The Traveler
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The Traveler

Mass Market Paperback – July 18, 2006

Price
$12.62
Publisher
Vintage
Publication Date
ISBN-13
978-0307278593
Dimensions
4.1 x 1.04 x 6.87 inches
Weight
9 ounces

Description

“This novel’s a stunner. . . . You won’t want to put the book down.” – People “The stuff that first-rate high-tech paranoid-schizophrenic thrillers are made of.” – Time “A fearless, brilliant action heroine (think Uma Thurman in Kill Bill ); a secret history of the world; a tale of brother against brother . . . and nonstop action as the forces of good and evil battle it out. . . . Readers won’t regret taking this wild ride.” – The Times-Picayune “Gripping. . . . Fresh and fascinating. . . . Impossible to put down.”– Daily News "Page-turningly swift. . . . John Twelve Hawks has drawn upon both pop-cultural and literary touchstones and modified them to create a cyber- 1984." – The New York Times "Portrays a Big Brother with powers far beyond anything Orwell could imagine. . . . Prophecy is rarely such fun." – The Washington Post "A mind-trip fantasy [that] kicks butt, takes names. . . . Let's celebrate [this] novel, which in a just universe would outsell . . . The Da Vinci Code 20-1." – The Atlanta Journal-Constitution "Fast-moving. . . . Believable. . . . The Vast Machines seems [close] to the mark." – The New York Times Book Review "Constant action. . . . A must-read. . . . Will have you scratching your head wondering what is real. . . . We may well be seeing John Twelve Hawks on the best-seller lists for years." – Detroit Free Press John Twelve Hawks lives off the grid. The Traveler is his first novel. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. PRELUDE KNIGHT, DEATH, AND THE DEVILMaya reached out and took her father’s hand as they walked from the Underground to the light. Thorn didn’t push her away or tell Maya to concentrate on the position of her body. Smiling, he guided her up a narrow staircase to a long, sloping tunnel with white tile walls. The Underground authority had installed steel bars on one side of the tunnel and this barrier made the ordinary passageway look like part of an enormous prison. If she had been traveling alone, Maya might have felt trapped and uncomfortable, but there was nothing to worry about because Father was with her.It’s the perfect day, she thought. Well, maybe it was the second most perfect day. She still remembered two years ago when Father had missed her birthday and Christmas only to show up on Boxing Day with a taxi full of presents for Maya and her mother. That morning was bright and full of surprises, but this Saturday seemed to promise a more durable happiness. Instead of the usual trip to the empty warehouse near Canary Wharf, where her father taught her how to kick and punch and use weapons, they had spent the day at the London Zoo, where he had told her different stories about each of the animals. Father had traveled all over the world and could describe Paraguay or Egypt as if he were a tour guide.People had glanced at them as they strolled past the cages. Most Harlequins tried to blend into the crowd, but her father stood out in a group of ordinary citizens. He was German, with a strong nose, xadshoulder-xadlength hair, and dark blue eyes. Thorn dressed in somber colors and wore a steel kara bracelet that looked like a broken shackle.Maya had found a battered art history book in the closet of their rented flat in East London. Near the front of the book was a picture by Albrecht Dürer called Knight, Death, and the Devil . She liked to stare at the picture even though it made her feel strange. The armored knight was like her father, calm and brave, riding through the mountains as Death held up an hourglass and the Devil followed, pretending to be a squire. Thorn also carried a sword, but his was concealed inside a metal tube with a leather shoulder strap.Although she was proud of Thorn, he also made her feel embarrassed and xadself-xadconscious. Sometimes she just wanted to be an ordinary girl with a pudgy father who worked in an office–a happy man who bought xadice-xadcream cones and told jokes about kangaroos. The world around her, with its bright fashions and pop music and television shows, was a constant temptation. She wanted to fall into that warm water and let the current pull her away. It was exhausting to be Thorn’s daughter, always avoiding the surveillance of the Vast Machine, always watching for enemies, always aware of the angle of attack.Maya was twelve years old, but still wasn’t strong enough to use a Harlequin sword. As a substitute, Father had taken a walking stick from the closet and given it to her before they left the flat that morning. Maya had Thorn’s white skin and strong features and her Sikh mother’s thick black hair. Her eyes were such a pale blue that from a certain angle they looked translucent. She hated it when xadwell-xadmeaning women approached her mother and complimented Maya’s appearance. In a few years, she’d be old enough to disguise herself and look as ordinary as possible.They left the zoo and strolled through Regent’s Park. It was late April and young men were kicking footballs across the muddy lawn while parents pushed xadbundled-xadup babies in perambulators. The whole city seemed to be out enjoying the sunshine after three days of rain. Maya and her father took the Piccadilly line to the Arsenal station; it was getting dark when they reached the xadstreet-xadlevel exit. There was an Indian restaurant in Finsbury Park and Thorn had made reservations for an early supper. Maya heard noises–blaring air horns and shouting in the distance–and wondered if there was some kind of political demonstration. Then Father led her through the turnstile and out into a war.Standing on the sidewalk, she saw a mob of people marching up Highbury Hill Road. There weren’t any protest signs and banners, and Maya realized that she was watching the end of a football match. The Arsenal Stadium was straight down the road and a team with blue and white colors–that was Chelsea–had just played there. The Chelsea supporters were coming out of the visitors’ gate on the west end of the stadium and heading down a narrow street lined with row houses. Normally it was a quick walk to the station entrance, but now the North London street had turned into a gauntlet. The police were protecting Chelsea from Arsenal football thugs who were trying to attack them and start fights.Policemen on the edges. Blue and white in the center. Red throwing bottles and trying to break through the line. Citizens caught in front of the crowd scrambled between parked cars and knocked over rubbish bins. Flowering hawthorns grew at the edge of the curb and their pink blossoms trembled whenever someone was shoved against a tree. Petals fluttered through the air and fell upon the surging mass.The main crowd was approaching the Tube station, about one hundred meters away. Thorn could have gone to the left and headed up Gillespie Road, but he remained on the sidewalk and studied the people surrounding them. He smiled slightly, confident of his own power and amused by the pointless violence of the drones. Along with the sword, he was carrying at least one knife and a handgun obtained from contacts in America. If he wished, he could kill a great many of these people, but this was a public confrontation and the police were in the area. Maya glanced up at her father. We should run away, she thought. These people are completely mad. But Thorn glared at his daughter as if he had just sensed her fear and Maya stayed silent.Everyone was shouting. The voices merged into one angry roar. Maya heard a xadhigh-xadpitched whistle. The wail of a police siren. A beer bottle sailed through the air and exploded into fragments a few feet away from where they were standing. Suddenly, a flying wedge of red shirts and scarves plowed through the police lines, and she saw men kicking and throwing punches. Blood streamed down a policeman’s face, but he raised his truncheon and fought back.She squeezed Father’s hand. “They’re coming toward us,” she said. “We need to get out of the way.”Thorn turned around and pulled his daughter back into the entrance of the Tube station as if to find refuge there. But now the police were driving the Chelsea supporters forward like a herd of cattle and she was surrounded by men wearing blue. Caught in the crowd, Maya and her father were pushed past the ticket booth where the elderly clerk cowered behind the thick glass.Father vaulted over the turnstile and Maya followed. Now they were back in the long tunnel, heading down to the trains. It’s all right, she thought. We’re safe now. Then she realized that men wearing red had forced their way into the tunnel and were running beside them. One of the men was carrying a wool sock filled with something heavy–rocks, ball bearings–and he swung it like a club at the old man just in front of her, knocking off the man’s glasses and breaking his nose. A gang of Arsenal thugs slammed a Chelsea supporter against the steel bars on the left side of the tunnel. The man tried to get away as they kicked and beat him. More blood. And no police anywhere.Thorn grabbed the back of Maya’s jacket and dragged her through the fighting. A man tried to attack them and Father stopped him instantly with a quick, snapping punch to the throat. Maya hurried down the tunnel, trying to reach the stairway. Before she could react, something like a rope came over her right shoulder and across her chest. Maya looked down and saw that Thorn had just tied a blue and white Chelsea scarf around her body.In an instant she realized that the day at the zoo, the amusing stories, and the trip to the restaurant were all part of a plan. Father had known about the football game, had probably been here before and timed their arrival. She glanced over her shoulder and saw Thorn smile and nod as if he had just told her an amusing story. Then he turned and walked away.Maya spun around as three Arsenal supporters ran forward, yelling at her. Don’t think. React. She jabbed the walking stick like a javelin and the steel tip hit the tallest man’s forehead with a crack. Blood spurted from his head and he began to fall, but she was already spinning around to trip the second man with the stick. As he stumbled backward, she jumped high and kicked his face. He spun around and hit the floor. Down. He’s down. She ran forward and kicked him again.As she regained her balance, the third man caught her from behind and lifted her off the ground. He squeezed tightly, trying to break her ribs, but Maya dropped the stick, reached back with both hands, and grabbed his ears. The man screamed as she flipped him over her shoulder and onto the floor.Maya reached the stairway, took the stairs two at a time, and saw Father standing on the platform next to the open doors of a train. He grabbed her with his right hand and used his left to force their way into the car. The doors moved back and forth and finally closed. Arsenal supporters ran up to the train, pounding on the glass with their fists, but the train lurched forward and headed down the tunnel.People were packed together. She heard a woman weeping as the boy in front of her pressed a handkerchief against his mouth and nose. The car went around a curve and she fell against her father, burying her face in his wool overcoat. She hated him and loved him, wanted to attack him and embrace him–all at the sam... Read more

Features & Highlights

  • In London, Maya, a young woman trained to fight by her powerful father, uses the latest technology to elude detection when walking past the thousands of surveillance cameras that watch the city. In New York, a secret shadow organization uses a victim’s own GPS to hunt him down and kill him. In Los Angeles, Gabriel, a motorcycle messenger with a haunted past, takes pains to live "off the grid" — free of credit cards and government IDs. Welcome to the world of
  • The Traveler
  • — a world frighteningly like our own.In this compelling novel, Maya fights to save Gabriel, the only man who can stand against the forces that attempt to monitor and control society. From the back streets of Prague to the skyscrapers of Manhattan,
  • The Traveler
  • portrays an epic struggle between tyranny and freedom. Not since 1984 have readers witnessed a Big Brother so terrifying in its implications and in a story that so closely reflects our lives.

Customer Reviews

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Are we all reading the same book?

After skimming a few of the high praising reviews for this book I have to sit back and wonder if we are all reading the same book. Like so many of the people here I was attracted by the title, and the cover, and reading the back of the book it promises much within. The problem is that it's all promises and no delivery.

Let me start with my biggest gripe. The prose. It's atrocious. It's horrendous. So much of it could've been weeded out if someone had done a serious readthrough of the book, but Jonathan Twelve Hawks (or whatever his real name is) is spending far too much time trying to "live off the grid" according to his little biography excerpt to actually revise his work. I know that just stating something like that will be a way to get flamed, so let me give you an example. Turn with me to page 215 of your mass market paperback copy. At the top of the page there is a jewel of a sentence. "Gabriel did something to the motorcycle so that it got even louder." We're never told what exactly he did to it. Did he stick a card in the spokes? Did he make brmmm brmmm noises like a child would do to simulate the sound of a motorcycle? Did he (and this is just a shot in the dark) maybe rev the engine? Or gun it? Just a paragraph down there's another great example where he's pulled over to a gas station, and what does he do? "He filled up his motorcycle's fuel tank," what about he filled the bike's tank, or just the bike? And don't think that these are the only examples. Look around the earlier portions of the book. A character is described looking at someone like they were about to destroy everyone.

Then we'll go to the pacing of the action. A scene where our Harlequin gets to use her oft over-described samurai sword to mess a couple of dudes up. Right? Chick with samurai sword and lots of training, and two thugs who don't know the she-train that's about to hit them. Sounds like a good setup, but at the pace of his prose there is no intensity, or emotional urgency to the situation, leaving the action even more bland than the prose.

Don't forget about story either. We spend over half the book reading about "the vast machine" and "the grid" (in quotations like they are brand new concepts that Mr. Twelve Hawks came up with). We hear about what travelers are (I won't be a spoil sport, but their super powers get withheld from us worse than the monster in most horror films until the very last bits). The thing about hearing about all these people is that we never quite get a real understanding over the importance of it all. All we know is the vast machine is bad because it wants to control us, and the travelers are good because they want to free us...His relentlessly bad prose does little to expound on this for the first 200 pages of the book, and it's like the characters are talking around in circles without ever coming to a conclusion.

In Stephen King's memoir of the craft, On Writing, he makes a point of telling us to read everything, outside of our genre, inside our genre, nonfiction, fiction, and bad prose. Wait, bad prose you say? Yep. Being able to identify bad writing, and elucidate why it's bad allows us as writers (and readers) to grow more appreciative of those with skill.

This....is one of those moments.
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Travelers usually go to exciting places, but not in this book...

I trudged through this book, constantly asking myself why I was bothering. It is loaded with gratiutous and childish screenplay violence. It reminded me of the narratives I created in my mind when I played with G.I. Joes as a kid. I stuck with it because of the promise of the main characters actually "traveling" to other worlds.

I was rewarded with a cheap B movie rendition of the Travelers destinations instead of an imaginative take on the possibilities of other realms and dimensions. In Hawkes' mind other dimensions are filled with blood-thirsty zombies that have a commercial economy based upon selling empty boxes. Hawkes is trying to create a metaphor reflecting our society, but fails miserably for lack of both creativity and subtelty.
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Really, Really Dull

Reading some of the other reviews, there was apparently a lot of hype when this book came out. I completely missed that. I picked it up on CD because looked interesting. It wasn't. Paranoid fantasy at it's worst. And, did I mention this, dull. I normally listen to book CDs on my drive home from work. I kept listening to this, waiting for something to happen. Then I just wanted it to be over, just to find out how the author was going to wind up the story. With 2-3 CDs to go I found out it was the first of a trilogy. I almost gave up on it then. I should have. The ending of the first book is totally unbelievable. The author would have you believe that the Tabula (the all-controlling bad guys) have a ventilation duct that leads outside of the 10-foot wall surrounding their super secret compound. The plans for which our heroes were able to find on the Internet. Two people, armed with a sword, a rifle and a shotgun, attack the heavily guarded compound through the duct work, rescue their companions, pretty much wreck the place and get away virtually unscathed. I won't be looking for books 2 and 3.
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A good thriller in the vein of Ludlum

Reads more like a good thriller by Ludlum than a science fiction, but it qualifies as sf by having the main crux of the plot being a group of rare individuals who can step outside of time to what's called the Fourth Realm and see the big picture. They then can come back and guide mankind to a better life. Sounds great...except the individuals, these Travellers, tend to disrupt the status quo...and the powerful elite want them stopped.

At the time of our story, there are very few travellers left, perhaps none. And the last handful of Harlequins, the people sworn to protect Travelers, are on the defensive, fighting against pervasive recognition software and instant communications in order to keep their and their charges' anonymity.

And now, with one last Traveler free of their enemies' clutches, the last Harlequin has to protect her charge or the world will be enslaved forever.I liked this book a lot. Tight writing, interesting characters, lots of tension and danger and violence--not to mention some pretty good description of how you ride a motorcycle, which is something I'd yet to see written well. But this is a science fiction tale, and doesn't read like one. It reads like Travanian or Ludlum. Which isn't a bad thing, but it's different than what I've read in teh sf genre in recent years. Refreshing, actually.

But I can see that some others have trouble with this book...so perhaps if you were looking for science fiction you might be disappointed, as this is 99% thriller. I liked it, and I'm starting book 2 in the series.
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Amazingly bad writing

I saw this book discounted at a store and the cover attracted me. I read the flap and found it interesting. I wish I could go back and tell myself to throw the book down and walk away. Walk away!

Look, I'll be short and simple. This book had interesting ideas, sometimes, but the writing was some of the very worst I have ever read. I am not over exaggerating or being overly dramatic. It is that badly written. Think of some 17 year old shut in who has only watched Matrix-like movies and read only Stephen King novels and conspiracy theory websites. Someone who has REALLY IMPORTANT things to says but lacks any kind of imagination or craft to say it.

Please, there are much better books out there to read. A book similar in themes as this one that I would recommend is Jennifer Government by Max Barry. Also, I cannot believe there are so many 5 star reviews for this book, I can only rationalize it by believing most of them are from the publishing company or are paid to write good reviews.
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So SLOW!!! Give me back my 2 hours !!

Am I the minority when I say this book sucks? I have been through about a third of the book, and the story hardly seems to be getting anywhere. Perhaps if the author had not stretched the story so much, I may have given a damn about it!

Glad I didn't buy this crap!
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Wow!!Conspiracy Theorists everywhere would love this...

Alright, first of all, I have NOT heard any hype about this book. I happened upon it in a bookstore on my "random book buying days", which is where I wander around, and whatever book happens to catch my fancy, I buy it-whether or not it is even the genre I normally read. Now this book ended up in the back seat of my car for 2 weeks-since I forgot I even bought it. THEN, I found it, opened it and began reading and I have NOT been able to put it down. This book is well written, the characters are well developed, the author is descriptive without going OVERBOARD, and boring the reader. I enjoy this story immensely and can't wait to see what else this new author has to offer. For a first book, this is VERY impressive, without all the rough edges (story lines not meshing well from character to character, or just poor character development, etc. etc.) This is a definite must read!!!
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I hope you didn't buy this in a traditional bookstore

While browsing at lunch in a tradtional walled bookstore, I picked this up. The back of the book made it sound like something just up my alley.

Imagine my surprise when I pick it up and start reading about Harelquins, Travelers, the Tabula, Citizens, Drones and The Vast Machine. See, this wouldn't be a problem if the author had decided to give even a small explanation about this world. Instead, he jumps in headfirst and at the expense of character development uses Harlequin, I swear, at least once in every paragraph. If I understood whether these things were groups, races, organizations, mutations of some sort...anything would have been helpful.

At about page 75 I thought I was going to gauge my eyes out. Not one word on the back of the book indicated any of this. Note to the publisher and the author - browsing shouldn't be this much of a crapshoot.

I just cannot get over my disappointment.
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Am I the only one who didn't know it is going be a trilogy?

I picked up The Traveler because I had a gift certificate at Barnes and Noble and was browsing the shelves. I hadn't heard any of the hype about the book. In any case, I have to admit I enjoyed reading it, even though it felt like Hawks (what kind of a name is John Twelve Hawks?) ripped off a number of themes that have already been done in books and film, and stitched them all together. The Vast Machine (Matrix, 1984,etc), the Travelers (Stephen King's The Talisman), the splicers (takes us all the way back to the Island of Dr. Moreau), and the list goes on. Hawks also made it much too easy for one of the main characters to turn bad guy and go against his brother; there was a disconnect there for me, but even so, the book kept me engaged.

The biggest problem I had with The Traveler is that it doesn't indicate anywhere on the jacket that it is clearly a series. I have since discovered it is the first in a trilogy. I would have liked to know that going in, as I wouldn't have read it; I'm not a big series fan. With about 80 pages left it became obvious there was no way Hawks would wrap everything up, so I flipped to the last page (which I don't like to do), and after the end of the book is the line "Book one for the Fourth Realm". Great. I finished the book, but will likely never find out the fates of the characters because while I liked The Traveler for what it was, I didn't like it enough to invest any more time in the story.
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Am I the only one who didn't know it is going be a trilogy?

I picked up The Traveler because I had a gift certificate at Barnes and Noble and was browsing the shelves. I hadn't heard any of the hype about the book. In any case, I have to admit I enjoyed reading it, even though it felt like Hawks (what kind of a name is John Twelve Hawks?) ripped off a number of themes that have already been done in books and film, and stitched them all together. The Vast Machine (Matrix, 1984,etc), the Travelers (Stephen King's The Talisman), the splicers (takes us all the way back to the Island of Dr. Moreau), and the list goes on. Hawks also made it much too easy for one of the main characters to turn bad guy and go against his brother; there was a disconnect there for me, but even so, the book kept me engaged.

The biggest problem I had with The Traveler is that it doesn't indicate anywhere on the jacket that it is clearly a series. I have since discovered it is the first in a trilogy. I would have liked to know that going in, as I wouldn't have read it; I'm not a big series fan. With about 80 pages left it became obvious there was no way Hawks would wrap everything up, so I flipped to the last page (which I don't like to do), and after the end of the book is the line "Book one for the Fourth Realm". Great. I finished the book, but will likely never find out the fates of the characters because while I liked The Traveler for what it was, I didn't like it enough to invest any more time in the story.
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