Transformers: Exodus: The Official History of the War for Cybertron (The Transformers)
Transformers: Exodus: The Official History of the War for Cybertron (The Transformers) book cover

Transformers: Exodus: The Official History of the War for Cybertron (The Transformers)

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$49.08
Format
Hardcover
Pages
288
Publisher
Del Rey
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ISBN-13
978-0345519856
Dimensions
7 x 1.25 x 10 inches
Weight
1.1 pounds

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From Booklist Transformers: Exodus is precisely the origin story that the franchise needed. It’s entertaining, filled with the sort of epic battles Transformers lend themselves to, and keeps readers breathless with anticipation even though we already know how it ends. Megatronus was a gladiator until he got his name and started thinking about the way Cybertron’s caste system diminished the bots’ potential. Orion Pax was a data worker—a librarian, really—under the master archivist. The archivist is more than he seems, and provides a great deal of context for the history of Cybertron, and a few key deus ex machina twists. Orion Pax, now known as Optimus Prime, is an honest character, who never asks for the greatness that is forced upon him; Megatron, on the other hand, is an egomaniacal tyrant. But in the framework of a political revolution and the civil war that overthrows a system that had practically calcified, there are terrible fights, friendships made and broken, and the beginnings of a genuine epic; above all, it’s fun to read. --Regina Schroeder Transformers: Exodus is precisely the origin story that the franchise needed. It’s entertaining, filled withthe sort of epic battles Transformers lend themselves to, and keeps the reader breathless with anticipationeven though we already know how it ends.xa0 [I]n the framework of a political revolution andthe civil war that overthrows a system that had practically calcified, there are terrible fights, friendshipsmade and broken, and the beginnings of a genuine epic; above all, it’s fun to read. —Booklist Alexander C. Irvine has written fourteen books, including Buyout, The Narrows , and A Scattering of Jades , which won him the Crawford Award for best new writer. He was a finalist for the Campbell Award for best new writer and a Pushcart Award nominee for his short story “Snapdragons.” Irvine’s short fiction has appeared in the Vestal Review, Fantasy & Science Fiction, Alchemy , and The Year’s Best Science Fiction , among others. He lives in Portland, Maine. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. Chapter One The Hall of Records in Iacon was closed to the public. In the archive stacks, at a workstation where he had been installed following the tradition and practice of his caste, sat a monitor named Orion Pax. He was tapped into the Communications Grid that invisibly spanned all of Cybertron, monitoring and recording every communication that passed through the Grid. Those that met certain criteria, he listened to, annotated, categorized, and saved in a different sector of the DataNet.Like much of the rest of the great city of Iacon, the Hall was constructed of a golden-hued alloy that lent itself to the curving architectural style that predominated elsewhere in the city. The architects of Iacon had favored towering, monumental buildings topped by conical structures that looked as if they might take off. The entire city was a monument to aspirations . . . only there were no aspirations among Cybertronians anymore. They were born into a caste, a place that they would maintain for their entire lives. The civilization of Cybertron existed in a perfect stasis. It had been that way for millennia. Iacon was in some ways a memorial of a Cybertronian culture that had not existed in the memory banks of any existing Cybertronian.Inside the Hall of Records, another kind of stasis existed. The history of Cybertron, from the mythical ages of battles among the Thirteen Primes across the billions of cycles, to the latest transmissions on the latest bands Orion Pax was charged with monitoring-all of it was here. All of it was categorized, cataloged, stored, indexed, and cross-indexed. After that, save for when the High Council or another authority got interested in a threat to civic order, the ever-growing collections in the Hall of Records were ignored.Once-or so Orion Pax understood from reading in the older records- Cybertronian civilization had maintained links with other planets that surrounded other stars. Via a network of Space Bridges constructed with technology long abandoned, populations of Cybertronians on far-flung planets had stayed in contact with Cybertron. Gigantion, Velocitron, even the Hub, all were once part of a greater Cybertronian culture. Now the Space Bridges were all long since collapsed and degraded. The last of them, which hung in the skies between the two moons and the Asteroid Belt, had not been used since a long, long time ago. Even Orion Pax, who could ordinarily dig anything out of the records of Teletraan-1 and the DataNet, was not sure exactly how long it had been.Now a Cybertronian like Orion Pax would not go to the stars. He would not fight nobly for the great ideals of the Primes. A Cybertronian like Orion Pax would monitor, assess, and catalog transmissions on the Grid because that is what Cybertronians of his caste did. Other castes built and engineered, governed, made laws . . . or fought in the gladiatorial pits.From there, oddly enough, came some of the more interesting transmissions Orion Pax had heard lately. He was not a great follower of the arena, but even he knew of the most recent champion Megatronus. Quite a bold action, to assume that name-it was not just any bot who could carry the weight of one of the Thirteen Primes, whose deeds still echoed across the megacycles of history. This Megatronus had not lost a match since the early days of his career in the arena. The gladiators began with no names, and most of them ended that way as well; Megatronus had claimed not just a name, but a name that could not help but capture the attention of even those castes who pretended to pay no attention to such degraded entertainments as gladiatorial combat.The sight of two-or more-Cybertronians tearing each other apart was something that few would admit enjoying. Yet the pits in the lower levels of Kaon were one of Cybertron's most popular tourist destinations, and the Grid was alive with broadcasts and rebroadcasts of the various tournaments that were constantly going on. The only industry in Kaon that could rival gladiatorial entertainment was recovery and reconstruction. The mechasurgical engineers of that city- and its gladiatorial rival, Slaughter City-were without peer. Arena combat was illegal across Cybertron, but the High Council in its wisdom understood that a population confined by caste needed certain outlets. So the pits in Kaon, which had begun long ago as a diversion for the workers in the great foundries there, were now entrenched, even if technically outside the law of Cybertron. In Slaughter City it was much the same.So it was odd that from Kaon and Slaughter City, Orion Pax should be hearing and seeing arguments he could only call philosophical. And they were coming from the greatest of the illicit champions of Kaon's pits: this Megatronus.The transmissions were fragmentary and distorted, originating as they did from deep inside the metallic bowels of Kaon. Between those lower levels and the Grid receptors, they picked up enormous interference from the industrial processes that drove Kaon . . . and, Orion Pax knew, the civilization of Cybertron. Nothing could be created without the raw materials first being refined. That happened in Kaon and the Badlands that stretched between it and the Hydrax Plateau. As long as those Badlands fueled the needs of Cybertron, the High Council would keep turning a blind optic to the gladiator pits.Orion Pax wondered how long that would continue. He listened to the most recent of Megatronus's transmissions, fingers hovering over the interface that would determine where he cataloged it."Are Cybertronians not all made of the same materials? My alloys are the same as those in the frame of a High Councilor; my lubricants are the same as those that lubricated the joints of the Thirteen themselves!" Megatronus's voice scraped and rasped like one of the great machines in the factories of Kaon. Orion Pax looked up and down the row of other Cybertronians of the same caste as he. All of them would spend their careers monitoring and cataloging, feeding the vast databases of Iacon. This was the way the civilization of Cybertron had been since long before the creation of Orion Pax.And yet they were made of the same materials as the Archivist Alpha Trion, or any member of the High Council.Would a Councilor spend his life monitoring transmissions?"We are individuals! Once we were free!" Megatronus's voice scraped through Orion Pax's head. What would his fellow monitors think if they could hear?They would report this Megatronus in a nanoklik. That's what they would do, Orion Pax thought. As if in reply, Megatronus said, "The High Council, if they heard me now, would quietly render me into slag. Do not doubt it. They may be listening now. If I vanish, carry on my work. Soundwave, you and Shockwave will carry on. You are my trusted lieutenants."A second voice came in. "Lieutenants? Are you now the general of an army, Megatronus?"Orion Pax listened harder. He ran a check on the new voice-it was neither Shockwave nor Soundwave. He had heard them before, and had records and database entries for each.But this new voice was not in the index he maintained to keep track of Megatronus's associates. Who was it?It was not part of Orion Pax's job to investigate. He monitored, observed, recorded. Investigators were of another caste.He could, however, report to Alpha Trion, the overseer. Orion Pax sampled the new voice and spent a few cycles compiling a report. It wouldn't do to present himself to Alpha Trion without a good reason, and proof of how good the reason was.The Archivist of Iacon, Alpha Trion, was far older than Orion Pax, who had heard stories that he had existed since the great age of Space Bridge-fueled expansion, the high point of Cybertronian civilization. What that must have been like, to be able to ride the dimensional bridges to other stars . . ."Orion Pax," Alpha Trion said. "What brings you here to interrupt my work?""I seek advice." Orion activated the recording of Megatronus. Alpha Trion put down the antiquated stylus he used to make entries in the single book that sat on his desk. The Archivist of Iacon had databases and endless hard-copy records of virtually everything that had ever happened in the history of Cybertron, yet he chose stylus and book as his interface. Like many of the older Cybertronians Orion Pax knew, Alpha Trion had grown eccentric.When the recording had played out of a wall-mounted speaker and Alpha Trion had taken his standard moment to tap his stylus on the desk and think over various potential responses, the Archivist said, "Megatronus.""Why has he named himself after a mythical being?" Orion Pax asked."If the old stories are true, Megatronus believed until the end that he would be vindicated," Alpha Trion said. "He believed himself to be doing what was right even if his methods destroyed much of what he professed to believe.""Not much of an example if you're plotting a revolution," Orion Pax said.With a dry chuckle, Alpha Trion stood. "Indeed not. But perhaps that is not the only example to be taken from the deeds of Megatronus. Who is this upstart?""He has been a gladiator in Kaon. Like all of them, he began without a name, a worker who took to the arena as a way to glory. He has never lost, and his fame has grown to the point that few other gladiators will fight him one-on-one. Now it seems that he is no longer content to be the greatest gladiator in Kaon; he has grander ambitions.""Ambition," Alpha Trion echoed. "That is not a quality encouraged on Cybertron. As you know." He fell silent, and Orion Pax thought he had detected something of a wistful tone in the Archivist's voice.He waited, and after several cycles Alpha Trion spoke again. "Go back to your post, Orion Pax. Continue to listen. When you know what this Megatronus is planning, return to me and we will consult further."Chapter TwoAfter young Orion Pax had left him alone in the depths of the Hall of Records, Alpha Trion consid... Read more

Features & Highlights

  • For twenty-five years the colossal battle between Megatron and Optimus Prime has captivated Transformers fans around the world. Yet the full story of the conflict between the two most famous Transformers—everything that happened before
  • Optimus and Megatron arrived on planet Earth—has always been a mystery . . . until now. Here, for the first time told in its entirety, is the thrilling saga of Optimus and Megatron before they were enemies, before they even knew each other. “Freedom is every Cybertronian’s right!” After Megatron utters these immortal words,
  • the caste-bound planet of Cybertron is rocked to its foundations. Megatron, an undefeated gladiator thug, gives voice to the unspoken longings of the oppressed masses—and opens the mind of an insignificant data clerk to possibilities previously unthinkable.Long before becoming the honorable Optimus Prime, Orion Pax is a mere office underling, an unlikely candidate to answer an outlaw’s call to revolution. But Orion is determined to meet this defiant enemy of all that Cybertron stands for, no matter what he has to do, or how many laws he has to break.What happens between Orion Pax and Megatron forever changes the destiny of all Transformers. This gripping, action-packed novel reveals all the loyalties and treacheries, trust and betrayals, deadly violence and shining ideals, as well as the pivotal roles played by other characters, including Starscream, Sentinel Prime, Omega Supreme, and one of the thirteen original Primes, the last link to Cybertron’s glorious Golden Age.Discover how meek disciple Orion Pax becomes the fearless leader Optimus Prime; follow the tantalizing clues about the lost Matrix of Leadership and the lore surrounding it; find out why the two allies fighting a corrupt regime suddenly turn on each other, and what triggers their epic war.
  • Transformers: Exodus
  • provides everything fans ever wanted to know about one of the fiercest rivalries of all time.

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This is a joke, right?

I'll start with the positives about this book:

1. It was not written by Alan Dean Foster.
2. It was not written by Simon Furman.
3. There are NO humans at all in this book. (Yes, Hasbro, it's true: we want *robots* in our robot stories, fancy that!)

That's....uhhhh, about it.

Problems with this book, in random order--I am keeping anything potentially spoilery to within the first 50 or so pages:

1. Editing is non-existent. The prose was flabby and there's no real sense of conflict or scene. Scenes will 'happen', set off with hard-hiatuses, but will have no conflict or resolution in them. Things are repeatedly restated, taking up pagespace and time that might have better gone to setting, characterization and plot development.

2. Pacing is s-l-o-w. It's a bit over 250 pages but it seems to last forever (not helped, of course, by the flabby prose).

3. A lot of the characterization makes no sense. Alpha Trion is some spooky dude who keeps the entire history of Cybertron. We're told he can't read the future clearly, only glimpses. Yet he's...regularly befuddled by actions that have already happened--that should, technically, be in his little magic book. Orion's emotional shifts are laughably volatile--he's suspicious, but then he's chumming it up. And in a 'canon' that says (*several times*) that new mechs sort of wash up by the Well, why does Megatron keep calling Orion 'brother'? What does that even mean in this? (Worldbuilding fail!) Megatron, who is allegedly uneducated, is a rhetorical genius with an extensive vocabulary. Orion is a lowly clerk who gets away with internal sabotage without even getting punished by his boss, much less having, oh, like an internal qualm? And for those who love Optimus? Yeah, one of his big psychological turning point moments is that he wants to go to an amusement park but can't. The angst! The pathos!! Wait. This is the guy who becomes Optimus Prime?

(And don't even get me started on the forced cameos like Barricade, Blackout, Cliffjumper, etc.)

4. What canon is this? It directly contradicts movieverse, though it involves elements of IDW's Megatron Origin. One of my friends suggests it's a prequel for the upcoming cartoon, another says it's background for the recently released video game, but then admits it has nothing to do with the plot of the game other than the notion of 'Dark Energon'. So...is this a microcontinuity? It seems to bill itself as game-canon. Is it it's own thing? Why can't I tell? (If this is a harbinger of the quality of the upcoming cartoon? Count me *out*.)

5. It...contradicts itself at many points. I'll give you just one example.

Page 78. "Not even Starscream, who had spent much of his scientific career in the labs....". Okay, Starscream = scientist, right?

Then let's go to page 158. "See what?" Starscream asked. Neither Starscream nor Megatron were scientists."

Wait, what?

The real killer is that there are some really interesting concepts that could have been very cool if handled...better. The author clearly has no grasp, and certainly no love of the beloved Transformers characters, and it shows in every tedious page.

Look, I'm a long time fan of Transformers--I was one of the original Generation 1 fans, back 26 years ago. I've stood by this franchise through a lot. But this book is turning me into one of those fans who will insist that this is not 'my' canon. This is like...some sort of tolerance test by Hasbro to see how much they can get away with or something. Either that or this is some Thanatos-drive cry for attention from the franchise.

I've been led to believe that Hasbro's pretty involved and controlling of their franchise. Yet they let the sloppy writing, the bad characterization, the internal inconsistencies go?

In short? If you want to read some good Transformers fiction, and I *never* thought I'd say this, but you'd be better off looking at fanfiction than this hack drivel. I want my money back. No, heck with that: I want my Transformers back.
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The potential was there...

I was excited when I first picked this book up over the weekend. I love origin stories, and was interested how this one would tie in with the various continuities.

What I ended up reading was only a few steps away from being a jumbled mess.

Here are my main complaints:
1.) There is no sense of when events occur in relation to each other, other than that events in later chapters occur after those that occur in earlier chapters (for the most part). It was annoying trying to figure out if eons had passed or just days (or if events are occurring at the same time).
2.) The number of references to different continuities can get annoying. "Project Generation One"? Really? It felt like all the continuities got mixed up in a stew, but not everything mixed together properly.
3.) Did X transformer really just get thrown in for a random 1 paragraph mention? Why? How does this advance the plot? Does it reveal any new character motivations? Or is it just fanboy service?
4.) Alpha Trion's role as Yoda seemed ill-conceived. If he really was one of the 13 primes, shouldn't he have known all about Omega Supreme and how to activate him? Why didn't he reveal all about the Matrix, Vector Sigma, et al to Optimus in order to assist in the war? He seems eternally shackled to a caste that he was forced into by Sentinel Prime (who was the best character by far... actual character development!!! Shocker!).
5.) There's little indication after the early part of the book which character is being focused on. The points of view seem to jump around quite a bit, to the point where you're like "Megatron sounds like a good guy!" "Oh, wait, maybe that's Optimus..."

If the book were interspersed with vignettes of Sentinel Prime's thoughts, showing his development from a stagnant, cowardly leader, through his imprisonment and torture, out to his realization and subsequent redemption and death... that would be a much-stronger book.

I wanted to like this book. I really did. I just wish it was better-edited.
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How did this get published?

Let my start by saying that I don't like to review products I haven't used 100%, but I was unable to make it past page seventy of this book. It's really that bad.

Hasbro contracted Alex Irvine to write a book that would serve as a prequel to the War for Cybertron video game which in turn would be a prequel to the new Transformers Prime television series. Unfortunately for Hasbro both Irvin and High Moon Studios (the company contracted to develop the video game) had their own ideas. Unwilling to cooperate with Hasbro or each other, the book and the game had nothing to do with the series, and contradict each other as well. What was supposed to be one continuity has become an irreconcilable mess.

On top of this, the book itself is at best a rough draft. There are major continuity holes as early as chapter six. In a single conversation between Orion Pax and Megatronus, the setting changes inexplicably. At first they meet in person at a secure location. Mid-conversation Orion is back at the city and is talking over a vid-link, and then near the end of the conversation they are once again in person. For a novel that is supposed to emphasize the plot, this book fails miserably.

It's clear that this book was never edited, nor even read, prior to being published. It's an insult to the fanbase and to every struggling unpublished author out there that this garbage would see public release. Alex Irvine is an established writer as well as a college professor, so these errors don't make sense to come from it. It's possible it was brought on by a rushed release date, but it would've been nice if he'd at least taken the time to read the last paragraph he wrote before picking up where he left off.

In addition to that the novel has virtually no pace. Nothing is established and nothing happens as you wander from one lengthy conversation to the next. In addition to which the story displays absolutely no creativity in anything. If you've read any of the comics, watched any of the television shows, then you've already heard this story. Megatron, one of the greatest classic villains of all time, is nothing but a brute who copied his name from a feared transformer of legend (yes, according to the book, the Fallen was Megatronus Prime. Stifle your vomit if you can). Optimus Prime is Orion Pax, a curious data clerk with nothing to do. Other reviewers are correct; you'll find better written fanfictions on the internet.

Save your money, do not get this book!
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Overall, it was good

I have to admit, the reason I picked up this book is because I saw it chilling on a bookshelf at my local bookstore and it's Transformers related. Being a huge generation one fan, I decided that I would pick it up. I want to start out by acknowledging that there were good things about it and some things that were not so good but overall, I did enjoy the book.

Keep in mind that this is a history for the [[ASIN:B0030HIULQ Transformers: War for Cybertron]] video game. There are similarities to things that you may have seen in the 80's TV show but it is still quite different. Actually, If you are a fan of the original G1 80's show, you know that there were a lot of continuity issues with the show (in Season 1, Megatron comments that they built the Constructicons on Earth, in season 2, Omega Supreme knew them on Cybertron, and in Season 3, they built Megatron). Certain aspects of the 80's continuity have been "borrowed".

SPOILER ALERT

Since a number of people I talked to thought that this was an origin story for the original generation 1 show, I'll point out the differences.

Orion Pax is a data clerk in the Hall of Records. In the 80's show, they really didn't give any mention of who he was. In the show, after being badly damaged by a brutal attack from Megatron, he was rebuilt into Optimus Prime. In the book, he was never rebuilt, the council renames him Optimus Prime under the recommendation of Alpha Trion (and incidentally, was NOT rescued by the Aerialbots who had traveled back through time).

Megatron was a gladiator in the book. He didn't just pop up out of nowhere and start trashing everything like in the show. He had reason to rebel against Cybertronian society as it stagnated with its caste system. He and Orion Pax were friends until Orion was renamed Optimus Prime and given the title of Prime. Megatron felt betrayed by his friend.

The Aerialbots were Seeker jets under Starscream but defected to the Autobot side. They were not built on Earth.

Devastator is still the merge form of the Constructicons but the merge form itself was created by Shockwave.

Shockwave is a mad scientist, who is really twisted whereas in the show, he is a loyal drone for Megatron.

Transforming was developed after the start of the war between Autobots and Decepticons on the show, but it was present long before the war began in the book.

Now some similarities:

Prior to the start of the war and even the caste system, the Transformers had overthrown the Quintessons and tossed them off Cybertron.

Starscream began as a scientist in the early years on Cybertron and he did so in the book also. He is just as much of the plotting and power grabbing Decepticon as he is in pretty much every continuity, no surprise there.

Alpha Trion is an ancient Autobot who offers experience and guidance (one of the other reviewers compares him to Yoda). The show offered this too, although Alpha Trion is only in a handful of episodes and is explored in much more depth in the book.

The Transformers leave Cybertron due to the depletion of it's resources both in the book and in the show. The book gives the explanation as to how the resources were dwindled (the perversion of the core with Dark Energon by Megatron, the destruction of Energon wells, etc).

What you'll find with this book is that it seems to really expand and even re-write some of the weaker areas of the original 80's show's history. The author borrowed some things from other continuities, more I think just for some fun than anything else (Bumblebee's vocalizer was damaged by Megatron, as it was also prior to the events in the 2007 film, it doesn't really affect the continuity but it's just kind of an easter egg).

There were several quotes throughout the book that have popped up in Transformers lore over the years, i.e. the quote "One shall stand, one shall fall". The famous quote that goes back to being printed on the package for the Optimus Prime toy in the 1980's is here, "Freedom is the right of all sentient beings." Again, I believe these are easter eggs for those of us who have been following for a while.

There are some paradoxes in the story as have been indicated by other reviewers. Starscream is mentioned to be a scientist, then in a quick description, it is said that "Megatron and Starscream weren't scientists". Cybertronians were referred to as "people" on several occasions but there are no humans in this book (again, I realize that I'm not the first reviewer to point this out).

What it comes down to is this. As a long time Transformers Generation 1 fan, I enjoyed the book. There were some slow parts in the beginning but it picked up as I read on and really became quite exciting. Just understand that this is not exactly a 1980's origin story.
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Poorly written, poorly conceived

I have to say that this is a good book to avoid. I was excited to read it - I loved the War for Cybertron video game's story, and this was being billed as the prequel - but it turns out it's just a poorly written mess with no continuity, and infected by Michael Bay's movies.

I'm trying to stay vague enough to not spoil anything for you who still might want to read this - but just to warn you, the following might give some stuff away...

Just to add to how poorly this book is written (read the other reviews for more) - here's an example: chapter 6 ends with megaton with Orion as an attack hits. Chapter 7 says that when Megatrn heard about that attack, he was talking with Orion while Orion over the Grid, while they are across Cybertron from each other. They are clearly talking via TV. A page later, no wait, they're together. Two pages later - no wait, Orion is back home, I think, cuz he makes a call but... No he's with Megatron's troops... Confusing things like this happen all the time. At one point the character Ratbat shows up, talking and standing behind a podium ... And then ON the podium... If you know the old toys and cartoon, you might imagine the purple bat that changes into one of Soundwave's tapes, but there's no explanation at all until chapters later, when sure enough that's what it was.

The Transformers franchise storyline is a mess. It already was before Michael Bay came along - there was the cartoon storyline (that had it's own problems), the completely separate Marvel comic storyline, then much later came IDW and other's comics which muddled things further, and then Michael Bay, then the War for Cybertron game (which could agree with the cartoon, only excepting how the characters look).

And then this book comes out, claiming to be "official". First off, Hasbro, what's that even MEAN? This book sounds at first like it's setting up the video game storyline, which is great by me, but then suddenly half way through the book, in ONE chapter, the author ruins it all. He talks about the Allspark getting lost in space, and Bumblebee already knowing Optimus and losing his ability to speak. What??

This book could have been something great. It could have told a good story. But this author is terrible, and the book borrows chaotically from too many sources to even guess what universe it's supposed to be in. I wish Hasbro WOULD decide on an official Transformers cannon, but when they put the "official" stamp on the War for Cybertron game, AND on this book, and they don't agree with each other...

I would have put up with a lot of bad writing, if it had at least made some sense...
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Very disappointing.....

As a huge Transformer fan growing up as a child I couldn't wait to read what Hasbro was promoting as "The New Transformer Bible" Unfortunately what I got was a sloppy, boring, inconsistent pile of crap! By shoehorning a few classic names into the story as it went along, it felt like the author did no research on these characters what so ever... Not even Optimus Prime received any type of visual description....A retooled Orion Pax nood which was Optimus Primes origin in the original animated series would've fit nicely but instead they just take a "clerk" and decide to make him leader. And if the poor character development and contradicting continuity wasn't frustrating enough, the author spends huge amount of time building up the use of "dark energon" by the Decepticons which basically goes no where at the end of the novel.

You would think that with a history as rich as Transformers an origin story could write itself. But between this novel and that live actions franchise, they've proven that the Transformers lore should not be placed in the hands of amateurs.

Or this novels case, at least give it to someone who actually knew who the Transformers were...
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Loved Irvine's Exodus

The characters are more broad and likeable than ever before. Yes Irvine's novel brought me back in time to the Transformers cartoon episodes but the writing is exciting and brilliant. For those of us without the patience to wait for the next Batman movie or Transformers 3 why not enjoy a great novel about our favorite topic that flows like the wind. Great novel, great author, enjoy.
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Best Transformers novel yet!

As a fan of Transformers, I was excited when this book came out along with the video game it loosely tied into, War For Cybertron. But when friends of mine read it and told me how awful and fanfiction-y it was, I decided to put it off until later. Well, later came, and now that I've finished it (and its sequel, Exiles) I've gotta say I'm disappointed that I didn't read it earlier.

This novel is precisely what I've always wanted in the Transformers franchise: alien culture, political and moral dilemmas, a rich backstory with actual motivations (I'm looking at you, previous Megatron "backstories"), and giant alien robots fighting each other on alien landscapes. Alex Irvine was able to mesh together Cybertron's past and present in a way that wasn't jarring or confusing, and his fight scenes are more than satisfying. Landscapes shift, blows are traded - it's all very dynamic and very good.

Were there problems? Yes. The infamous "is Starscream a scientist or isn't he?" dilemma is one of them.

Another is the repeated use of "Six Lasers Over Cybertron". I can only imagine Alex Irvine used it so often because he was told to by Hasbro... or because he, like myself, found the name so ridiculous he had to use it repeatedly.

The thing a lot of people who absolutely hated this novel are missing, I think, is that the Transformers franchise exists to make money first and foremost, and that the author did not have as much creative license as, say, fan fiction writers. You know, considering someone is actually paying him to write. This novel kicked off the "reboot" of the Transformers lore that was overseen by Hasbro. If you've kept up on recent developments in the franchise, it's very obvious. The story of the Thirteen, Orion Pax and Megatron, the topography of Cybertron - all of this is featured in the novel, and all of it is from Hasbro.

In short, if you were confused about "continuity", you shouldn't be. It's a new one made up of a mixture of the old ones. If that makes you irrationally angry, you shouldn't read this novel.

IF, however, you're looking for a good Transformers novel to enjoy that isn't based on the Michael Bay movies, this is for you.

I absolutely adored the interactions between Orion Pax and Megatron - particularly as their relationship began to fall apart as Megatron became more power hungry and violent. The brief history of Cybertron that we get to see is intriguing... I wish there were more to it, but it feels a bit like a teaser in there that might lead to more material to be published later. I hope so! Starscream's predicament was handled particularly well I think. He's not quite a sympathetic villain, but he skirts the line. The author seems to be teasing us with "will-he-or-won't-he" situations where you never know if one day Starscream will defect to the Autobots, kill Megatron and make peace with the Autobots, or eventually become as corrupted and power-hungry as Megatron himself.

Overall, this book deserves far more praise than it has received from the ever-ungrateful Transformers fandom. If you won't pitch a fit over a couple of typos in a franchise that has received far worse quality over its lifetime, and think you might enjoy a good Cybertron-based history or your favorite characters, then pick this book up.
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Could have been much more...

Exodus was released in association with Transformers War for Cybertron, the game by High Moon Studios. It purports to be an official history of the Transformers, beginning from the rise of Megatron. Whilst the book draws on numerous aspects of the Transformer mythos and hence has a quarter century of heritage to start with, it unfortunately falls down at many points.

Since I'm an optimist at heart, I'll start with the good points. The characterizations of the two central characters of Megatron & OP are good - not outstanding, and not without contradictions, but we do at least get a solid story from their humble beginnings to where they end up as leaders of the two opposing sides, and the subsequent war. Hasbro (and I mean Hasbro rather than Irvine) makes an admirable attempt to add to their considerable efforts at tying together all continuities of Transformers, taking cues from many timelines, including examples such as Minicons, Prima, the 13 Primes, and the Allspark. The story ends at a very satisfactory point in time, opening it to other continuities.

Like most other reviewers, however, I do think that the negatives outweigh the positives. The writing is poor, and whilst there were few language errors, the story is sluggish, especially in the beginning - enough for some to stop reading! Irvine clearly has little appreciation of the source material, and handles many scenes clumsily... most regrettable is the lack of description of appearances and battles, which for fans would have been an enhancement to the story. Outside of Megatron & Prime, and maybe Alpha Trion, characters are shallow and two-dimensional. The flow of time is poorly defined (maybe intentional?) and there is almost no respect for previously defined landmarks of the planet.

Overall, fans will tolerate the mediocre aspects and like/love the better parts, especially the simple fact that Transformers are given life in different way, and the effort at tying in continuities. Those unfamiliar with Transformers may well be put off forever - the experience would be more like a 1 star.
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A decent story

I found this to be an adequate retelling of the game "War for Cybertron". It incorporates things from the many Transformers media into what I felt was a adequate origin story. Optimus Primes character is filled out considerably, as is Megatron.

Well worth the 10-15 bucks that I paid for it!
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