The Diabolic
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The Diabolic

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"Exploring what it is to question society’s definition of what you are and who you should be...the first-person narration makes the story immediate, and the political plotline could yield some thought-provoking discussion." (Booklist August 2016)"Philosophical, twisty, and addictive." (Kirkus Reviews August 2016)"Kincaid has crafted incredible characters who readers can relate to and care for...these protagonists and the complex setting will thrill the YA audience. VERDICT Fans of Marissa Meyer’s “The Lunar Chronicles” will enjoy Kincaid’s latest. This story of friendship, love, loss, suspense, and galactic beings will grab the attention of sci-fi fans and general readers alike." (School Library Journal September 2016) S.J. Kincaid is the New York Times bestselling author of The Diabolic trilogy. She originally wanted to be an astronaut, but a dearth of mathematical skills made her turn her interest to science fiction instead. Her debut novel, Insignia , was shortlisted for the Waterstones Children’s Book Prize. Its sequels, Vortex and Catalyst , have received starred reviews from Kirkus Reviews and Booklist . She’s chronically restless and has lived in California, Alabama, New Hampshire, Oregon, Illinois, and Scotland with no signs of staying in one place anytime soon. Find out more at SJKincaid.com. From School Library Journal Gr 9 Up—Nemesis is a Diabolic. More important, she is Sidonia's Diabolic, trained to protect her at any cost. Diabolics are engineered to bond with one person and to spend their lives guarding them. They have no emotions, needs, or desires except for keeping their charges safe. Sidonia, a senator's heir, is at great risk, since her father is considered a heretic. In a galaxy where the Emperor and his family rule through fear, Nemesis will do anything to protect Sidonia, even if it means impersonating her. When Sidonia is summoned to court, Nemesis must pose as her to keep her away from the dangerous members of court. In a place filled with lies, deceit, and greed, Nemesis tries to determine who she can trust and who is an enemy. However, pretending to be fully human is starting to affect Nemesis. She is beginning to care for people other than Sidonia, although she was not created to care. Could Diabolics possibly possess the ability to love? Kincaid has crafted incredible characters who readers can relate to and care for even if they range from privileged, bratty children to creations designed to kill. The imagery used in establishing these protagonists and the complex setting will thrill the YA audience. VERDICT Fans of Marissa Meyer's "The Lunar Chronicles" will enjoy Kincaid's latest. This story of friendship, love, loss, suspense, and galactic beings will grab the attention of sci-fi fans and general readers alike.—Jessica Strefling, US Court of Appeals, Federal Circuit Library --This text refers to an alternate kindle_edition edition. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. The Diabolic 1 SIDONIA had made a dangerous mistake. She was carving a statue out of a great stone slab. There was something mesmerizing about the swiping and flashing of her laser blade, bright against the dark window overlooking the starscape. She never aimed the blade where I expected, but somehow she always produced an image in the stone that my own imagination could never have conjured. Today it was a star gone supernova, a scene from Helionic history depicted vividly in rock. Yet one swipe of her blade had extracted too large a chunk from the base of the sculpture. I saw it at once and jumped to my feet, alarm prickling through me. The structure was no longer stable. At any moment, that entire statue was going to come crashing down. Donia knelt to study the visual effect she’d created. Oblivious to the danger. I approached quietly. I didn’t want to warn her—it might startle her into jerking or jumping, and cutting herself with the laser. Better to rectify the situation myself. My steps drew me across the room. Just as I reached her, the first creak sounded, fragments of dust raining down from above her as the statue tilted forward. I seized Donia and whipped her out of the way. A great crashing exploded in our ears, dust choking the stale air of the art chamber. I wrested the laser blade from Donia’s hand and switched it off. She pulled free, rubbing at her eyes. “Oh no! I didn’t see that coming.” Dismay slackened her face as she looked over the wreckage. “I’ve ruined it, haven’t I?” “Forget the statue,” I said. “Are you hurt?” She glumly waved off my question. “I can’t believe I did that. It was going so well. . . .” With one slippered foot, she kicked at a chunk of broken stone, then sighed and glanced at me. “Did I say thanks? I didn’t. Thanks, Nemesis.” Her thanks did not interest me. It was her safety that mattered. I was her Diabolic. Only people craved praise. Diabolics weren’t people. We looked like people, to be sure. We had the DNA of people, but we were something else: creatures fashioned to be utterly ruthless and totally loyal to a single individual. We would gladly kill for that person, and only for them. That’s why the elite imperial families eagerly snatched us up to serve as lifelong bodyguards for themselves and their children, and to be the bane of their enemies. But lately, it seemed, Diabolics were doing their jobs far too well. Donia often tapped into the Senate feed to watch her father at work. In recent weeks, the Imperial Senate had begun debating the “Diabolic Menace.” Senators discussed Diabolics gone rogue, killing enemies of their masters over small slights, even murdering family members of the child they were assigned to protect to advance that child’s interests. We were proving more of a threat to some families than an asset. I knew the Senate must have come to a decision about us, because this morning, the Matriarch had delivered a missive to her daughter—one directly from the Emperor. Donia had taken a single look at it and then thrown herself into carving. I’d lived with her for nearly eight years. We’d virtually grown up side by side. She only grew silent and distracted like this when worried about me. “What was in the missive, Donia?” She fingered a slab of the broken statue. “Nemesis . . . they banned Diabolics. Retroactively.” Retroactively. That meant current Diabolics. Like me. “So the Emperor expects you to dispose of me.” Donia shook her head. “I won’t do it, Nemesis.” Of course she wouldn’t. And then she’d be punished for it. An edge crept into my voice. “If you can’t bring yourself to be rid of me, then I’ll take the matter into my own hands.” “I said I won’t do it, Nemesis, and neither will you!” Her eyes flashed. She raised her chin. “I’ll find another way.” Sidonia had always been meek and shy, but it was a deceptive appearance. I’d long ago learned there was an undercurrent of steel within her. Her father, Senator von Impyrean, proved a help. He nursed a powerful animosity toward the Emperor, Randevald von Domitrian. When Sidonia pleaded for my life, a glimmer of defiance stole into the Senator’s eyes. “The Emperor demands her death, does he? Well, rest easy, my darling. You needn’t lose your Diabolic. I’ll tell the Emperor the death has been carried out, and that will be the end of the matter.” The Senator was mistaken. Like most of the powerful, the Impyreans preferred to live in isolation and socialize only in virtual spaces. The nearest Excess—those free humans scattered on planets—were systems away from Senator von Impyrean and his family. He wielded his authority over the Excess from a strategic remove. The family fortress orbited an uninhabited gas giant ringed by lifeless moons. So we were all startled weeks later when a starship arrived out of the depths of space—unannounced, unheralded. It had been dispatched by the Emperor under the pretext of “inspecting” the body of the Diabolic, but it was no mere inspector onboard. It was an Inquisitor. Senator von Impyrean had underestimated the Emperor’s hostility toward the Impyrean family. My existence gave the Emperor an excuse to put one of his own agents in the Impyrean fortress. Inquisitors were a special breed of vicar, trained to confront the worst heathens and enforce the edicts of the Helionic religion, often with violence. The Inquisitor’s very arrival should have terrified the Senator into obedience, but Sidonia’s father still circumvented the will of the Emperor. The Inquisitor had come to see a body, so a body he was shown. It simply wasn’t mine. One of the Impyreans’ Servitors had been suffering from solar sickness. Like Diabolics, Servitors had been genetically engineered for service. Unlike us, they didn’t need the capacity to make decisions, so they hadn’t been engineered to have it. The Senator took me to the ailing Servitor’s bedside and gave me the dagger. “Do what you do best, Diabolic.” I was grateful he’d sent Sidonia to her chambers. I wouldn’t want her to see this. I sank the dagger under the Servitor’s rib cage. She didn’t flinch, didn’t try to flee. She gazed at me through blank, empty eyes, and then a moment later she was dead. Only then was the Inquisitor allowed to dock with the fortress. He made a cursory inspection of the body, pausing over it merely to note, “How odd. She appears . . . freshly dead.” The Senator stood bristling at his shoulder. “The Diabolic has been dying of solar sickness for several weeks now. We’d just decided to end her suffering when you arrived in the system.” “Contrary to what your missive said,” the Inquisitor stated, swinging on him. “You claimed the death had already been carried out. Now that I see her, I wonder at her size. She’s rather small for a Diabolic.” “Now you question the body, too?” roared the Senator. “I tell you, she was wasting away for weeks.” I watched the Inquisitor from the corner. I wore a new Servitor’s gown, my size and musculature hidden beneath voluminous folds. If he saw through the ruse, then I would kill him. I hoped it wouldn’t come to that. Concealing an Inquisitor’s death might prove . . . complicated. “Perhaps if your family was more respectful of the Living Cosmos,” the Inquisitor remarked, “your household would have been spared a ghastly affliction like solar sickness.” The Senator ripped in an angry breath to reply, but at that moment the Matriarch darted forward from where she’d been lurking in the doorway. She seized her husband’s arm, forestalling him. “How right you are, Inquisitor! We are immensely grateful for your insight.” Her smile was gracious, for the Matriarch didn’t share her husband’s eagerness to defy the Emperor. She’d felt imperial wrath firsthand at a young age. Her own family had displeased the Emperor, and her mother had paid the price. Now she appeared electric with anxiety, her body quivering with eagerness to placate their guest. “I’d be ever so pleased if you’d observe our services tonight, Inquisitor. Perhaps you can note what we are doing wrong.” Her tone dripped with sweetness, the sort that sounded odd in her usual acrid voice. “I would be glad to do so, Grandeé von Impyrean,” replied the Inquisitor, now gracious. He reached out to draw her knuckles to his cheek. She pulled away. “I’ll go make the arrangements with our Servitors. I’ll take this one now. You—come.” She jerked her head for me to accompany her. I didn’t want to leave the Inquisitor. I wanted to watch his every movement, observe his every expression, but the Matriarch had left me no choice but to follow her as a Servitor would. Our steps brought us out of the chamber, far from the Inquisitor’s sight. The Matriarch picked up her pace, and I did as well. We wound together down the corridor toward the Senator’s chambers. “Madness,” she muttered. “It’s madness to take this risk right now! You should be lying dead before that Inquisitor, not walking here at my side!” I cast her a long, considering look. I’d gladly die for Donia, but if it came to my life or the Matriarch’s, I’d put myself first. “Do you intend to tell the Inquisitor what I am?” Even as I spoke, I visualized the blow I’d use to kill her. A single strike to the back of the head. . . . No need to risk her screaming. Donia might emerge from her chambers if she heard anything. I’d hate to murder her mother in front of her. The Matriarch had the survival instinct her husband and daughter lacked. Even my mild tone sent terror skittering across her face. The next moment it vanished so swiftly that I wondered whether I’d imagined it. “Of course not. The truth would condemn us all now.” So she would live. My muscles relaxed. “If you’re here,” she said darkly, “then you’ll make yourself useful to us. You’ll help me conceal my husband’s work before that Inquisitor inspects his chambers.” That I could do. We plunged into the Senator’s study, where the Matriarch hiked up her gown and shuffled through the debris strewn about the room—blasphemous database fragments that would instantly condemn this entire family if the Inquisitor laid eyes on them. “Quickly now,” she said, gesturing for me to start swiping them up. “I’ll take them to the incinerator—” “Don’t.” Her voice was bitter. “My husband will simply use their destruction as an excuse to acquire more. We simply need to clear these from sight for now.” She twisted her fingers in a crack in the wall, and the floor slid open to reveal a hidden compartment. Then she settled in the Senator’s chair, fanning herself with her hand as I heaved armful after armful of shattered fragments of what looked like computer debris and data chips into the compartment. The Senator passed days in here, repairing whatever he could salvage, uploading information into his personal database. He avidly read the materials and often discussed them with Sidonia. Those scientific theories, those technological blueprints. All blasphemous. All insults against the Living Cosmos. I stashed the Senator’s personal computer in with the debris, and then the Matriarch crossed to the wall again and twisted her finger in the nook. The floor slid closed. I heaved the Senator’s desk over so it covered the hidden compartment. I straightened again to find the Matriarch watching me narrowly. “You would have killed me back in the hallway.” Her glittering eyes challenged me to deny it. I didn’t. “You know what I am, madam.” “Oh yes, I do.” Her lips twisted. “Monster. I know what goes on behind those cold, soulless eyes of yours. This is exactly why Diabolics have been banned—they protect one and pose a threat to all others. You must never forget that Sidonia needs me. I’m her mother.” “And you must never forget that I’m her Diabolic. She needs me more.” “You cannot possibly fathom what a mother means to a child.” No. I couldn’t. I’d never had one. All I knew was that Sidonia was safer with me than with anyone else in this universe. Even her own kin. The Matriach loosed an unpleasant laugh. “Ah, but why even debate you on this? You could no more understand family than a dog could compose poetry. No, what matters is, you and I share a cause. Sidonia is kindhearted and naive. Outside this fortress, in the wider Empire . . . perhaps a creature like you will be the very thing my daughter requires to survive. But you will never—never—speak to anyone of what we’ve done today.” “Never.” “And if anyone seems ready to find out we’ve spared our Diabolic, then you will take care of the problem.” The very thought sent a sizzling, protective anger through me. “Without hesitation.” “Even if taking care of it”—her eyes were sharp and birdlike—“starts with yourself.” I didn’t condescend to answer. Of course I would die for Sidonia. She was my entire universe. I loved nothing but her and valued nothing but her existence. Without her, there was no reason for me to exist. Death would be a mercy compared to that. --This text refers to an alternate kindle_edition edition. Read more

Features & Highlights

  • “The perfect kind of high-pressure adventure.” —TeenVogue.com
  • A
  • New York Times
  • bestseller!
  • Red Queen
  • meets
  • The
  • Hunger Games
  • in this epic novel about what happens when a senator’s daughter is summoned to the galactic court as a hostage, but she’s really the galaxy’s most dangerous weapon in disguise.
  • A Diabolic is ruthless. A Diabolic is powerful. A Diabolic has a single task: Kill in order to protect the person you’ve been created for.
  • Nemesis is a Diabolic, a humanoid teenager created to protect a galactic senator’s daughter, Sidonia. The two have grown up side by side, but are in no way sisters. Nemesis is expected to give her life for Sidonia, and she would do so gladly. She would also take as many lives as necessary to keep Sidonia safe. When the power-mad Emperor learns Sidonia’s father is participating in a rebellion, he summons Sidonia to the Galactic court. She is to serve as a hostage. Now, there is only one way for Nemesis to protect Sidonia. She must become her. Nemesis travels to the court disguised as Sidonia—a killing machine masquerading in a world of corrupt politicians and two-faced senators’ children. It’s a nest of vipers with threats on every side, but Nemesis must keep her true abilities a secret or risk everything. As the Empire begins to fracture and rebellion looms closer, Nemesis learns there is something more to her than just deadly force. She finds a humanity truer than what she encounters from most humans. Amidst all the danger, action, and intrigue, her humanity just might be the thing that saves her life—and the empire.

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Painful

I'm eternally confused as to the hype of this book. I was frustrated at every turn by the stilted writing, the laborious details and overall unimaginative characters. I hate to leave a bad review but this one has me so stumped I had to let others know. I wish I could get a refund!
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Um..Yeah...

Book: The Diabolic
Author: S.J. Kincaid
Rating 1 Out of 5 Stars

Okay, how does this book have a 4.07 rating? How? Did I even read the same book as everyone else? This is another case of high rated, hyped up book that I ended up hating. I really tried to like it, but, man, it was just lacking so much.

The summary and the cover make this book sound so promising. We have a world in which certain groups of people exist to protect another group. We have a big, power hungry government who makes demands to the people and a main character who offers herself up in order to save someone who she cares about. We have a main character who is trying to make the best of a very bad situation. What could possibly go wrong?

Well, everything...I found myself rolling my eyes so many times as I read this book.

Okay, we are supposed to have a great world building experience going on here, but it just doesn't happen. I know what S.J was trying to do, but there was just something that really fell apart. Maybe it was too much too soon or not enough, but the world building just was yuck for me.

The writing was also pretty bland. I really think that's what turned me away from this book. It was too cookie cutter. There was hardly any emotion that came off the page. It was more like we were expected to read it without becoming all that attached to the world. It was very monotone and just so hard to connect to the world. I really couldn't tell much about the book and I really do think this is why.

Nemesis, our main character, also really wasn't that interesting. She is supposed to have all of these super powers, but ends up falling in love. Wait?! What?! I thought that she wasn't supposed to have any feelings and, yet, she falls in love so quickly. Eye roll...Yeah, it just didn't make any sense.

The romance...Okay, why is it that young adult authors insist on everything being about romance? I mind having it, but it needs to make sense. The main character isn't supposed to have any emotions, but now, she likes kissing? Come on!

Okay, I'm done ranting about this...Time to go on to the next book.
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I really loved this book

The Diabolic by S.J. Kincaid is the first in a young adult fantasy series by the same name, and right off the bat I have to say- The Diabolic is tied for my favorite fantasy read of 2016! (and it is so close I can’t decide which is number 1 or number 2, this or Heartless) The Diabolic was an exciting and riveting read. I could not put it down. I carried this book with me everywhere, just in case I had a couple of moments to get in a page throughout my day. And I don’t do that for too many large books. Normally I carry my kindle around for mid days quicky reads, but even though this one was over 400 pages, I couldn’t resist. Also, if you will notice, I put this as the starter for a series. I don’t technically know that is true or not, but the ending (which killed me!) kind of leaves it open for a follow up, and I am so badly wishing for one that I am putting it out to the universe as true. This is book one in a series! (please, make that be true.)

The Diabolic was awesomely complex, with all kinds of political intrigue and lies, and mind games galore. There was one things that gutted me, and I really wish didn’t happen View spoiler here View Spoiler » but, taking that out- because I am honestly pretending it didn’t really happen, The Diabolic was a perfect fantasy read for me. And here is why. Nemesis kicks serious butt. I know she is designed to be a lethal killing machine with no emotions, which would seem to make her extremely unlikable, but I LOVED her! View Spoiler » She is awesome, and she really can kick some butt. Diabolics are designed to bond with one person, whom they desire to protect at all costs. And Nemesis and Sidonia really did love each other. I liked seeing them interact, but the real fun of the story begins when Nemesis is sent to the imperial court to secretly impersonate Donia so no harm can come to her.

I loved seeing this space world being fleshed out. I thought the world building was awesome. I think fans of fantasy novels mixed in with the political intrigue of court drama will love The Diabolic. It was so expertly executed. The best part of the Diabolic were the excellently constructed, and awesomely different characters. It is not every day you see a main character like Nemesis and a love interest that is so wonderfully complex like Tyus. He is so not your average nice guy, or even almost nice guy. I absolutely loved him, in all of his grey area-ness. He was so unique and different. I have not read a character like him in a long time. Seeing Nemesis and him interact was alsmost as great as seeing Nemesis interact with her dog.

Bottom line: the Diabolic will be a book that you cannot put down. Everything about it is awesome- except for that thing that shall not be named. From the world, to the complex and unique characters, to the plot. I really loved The Diabolic. And I so badly want there to be a sequel! This was one of my favorite books of 2016.

*disclaimer- I received a copy of this book for free.
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@ authors: Stop Killing Your Gay Characters

I was bored throughout most of this, but even the exciting parts couldn't redeem the fact that they killed the Token Gay character not once, but TWICE. One twist was she wasn't actually dead, and then they killed her off again anyway so what was the point of any of it? The bury your gays trope needs to be buried deep.
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Not just another YA novel

4.5 stars rounded up to 5

There are a lot of YA SFF reads out there. This is definitely one of those that's worth picking up. It's set far in the future where people mostly live in space, aboard intergalactic spaceships. Those who live on planets are called Excess, because well, in the future, planet dwellers aren't important. Humans and animals alike are engineered and tailored to suit the needs of the wealthy and powerful.

Bring in Nemesis. She's a Diabolic. Diabolics are basically superhuman assassins who will protect their one bonded human at any cost, even their own life. They'll do it happily, because, well, that's all they know how to do. Nemesis's bonded human is Sidonia Impryean, a Senator's daughter. Nemesis isn't treated like a human by anyone but Sidonia, and even Nemesis herself does not think of herself as a human.

I won't spoil any of the plot because it's filled with dramatic twists and turns that will keep you guessing until the end. I will say that if you look at the basic structure of the plot, it's pretty typical YA. Nothing incredibly new here.

But what makes this story great are the characters. Nemesis's perspective is fresh and interesting, because like I stated above, she doesn't think of herself as human. She has one sole purpose in this world, and that is to protect Sidonia at all costs. Anything else is above her status in life. She has super strength, super speed, super reflexes. She's sort of like a superhero without emotion. She's not evil, but not necessarily good, morally gray. Indifferent to anyone except Sidonia.

The writing was excellent, poetic in places but all relatable and easy to digest. There is a romance in the book, which to be honest, I've grown a little sick of lately, but this one is incredibly well done. It isn't filled with needless angst. The characters don't behave like idiots. It's not a case of instalove. And it creates a very interesting dynamic for this cast of characters. The setting was also beautiful and it often reminded me of the movie Passengers. Sprawling spaceships with all sorts of luxuries, anti gravity chambers, salt baths, viewing windows to the stars, indoor rivers and trees, etc.

All in all- don't dismiss this as just another YA novel. It was an awesome read that I'd recommend to anyone who enjoys the genre.
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Astonishing!

As a particularly finicky yet avid reader, I found myself delightfully immersed in this novel. The entire world within these pages was well designed giving its audience a clear picture without too much boring detail. The characters all stand apart, all have their own voice, which is a feat to be strongly admired. I will provide no spoilers, but I will simply state that you will not be disappointed in this novel. I wait on pins and needles for another great Kincaid work of art! Please be expedient!!!
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Unpleasant Future

Young adult novel. A mixture of fantasy and science fiction fantasy. Mutants bred for special functions: protectors, servants. Fair amount of violence. No swearing. Sex is only hinted at: kissing explicit but sexual intercourse maybe. I filled in the blanks but I might be wrong. Love story of sorts-can a mutant fall in love? Vague non-physical same sex attraction. Well written. I'm too old to be reading this genre and wouldn't re-read or buy more of the series. But don't read too much into this review, as I said I'm ancient.
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Too Predictable plot!

Don't want to sound bad but the story felt good in the begin and later on turned to be outright boring.
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Prepare for a adrenaline filled ride-KNOW this is not my usual genre so my score reflects that. You may actually like it.

I was okay with the book. Please know it was not my usual genre. It had some weird plot twists at times but they did all finally congeal at the end! It also had some overtones into what is happening in the world today as well as our own world history even though it is set way in the future with most of society living in space crafts. There was a clearly defined hierarchy where the 3rd class citizen was basically forced into servitude. It reminded me a lot of Roman history where blood sports were normal and citizens were desensitized to cruelty, fearing their leader because he was just a little crazy! (Nero comes ot mind!) Orgies, rather ruffies were used by many of the elite as were mind altering or enhancing drugs. Since this is not the usual genre that I read there were times I had to put it down for a while, it started you out laying the ground work of the "court" showing you quickly that they were superior and the levels of depravity just kept ratcheting up all the way to the end.
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3.5, rounded up...a tough book to review

I finished reading this book last week. It is a super fast read, one of those stories that sweeps you up from its first pages. I've delayed writing a review because it left me so torn. I fear as a result, this is the most poorly-written review I've ever delivered. You have my apologies for this.

Still, I shall do my best to do this book justice.

I LOVED the last 15% or so of this story. And I loved the 1st 40% as well. But then I found myself feeling like I was reading a retelling of Cinder. That's not necessarily a bad thing though. The Cinder series has a gigantic fan base, and I'm fairly certain that anyone who loved Cinder will feel similar love for The Diabolic.

With this book, we enter a trans-galactic world with an Emperor ruling over the many planets. There is discord amongst the masses, mostly a division between those who believe science should be explored and those who think it best left alone. A sort of AI is created and sold to the wealthy to serve as dedicated guards. These are the diabolics. We get to know one in particular very well, as she is bought to serve as the protector of an unpopular Senator's daughter. And this is where the plot really takes off.

I guess my issues with this book, other than its numerous similarities to Cinder, lie with some of the twists and turns built into the plotline. I wish the author had skipped some of these, the ones that didn't fit, demanded too much suspension of disbelief from the readers, were simply too contrived.

Overall, however, it's a solid story. It flies by. The world and its politics are portrayed nicely. We do identify with, and feel for the characters. And seriously, the last part of the book did redeem itself, in my eyes. I never considered not finishing the book. I am a little curious whether other readers also found any parallels between this and Cinder, however.

Please don't let this disorganized jumble of thoughts that is my review detract you from at least reading the sample, if you've been thinking about reading this book. I don't regret having read it. Not one bit. It has some cool original ideas, betrayals one doesn't see coming, all that kind of good stuff. I recommend it as a perfect relaxing fast read.
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