The Diamond of Darkhold (Ember, Book 4)
The Diamond of Darkhold (Ember, Book 4) book cover

The Diamond of Darkhold (Ember, Book 4)

Hardcover – August 26, 2008

Price
$12.46
Format
Hardcover
Pages
304
Publisher
Random House Books for Young Readers
Publication Date
ISBN-13
978-0375855719
Dimensions
5.67 x 1.26 x 8.51 inches
Weight
14.4 ounces

Description

From School Library Journal Grade 4–9—A solid and satisfying conclusion to the "Ember Saga," set in a post-disaster future. Hostilities have died down between the citizens of Sparks and the refugees from the underground city of Ember, and all are working together to survive the brutal winter. A roamer brings forth the barest remains of a book that intrigues Doon and Lina because it alludes to a mysterious device that may still be in Ember. They decide to go back to see if they can find any answers or, if nothing else, food. What they find is the Trogg Family, travelers who have taken over the remains of the city, scavenging supplies and making grand plans. Doon is caught and shackled, leaving Lina to try and make her way back to Sparks to get help. Once again, the teens, both remarkably self-sufficient and imaginative, are able to save themselves and figure out at least a small part of the mystery left behind by the Builders. In doing so, they help their community and ultimately the entire planet. And the epilogue gives the answer to a question raised in the series' prequel, The Prophet of Yonwood (Random, 2006), namely, what Hoyt McCoy was up to with that telescope of his. All the loose ends are tied up neatly and everything ends on a positive, hopeful note. Satisfying, indeed.— Mara Alpert, Los Angeles Public Library Copyright © Reed Business Information, a division of Reed Elsevier Inc. All rights reserved. "An electric debut. Lina and Doon’ search parallels the universal adolescent quest for answers.” —Publishers Weekly, Starred Jeanne DuPrau is the bestselling author of The City of Ember, The People of Sparks, and The Prophet of Yonwood. She lives in Menlo Park, California. Visit her Web site at www.jeanneduprau.com. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. In the village of Sparks, the day was ending. The pale winter sun had begun to sink behind a bank of clouds in the west, and shadows darkened the construction field behind the Pioneer Hotel, where workers labored in the gloom. Winter rains had turned the ground to a soup of mud. Stacks of lumber and piles of bricks and stones stood everywhere, along with buckets of nails, tools, old windows and doors, anything that might be useful for building houses. Though the daylight was almost gone, people worked on. They were trying to accomplish as much as possible, because they could see that a storm was coming.But at last someone called, "Time to quit!" and the workers sighed with relief and began to pack up their tools. One of the workers was a boy named Doon Harrow, thirteen years old, who had spent the day hauling loads of boards from one place to another and trying to measure and cut them to necessary lengths. When he heard the call, he set down the rusty old saw he'd been using and looked around for his father. The workers stumbling across the field were no more than shadowy figures now; it was hard to tell one from another. Ahead of them loomed the hotel, a few of its windows shining dimly with the light of candles lit by those too young or old or ill to be outside working. "Father!" Doon called. "Where are you?" His father's voice answered from some distance behind him. "Right here, son. Coming! Wait for--" And then came a sound that made Doon whirl around: first a shattering crash, and then a shriek of a kind he'd never before heard from his mild-mannered father.Doon ran, squelching through the mud. He found his father sprawled on the ground beside a broken windowpane that had been leaning against a pile of bricks. "What happened?" Doon cried. "Are you hurt?"His father struggled to his knees. In a hoarse, strangled voice, he said, "Tripped. Fell on the glass. My hand."Others had gathered now, and they helped him up. Doon took his father's arm. Enough light remained in the sky for him to see what had happened: the palm of his father's hand was sliced open, gushing blood. One of the men standing nearby tore off his shirt and wrapped it around the wound. "Make a tight fist," the man said. Doon's father curled his fingers, wincing. Blood stained the shirt. "We have to get to the doctor," Doon said. "Yes, that cut needs stitching up," said the man who'd given his shirt. "Go quick, and maybe you can make it to the village before it rains.""Can you walk, Father?" Doon asked."Oh, yes," said his father in a weak voice. "Might need another . . ." He trailed off, holding out his hand, and Doon saw that the shirt wrapped around it was already soaked with blood. "Ice would slow the bleeding," someone said. "But we don't have any." A woman took off her scarf and passed it to Doon, and another man ripped strips of cloth from his shirt. Once the injured hand was wrapped in these, Doon and his father started across the field. "You'll need a lantern!" cried a boy--one of Doon's friends, Chet Noam. "Go on ahead. I'll get one and catch up with you." They walked as quickly as they could, but it seemed unlikely they'd avoid getting wet. A few raindrops were already drifting down. Doon felt their light, cold touch on his face. Rain had become familiar to him by now. Since he and his people had arrived here in Sparks from the city of Ember, where sun and rain alike were unknown, four rainstorms had swept over the land. The first had terrified the people of Ember, who thought something dreadful had gone wrong with the sky. A voice called to them from behind, and Chet came running up. "Here," he said, handing Doon a lantern made of a can punched with holes and containing a burning candle. "And listen," he added. "A roamer has arrived, wanting shelter at the hotel. Tell people that if the rain stops, there'll be trading in the plaza tomorrow morning.""All right," said Doon. He and his father turned again toward the town and hurried on. "Is the pain very bad?" Doon asked."Not too bad," said his father, whose face was unnaturally white. "It is bleeding a lot.""Doctor Hester will know how to stop it," Doon said, though he wasn't sure of that. The doctor did the best she could, but there was a great deal she couldn't cure.They passed a grove of trees thrashing in the wind. Behind the trees, a little distance off the road, a tall building loomed. A patch of blackness showed where a section of its roof had fallen in."They still haven't fixed it," said Doon as they went past, but his father didn't even look up.The damaged building was called the Ark, the place where the people of Sparks stored their food supplies. The first rainstorm of the winter had been too much for one of the many rotten spots in its roof. Beams and chunks of tile fell inward. Shelves toppled. Jars and crocks broke and spilled, sacks of grain tore open, and rats got to the food before the cave-in was discovered. Even to begin with, there had been barely enough food stored in the Ark to get everyone through the winter. After that storm, a great part of the food was ruined. "Father," Doon said. "Press your hurt hand tight with your other hand. That might keep it from bleeding so much." His father nodded and did as Doon said.The rain came harder. In the last rays of evening light, Doon saw the lines of water like silver pins in the air. He put up the hood of his jacket, shivering. When he was faced with troubles, Doon usually looked for solutions and took action. But tonight he was feeling disheartened. So much about the winter in Sparks had been hard. People were ill with coughs and fevers, and some of them had died; they were hungry nearly all the time; and there had been one accident after another. A candle flame caught a curtain and set a house on fire; a toddler wandered outside at night, fell into the river, and drowned; there was the hole in the Ark's roof; and now this gash in his father's hand. Misfortunes came from every direction, it seemed, and Doon could see no way to make things better. Read more

Features & Highlights

  • It’s been several months since Lina and Doon escaped the dying city of Ember and, along with the rest of their people, joined the town of Sparks. Now, struggling through the harsh winter aboveground, they find an unusual book. Torn up and missing most of its pages, it alludes to a mysterious device from before the Disaster, which they believe is still in Ember. Together, Lina and Doon must go back underground to retrieve what was lost and bring light to a dark world.In the fourth Book of Ember, bestselling author Jeanne DuPrau juxtaposes yet another action-packed adventure with powerful themes about hope, learning, and the search for truth.

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A disappointing ending for two books that were on fire

There are few books that I give this low of a rating. I almost hate doing this because I loved the first two books so much, but there are three reasons I'm giving this book only two stars.

The first is it felt like the book was talking down to its young audience. The first two books were so contemporary and edgy, but it felt like this one spent half the time defining big words and inserting placeholder dialogue. The writing style lacked a quality I know Duprau is capable of.

The second is that the book is a rewind of [[ASIN:0385736282 The City of Ember (Books of Ember)]]. It seemed like the characters hadn't really developed since the first book and had to learn all the old lessons over again. Plus it just played the same plot tricks as the first book, only instead of escaping Ember, Lina and Doon are going back. And it totally ignores all of the information from [[ASIN:0375875263 The Prophet of Yonwood (Books of Ember)]] (which wasn't that good to begin with) until the last ten pages--and even that tie-in seems forced, like it's an afterthought.

The final thing that made this book just not work for me is that the ending is moral driven rather than character driven. Instead of letting the characters' actions speak for themselves, there is a LONG epilogue that tells word for word all the lessons Lina and Doon learned. After all they go through together, the reader should be able to tell what lessons were learned without it being spelled out for them--literally!

This book could have been hot with all the potential in the first two books. The premiss for this one is fantastic and the already-established characters are amazing, but this book just doesn't pull it all together in the end. I wish the series would have ended after [[ASIN:0375828257 The People of Sparks (Books of Ember)]].
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This Ember Glows Dim

Ever since they emerged from the City of Ember, I have been waiting for them to go back and see what has become of their city. This book finally takes us back to the City of Ember. Perhaps others may have been waiting too.

Darkhold's Ember is nothing like the City of Ember of book 1. This time the story is not satisfying, despite offering a reasonable explanation about the fate of those who wandered into the Unknown Regions. Other than that, the journey felt rushed and not well developed. I doubt this was intentional to indicate that Ember is now irrelevant.

There is also an issue with filler content. For example, there is an entire subplot of minor characters that could be dropped to save at least 20% of the book and nothing would be lost at all.

The author also continues to explore themes of alternate energy that she touches on in her other books, especially Car Trouble.

The first book of Ember presented with an amazing world unlike anything that we had experienced before. A city of hope, created with love, reflected with a greatly crafted amount of detail, suspense, sorrow, and expectations. You will not find any of that here.

The problem with sequels is that they get compared to the previous installments. In that department the Diamond of Darkhold is clearly the 3rd best in the series, after City of Ember and People of Sparks. Unfortunately, this also makes it the 2nd weakest.

Without question, this book is an enjoyable read for the Ember faithful and serves as a reasonable conclusion for the series. Sadly, compared with past glory, this ember glows dim...

A note of caution for new readers:

Despite the quick summary in the first few pages, new readers to the series will be lost. They will most likely not enjoy this book as it really assumes that they had read the previous three books - which really should be read as they are quite good!

Update, a few years later.. In answering a comment below, this is a three star book. The fourth star is my token of thanks to the author for returning to this world and shedding more light on previously undeveloped areas. Interestingly enough, my 11 yr old son read this book seven years after I did, and when I asked him what he thought of the book in comparison to the rest, he shared similar sentiment. Interestingly enough, the prequel, Prophet of Yonwood was his favorite book.
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A story in search of a crisis

Have you ever been in a situation where you were given a ten page report to write but you only had about two pages of material? If you were like everyone, you'd try to make the material 'stretch' in various ways. Have a thesis paragraph that went on for 3 pages, duplicate that for the conclusion, change the font size to something that would take another page or two, and then you would pad the paper with immaterial exposition till the 'document' reached a respectable length. Oh. And with that, the nice cover sheet, can't forget that.

Anyway, the point I'm trying to reach is that, The Diamond of Darkhold is that paper. As far as I can tell, it's about 20% plot, with the rest being either a slight of hand font sizing, immaterial side stories, and a 'antagonist' (and I say that loosely) to give this story a sense of crisis. Without it, the 20% would have been a simple story of Doon and Lina going back to the dead city of Ember and finding one additional surprise from the Builders to help the city of Sparks start its way unto the beginnings of a civilization.

At most, this felt like an afterthought from the author to the fans to give a sense of closure to Lina and Doon that would have been a pleasant short story. But when forced to stretch this to a 300 page story, the lack of a true sense of crisis (whether it's solving the mystery of the City of Ember or helping the People of Sparks survive), made this The Diamond of Darkhold ring somewhat hollow.

And for those of you who're curious, I got a C- for that paper.
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Nothing new

I wish this book had had more depth to it. There are too many different points of view from minor characters that are not developed well. We're supposed to believe that the people of Sparks are "struggling" through a harsh winter, but I saw no description or details that made me believe there was any real danger. In fact, there was hardly any description of anything or anyone. I never felt a part of the world, and therefore didn't really care what happened to Lina and Doon (or any of the other POV characters). The book relies too much on setting and character development from the previous novels and gives us nothing new.

The ending seems to indicate that we will see more of this world, probably farther into the future. Let's hope she spends more time on setting, plot, and character development in future installments.
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Time to turn off the lights on the Ember series

I loved The City of Ember and I liked The People of Sparks. I didn't bother to read the prequel because it sounded lame, but I was psyched to read Diamond of Darkhold. Boy, was I disappointed. This book was poorly written. It was full with cliched characters, predictable dialogue, plot elements that we have already seen (in the first book) and overall suffered from severe suckiness.

People, let your memories of Ember and Sparks end on high note and skip this lousy read.
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The series began with an interesting premise, then declined from there...

After thoroughly enjoying The City of Ember, and liking The People of Sparks alright, I was excited to read this later installment in the series. (Let's just try to forget about the Prophet of Yonwood, shall we?) Boy, was I disappointed! The characters were shallow, and the dialogue was unimaginative. There were so many minor plot holes and at the end, the author obviously got tired of writing the book and summed up the epilogue in a huge chunk of boring afterthought. I was very disappointed - and yes, downright bored - in many of the plot points which, I suppose, were supposed to be interesting and creative. I don't know if publisher asked the author to write this book, but it's clear she did not put her whole time nor talent into this piece of lazy writing. Too bad!
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You can't go home again

The Diamond of Darkhold picks up where The People of Sparks left off. The former residents of the underground City of Ember are having a hard time adjusting to their new life out in the light--and the wind, rain, and cold. Doon becomes convinced that they overlooked a valuable invention when they left Ember, so he and Lina decide to go back to seek the treasure.

When they do, they encounter a city generator on its last gasps, and a wild family named the Troggs who have decided that warm and dry inside beats the cold and unpredictable outside world. I really liked that dynamic, unpredictable freedom versus (an illusion of) safety, and the Troggs' desire to milk a clearly unsustainable situation for all it was worth.

Lina and Doon have their adventures and find something that does make life a whole lot better for everyone. I really enjoyed this book and felt like it redeemed the series after the unsatisfying third book, the prequel The Prophet of Yonwood. I somehow felt there could have been a little more to The Diamond of Darkhold--it didn't reach the level of originality and completeness of the original City of Ember for me, but reading the next chapters in Lina and Doon's lives brought the series to a full-circle close.

The overall series is strong with one notable misfire: I give [[ASIN:0385736282 The City of Ember]] 5 stars; [[ASIN:0375828257 The People of Sparks]] 3.5 stars; the misbegotten prequel [[ASIN:0440421241 The Prophet of Yonwood]] 1 star; and this redemptive finale The Diamond of Darkhold 4 stars. As young adult fiction goes, the Books of Ember series is thoughtful but also appropriate for strong readers fourth grade and older.
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I call for a re-write!

Absolutely a disappointing end to what could have been a superb series. DuPrau had a great story here it is too bad that she was the one to write it.

My biggest complaint is - the Builders of Ember where smart enough to make this entire underground city but only made ONE INSTRUCTION MANUAL for the solar cells? I mean puhleeze!

I know this ultimately ends up being this big Luddite inspired anti-technology pro-green solar energy environmental treatise and I don't actually have a problem with that more or less but to deny the good that technology can do is as wrong-minded as ignoring the bad that it can do too. DuPrau seems to see everything as black or white.

The final ten pages of the book are more interesting than the entire thing since she peoples it with useless characters, plot devices that go nowhere and then tacks on an ending that would have been far more interesting than what she gave us.

The story had such promise - this lady could have used a good editor.
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Unsatisfactory ending to a promising start.

I bought these for a young nephew, and of course being an avid reader, read them first. Enjoyed the first two, but the third book was so disappointing. What was with the "diamonds?" The builders of the city had provided for its people in every way that they could imagine, and yet sent them above ground with nothing! No shelter, no food, no tools, no seeds, no nothing. Wouldn't it have made more sense that there would have been another storage area concealed in the area that they came out with at least basic supplies and shelter. There was no guarantee that there would be a settlement in the area when the people of Ember emerged. Wish I could give it less than one star.
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The flame of Ember died. Long ago.

I had high expectations for this book, as it would mark the first time Lina and Doon returned to their darkened city. Unfortunately, this book feels forced, and does not hold the same excitement as the first book. The plot is completely useless, the main characters are helpless, and it's at least 35% filler. Any character development that occured in books 1 and 2 has been lost in the wind. Everyone is very dull as a character. Lina and Doon have no idea what they are doing, and they have no plan whatsoever. Torren, Lizzie, and Clara's "rescue" is pointless. The Trogs are also, pointless. The diamonds are pure filler.

Please, whatever you do, don't bother getting this book. Especially not the audiobook. Luckily I rented the audiobook from my library, or I would have wanted a refund!
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