take on the vampire, and it definitely made for some very funny moments. There are still classic elements to her vampires, but there is also a lot of original elements that make for an interesting read. It is never dull or tedious to read (like something you've read repeatedly before). Ms. West's writing is simply wonderful. You would never guess that she is a debut author. The story flew by, even though it's close to 400 pages, and I simply never wanted to stop reading. I was so happy when I found out that this was going to be a series, and I am definitely interested to see where the story goes in the next book!

While at first I wasn't totally in love with Caitlin, our main character. I did understand that she was going through a tough time, with her mom just dying and having to pack up her life and go somewhere she never wanted to go. However, I did think there were times she was kind of cruel and her outbursts were uncalled for/unnecessary. However, it is understandable. I think anyone would react the same. So I gave her the benefit of the doubt, and ended up loving her character. Mind you, I loved her by only a couple chapters in, but still. I think the biggest thing to remember with her character is that she is human. We feel things that sometimes we can't even explain. So we act in a way that might not be characteristic of our usual behavior. And that is what Caitlin does. This was the beauty of her character. Ms. West never lets us forget that Caitlin's humanness, and Caitlin also never loses that humanness either. She is a very fleshed out character, and very well-developed. Ultimately though, Caitlin is snarky, sassy, and hilarious. She had me cracking up so many times. At the end of the day, Caitlin has a huge heart with a feisty attitude to match. Nothing will stand in her way, and she never backs down from a fight.

I adored Adrian from the minute we met him. He is very swoonworthy, and you will easily fall in love with him. While he did make me want to smack him a couple times in the middle/end, I knew why he acted the way he did. Nevertheless, he is an extremely likeable character, and will quickly find a place in your heart. Adrian is nerdy, awkward, and HOT, but also fiercely loyal and protective. He will do anything and everything to protect those he cares about, and nothing will stand in his way. Like Caitlin said...

“Why would I fall in love with you? You’re just a hot, closet-nerd vampire with a bazillion dollars and a Harley. There’s absolutely nothing attractive about you.”

(just one of the many hilarious lines in this novel)

I did love the slow-growing nature of Adrian and Cait's relationship. She didn't immediately fall in love with him and swoon every single time he opened his mouth. They grew from friendship to something more. These two are meant to be together. They are perfect for each in every way, and balance each other out quite nicely. They're banter was perfect and no one can deny the chemistry between them. I loved every single scene of their flirting, and it made for many great, endearing moments while reading.

I definitely recommend this book if you are a fan of vampire novels. While the author was inspired by Twilight, Ms. West puts her own spin on the vampire genre and weaves a fun story that will stick with you long after reading. You will be left begging for the next book as soon as possible! I know I am!

Happy reading :)
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I LOVED this book so much!!! I thought it was just so natural and lovely and exceptional! I found the writing and the dialogue to be so real, so up-to-date and modern, like how any teenager living right now would act and behave and think. I LOVED THE DIALOGUE!! This book was filled with hilarious lines which will have you laughing out loud! Which brings us to the characters!

Caitlin, the main character whose head we are in, is absolutely amazing. I felt like she was very real, with her dialogue and her behavior, she's an exceptional main character, and it was a pleasure being inside her head! I loved her!

Adrian, the Hott Nerd Vampire, oh my my, I fell in love with him too! He was just so cute and adorable!!!

Lucian, aka Frankie, will always have a spot in my heart! His character was written exceptionally well!! I absolutely fell in love with that little guy!!!

The whole book was filled with Funny, Smile Provoking, Aww-Filled scenes, and I literally loved every line of it! I loved how the author went about doing vampires and demons; I thought it was really unique! Vampires are born and not made! I just loved the whole book so much - the beginning, the middle, the end - every scene, every chapter - those amazing characters who are gonna stay with me!!! This is going to be a favorite trilogy; I already know it! I cannot wait to read more, and I'm so gonna reread this many times!

Some, (and only some), of my favorite scenes:

- CHRISTMAS EVE - Caitlin's gift to Lucian had my heart melting - flawless, brilliant, awwwww!

- The SHOWER, BATH, & FIGHT - I was just waiting for the fight to happen and was prepared to be so mad if it didn't, and then Caitlin did me proud, blowing up, calling him a dick, and then refusing to let him kiss her ... and then them coming together ... it was PERFECT, and I was happy!!!
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I loved Velvet.

I received Velvet in return for an honest review as part of the tour hosted by FFBC. Caitlin hasn’t had the best year her mother lost her battle with cancer. She’s been forced to leave the only home she knows to live with her aunt who never had anything to do when her mother was sick. Caitlin isn’t handling the loss of her mother well, and after leaving the house one afternoon she catches the attention of two strangers one who wants to use her and the other who wants to protect her. In order to keep her alive, Adrian will need to pretend to be her boyfriend so he can protect her from a demon.

While it starts out innocent enough just a plan to keep Caitlin safe they find themselves falling for the other spending every chance together. Unfortunately for Caitlin she doesn’t have a future with Adrian after all he’s a half-demon vampire who can’t die and will live forever plus the council won’t let them get attached to humans. Thanks to Adrian she is settling into life even making friends, even stopped being hostile to her aunt. Suddenly the dreams start and things change but with the help of Adrian she even learns to handle them until the night everything changed. Will Caitlin and Adrian be able to survive the demon who is hunting her? What about after when they have to end their fake relationship?

I instantly connected to Caitlin right from the start she’s dealing with some tough emotions and it isn’t easy to get over losing the only home she’s known. It’s been rough watching her mother deal with the loss of her father when she was little wasn’t easy either but she’s been given a new start and she learns to make it work. I loved Adrian he’s exactly what she needed in her life and she is what he needed. They each didn’t have the best childhoods but I know that they will figure it out in the future.

I wasn’t sure what to expect the synopsis sounded really interesting and the cover is beautiful. I picked up Velvet with high hopes it was the first sentence that sealed the deal I was hooked. Typically it takes at least a page or couple chapters for me to be hooked to a book but it’s the opening sentence. I loved the characters they are easy to connect with I found myself sucked into Caitlin’s world right away. I enjoyed that Velvet while a vampire/demon story is unique the concept I found refreshing compared to other YA vampire romance novels. Velvet is one of those novels that is hard to put down loaded with action, romance, and just enough suspense to keep you on the edge of your seat. I like an emotional story that makes you cheer the characters on and Velvet doesn’t disappoint. My only complaint is that it’s a cliffhanger and I need the next one yesterday so I can see what happens next. I loved Velvet and can’t wait for the next one.
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