Smoke Bitten (A Mercy Thompson Novel)
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Smoke Bitten (A Mercy Thompson Novel)

Hardcover – March 17, 2020

Price
$7.99
Format
Hardcover
Pages
352
Publisher
Ace
Publication Date
ISBN-13
978-0440001553
Dimensions
6.33 x 1.15 x 9.29 inches
Weight
1.19 pounds

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“I love these books.”—Charlaine Harris, #1 New York Times bestselling author“Patricia Briggs never fails to deliver an exciting, magic- and fable-filled suspense story.”—Erin Watt, #1 New York Times bestselling author of the Royals series“Patricia Briggs is an incredible writer....I love hanging out with the amazing characters in this series!”—Nalini Singh, New York Times bestselling author “The best new urban fantasy series I've read in years.”—#1 New York Times bestselling author Kelley Armstrong “Mercy Thompson [is] one of urban fantasy's best-loved heroines.”—SF Site “An excellent read with plenty of twists and turns....It left me wanting more.”—#1 New York Times bestselling author Kim Harrison, on Moon Called “The world-building is incredibly lush....A fantastic urban fantasy adventure....A wonderful world to lose oneself in as a reader.”—Fresh Fiction “Briggs' careful and layered building of both her world and her characters is an iron-clad guarantee of an outstanding read! Fans will love this one!”—RT Book Reviews “Briggs continues to surprise and intrigue readers with Mercy's inventiveness and intuition under duress.”— Publishers Weekly “Yet again, we see why Patricia Briggs is a master storyteller.”—Literary Escapism Patricia Briggs is the #1 New York Times bestselling author of the Mercy Thompson urban fantasy series ( Storm Cursed , Silence Fallen ) and the Alpha and Omega novels ( Burn Bright , Dead Heat ). Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. 1 "Are you okay, Mercy?" Tad asked me as he disconnected the wiring harness from the headlight of the 2000 Jetta we were working on.We were replacing a radiator. To do that, we had to take the whole front clip off. It was a rush case on a couple of fronts. The owner had been driving from Portland to Missoula, Montana, when her car blew the radiator. We needed to get her back on the road so she could make her job interview tomorrow at eight a.m.The task was made more urgent by the fact that the owner and her three children under five were occupying the office. She had, she told me, family in Missoula who could watch her children, but nobody but her alcoholic ex-husband to watch them in Portland, so she'd brought them with her. I wished she had family here to watch them. I liked kids, but tired kids cooped up in my office space were another matter.To speed up the repair, Tad was taking the left side and I was working on the right.Like me, he wore grease-stained overalls. Summer still held sway-if only just-so those overalls were stained with sweat, too.Even his hair showed the effects of working in the heat, sticking out at odd angles. It was also tipped here and there with the same grease that marked the overalls. A smudge of black swooped across his right cheekbone and onto his ear like badly applied war paint. I was pretty sure that if anything, I looked worse than he did.I'd worked on cars with Tad for more than a decade, nearly half his life. He'd left for an Ivy League education but returned without his degree, and without the cheery optimism that had once been his default. What he had retained was that scary competence that he'd had when I first walked into his father's garage looking for a part to fix my Rabbit and found the elementary-aged Tad ably running the shop.He was one of the people I most trusted in the world. And I still lied to him."Everything's fine," I said."Liar," growled Zee's voice from under a '68 Beetle.The little car bounced a bit, like a dog responding to its master. Cars do that sometimes around the old iron-kissed fae. Zee said something soft-voiced and calming in German, though I couldn't catch exactly what the words were.When he started talking to me again, he said, "You should not lie to the fae, Mercy. Say instead, 'You are not my friends, I do not trust you with my secrets, so I will not tell you what is wrong.'"Tad grinned at his father's grumble."You are not my friends, I do not trust you with my secrets, so I will not tell you what is wrong," I said, deadpan."And that, father of mine," said Tad, grandly setting aside the headlight and starting on one of the bolts that held in the front clip, "is another lie.""I love you both," I told them."You love me better," said Tad."Most of the time I love you both," I told him before getting serious. "Something is wrong, but it concerns another person's private issues. If that changes, you'll be the first on my list to talk to."I would not talk about problems with my mate to someone else-it would be a betrayal.Tad leaned over, put an arm around me, and kissed the top of my head, which would have been sweet if it weren't a hundred and six degrees outside. Though the new bays in the garage were cooler than the old ones had been, we were all drenched in sweat and the various fluids that were a part of the life of a VW mechanic."Yuck," I squawked, batting him away from me. "You are wet and smelly. No kisses. No touches. Ick. Ick."He laughed and went back to work-and so did I. The laugh felt good. I hadn't been doing a lot of laughing lately."There it is again," said Tad, pointing at me with his ratchet. "That sad face. If you change your mind about talking to someone, I'm here. And if necessary, I can kill someone and put the body where no one will find it.""Drama, drama," grumbled the old fae under the bug. "Always with you children there is drama.""Hey," I said. "Keep that up, and next time I have a horde of zombies to destroy, I won't pick you."He grunted-either at me or at the bug. It was hard to tell with Zee."No one else could have done what I did," he said after a moment. It sounded arrogant, but the fae can't lie, so Zee thought it was true. I did, too. "It is good that you have me for a friend to call upon when your drama overwhelms your life, Liebling. And if you have a body, I can dispose of it in such a way that there would be nothing left to find."Zee was my very good friend, and useful in all sorts of ways besides hiding dead bodies-which he had done. Unlike Tad, Zee wasn't an official employee of the garage he'd sold to me after teaching me how to work on cars and run the business. That didn't mean he was unpaid, just that he came and went on his own terms. Or when I needed him. Zee was dependable like that."Hey," said Tad. "Quit chatting, Mercy, and start working. I'm two bolts up on you-and one of those kids just knocked over the garbage can in the office."I'd heard it, too, despite the closed door between the office and us. Additionally, just before the garbage can had fallen, I'd heard the tired and overworked mom try to keep her oldest from reorganizing all of the parts stored (for sale) on the shelving units that lined the walls. Tad might be half fae, but I was a coyote in my other form-my hearing was better than his.Despite the possible destruction going on in the office, it felt good to fix the old car. I didn't know how to fix my marriage. I didn't even know what had gone wrong."Ready?" asked Tad.I caught the cross member as he pulled the last bolt. A leaking radiator was something I knew how to make right.Before I'd left work, I had showered and changed to clean clothes and shoes. Even so, when I got home, I'd gone across the back deck to go in the kitchen door because I didn't want to risk getting anything from the shop on the new carpet.I'd disemboweled a zombie werewolf on the old carpet, and one of the results of that was that I'd finally discovered a mess that Adam's expert cleaning guru couldn't get out of the white carpet. All of it had been torn up and replaced.Adam had picked it out because I didn't care beyond "anything but white." His choice, a sandy color, was practical and warm. I liked it.We'd had to replace the tile in the kitchen a few months earlier. Slowly but surely the house had been changing from the house that Adam's ex-wife, Christy, had decorated into Adam's and my home. If I'd known how much better I'd feel with new carpet, I'd have hunted down a zombie werewolf to disembowel a long time ago.I toed off my shoes by the door, glanced farther into the kitchen, and paused. It was like walking into the middle of the last scene in a play. I had no idea what was causing all the tension, but I knew I'd interrupted something big.Darryl drew my eye first-the more dominant wolves tend to do that. He leaned against the counter, his big arms crossed over his chest. He kept his eyes on the ground, his mouth a flat line. Our pack's second carried the blood of warriors of two continents. He had to work to look friendly, and he wasn't expending any effort on that right now. Even though he knew I'd come into the house, he didn't look at me. His body held a coiled energy that told me he was ready for a fight.Auriele, his mate, wore an aura of grim triumph-though she was seated at the table on the opposite side of the kitchen from Darryl. Not that she was afraid of him. If Darryl was descended from Chinese and African warlords (and he was-his sister, he'd told me once, had done the family history), Auriele could have been a Mayan warrior goddess. I had once seen the two of them fight as a no-holds-barred team against a volcano god, and it had been breathtaking. I liked and respected Auriele.Auriele's location, which was as far as she could get from Darryl and remain in the kitchen, probably indicated that they were having a disagreement. Interestingly, like Darryl, she didn't look at me, either-though I could feel her attention straining in my direction.The last person in the kitchen was Joel, who was the only pack member besides me who wasn't a werewolf. In his presa Canario form, he sprawled out, as was his habit, and took up most of the free floor space. The strong sunlight streaming through the window brought out the brindle pattern that was usually hidden in the stygian darkness of his coat. His big muzzle rested on his outstretched paws. He glanced at me and then away, without otherwise moving.No. Not away. I followed his gaze and saw that the door to Adam's soundproofed (even to werewolf ears) office was shut. As I turned my attention back to the occupants of the kitchen, my gaze fell on my stepdaughter's purse, which had been abandoned on the counter."What's up?" I asked, looking at Auriele.Maybe my voice was a little unfriendly, but Jesse's purse, the shut door of Adam's office, Darryl's unhappiness, and Auriele's expression combined to tell me that something had happened. Probably, given the people involved and my insight into a few things going on in Jesse's life, that something had to do with my nemesis, Adam's ex-wife and Jesse's mother, Christy.The bane of my existence had finally returned to Eugene, Oregon, where I'd optimistically thought she might be less of a problem. But Christy had a claim on my husband's protection and a stronger claim on my stepdaughter's affection. She was going to be in my life as long as they were in my life.Christy's strikes on me seldom rated a level above annoyance. She was good at subtle attacks, but I'd grown up with Leah, the Marrok's mate, who had been, if not as intelligent, infinitely more dangerous.I would pay a much higher price than dealing with Christy to keep Adam and Jesse. That didn't mean I was going to be happy about her anytime soon. I might be able to take her on just fine, but she hurt Adam and Jesse on a regular basis.Auriele's chin rose, but it was Darryl who spoke. "My wife opened a letter meant for someone else," he said heavily."This is your fault," she snapped-and not at Darryl. "Your fault. You have Adam, her place in the pack, the home that she built, and you still won't let Christy have anything."I might like Auriele, but the reverse was not true because Christy had a way of making everyone around her hyperprotective of her. Auriele was a dominant wolf, which meant she started out protective anyway. Christy just put all of Auriele's instincts into overdrive.Still, I couldn't see her opening anyone else's mail because I was Adam's wife instead of Christy. I decided I didn't have enough information to process her accusations.So I asked for clarification. "You opened a letter from Christy? Or for Christy?""No," said Darryl, staring at his mate. "She opened a letter for Jesse."Auriele glanced at the table, and I noticed, for the first time, that on the table in front of Auriele was a stack of mail. On the top of the stack was a white envelope with Washington State University's distinctive cougar logo-and all the pieces clicked.I pinched my nose. It was a gesture that Bran, the Marrok who ruled all the packs in North America except ours, did so often that it had spread to anyone who associated with him for very long. Since I'd been raised in his pack, it was bound to get to me sooner or later. It didn't help with the frustration, though I felt like it helped me focus. Maybe that was why Bran used it."Oh, for the love of Pete," I said. "Jesse told me she was going to call her mom a week ago. Let me guess-she put it off until yesterday or this morning. And Christy called you. You came over, found the letter from WSU on the table-""In the mailbox," said Darryl.I raised my eyebrows, and Auriele's chin elevated a bit more and her shoulders stiffened. Yep, even in her current state of Christy-born madness, she was a little embarrassed about that one."We got here just as the mail carrier left," she said stiffly. "I thought we could take the mail in.""You found the letter in the mailbox," I corrected myself. "And, given the urgency and trauma that Christy expressed to you about her daughter's change of plans, you had to open it to find proof that dire shenanigans were afoot."Jesse had been accepted to the University of Oregon in Eugene, where her mom lived. She had also been accepted to the University of Washington in Seattle, where Jesse's boyfriend, Gabriel, was attending school.Both were good schools, and she'd let her mother think that she'd been debating about which way to go. Adam and I had both been sure she intended to follow Gabriel-boyfriends outranked parents. I understood why Jesse hadn't wanted to tell her mother-witness the current scene with Auriele. Though putting it off had just been postponing the explosion.But all of Jesse's schooling plans had changed thanks to recent events. Our pack had acquired some new and very dangerous enemies.A week ago Jesse told me she'd decided to stay here and go to Washington State University's Tri-Cities campus. I'd agreed with her reasons. Jesse was a practical person who made generally good choices when her mother wasn't involved. The only advice I'd given Jesse was that she needed to tell Adam and Christy sooner rather than later."Hah," Auriele said with bitter triumph, pointing at me. "I told you it was Mercy's idea."I opened my mouth to retort, but the door to Adam's office jerked open and Jesse stalked out, her cheeks flushed and her fists clenched. She glanced past me at Auriele and gave her a betrayed look that lasted for a long moment until she rounded the corner and took the stairs at a pace that was not quite a run. Read more

Features & Highlights

  • Mercy Thompson, car mechanic and shapeshifter, faces a threat unlike any other in this thrilling entry in the #1
  • New York Times
  • bestselling series.
  • I am Mercedes Athena Thompson Hauptman. My only “superpowers” are that I turn into a thirty-five pound coyote and fix Volkswagens. But I have friends in odd places and a pack of werewolves at my back. It looks like I'm going to need them.Centuries ago, the fae dwelt in Underhill—until she locked her doors against them. They left behind their great castles and troves of magical artifacts. They abandoned their prisoners and their pets. Without the fae to mind them, those creatures who remained behind roamed freely through Underhill wreaking havoc. Only the deadliest survived.Now one of those prisoners has escaped. It can look like anyone, any creature it chooses. But if it bites you, it controls you. It lives for chaos and destruction. It can make you do anything—even kill the person you love the most. Now it is here, in the Tri-Cities. In my territory.It won't, can't, remain. Not if I have anything to say about it.

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Too Many Subplots And Not Enough Writing to Support Them

I like the concept of this book. I think it was ambitious to have three subplots along with the main creature of the week theorem, and honestly at this point Mercy needs that level of story complexity. Unfortunately, when Briggs/her publishers capped herself at the same amount of pages as each and every book beforehand, it shortchanged all the plots and left them all feeling rushed and unsatisfying. The solution to the creature in this book was also rather predictable and made me cringe a bit as well. This was the first Patricia Briggs book that I've read and felt afterward that I wished I hadn't bought it because I'll never read it again. I can tell there is important information to build on in future books, but reading this book was not a pleasant experience. I think it's time break the mold of the ~325 page books and write one that can actually fit these plots into the story with satisfaction.
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Amazing from cover to cover!

I loved this book! I have to admit that I am a giant fan of this series. These are books that I can read over and over without ever growing tired of them. When someone asks me for book recommendations, this series is at the top of my list. I went into this book with really high expectations and they were all met. I enjoyed every moment I spent reading this book.

Mercy always seems to have a lot of things going on in her life and things are no different in this book. The book starts off with some pack and ex-wife drama and that is before the fae leaves a doorway in their backyard. Before you know it, lives are at risk from the new enemy on the loose. It is a lot for a Volkswagon mechanic to handle.

Mercy is an amazing character. I love how calm she is in even the most extreme situation. When the situation seems to be almost impossible to manage, she is able to make reasonable decisions that have a big impact on the final outcome. Mercy turns into a small coyote but she has the bravery of an entire large pack. I love that if there is a problem with her mate or someone else in the pack, she will address it and if someone or something is threatening those she feels responsible for, she will do something about it.

This was an exciting story. There was plenty of action scattered throughout the story to keep things interesting. I thought that Mercy, Adam, and the rest of the pack had already faced every monster imaginable but Briggs was able to conjure up something really unique that I did not see coming. I loved the way that the book wove together several different threads that I found equally entertaining.

I would highly recommend this series to others. This is the twelfth book in the Mercy Thompson series which really should be read in order. Trust me, all the books in this series are so good that you don't want to miss any of them anyway. I cannot wait to read more from this amazing author!

I received a digital review copy of this book from Berkley Publishing Group via NetGalley.
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Nowhere near as good as the other Mercy books

I love the Mercy Thompson book series. I usually devour a book in a day or two but this one took me two weeks to finish. I love the characters but this plot line was too predictable and I hated what was going on between Mercy and Adam. The unexplained, until too late, tension between them made the book difficult to read.
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Meh...

Love the author but this book was pretty boring, if someone asked me what happened I would say not much. I also jokingly guessed who the villain was and was very disappointed when I found out that I was right, not very creative and a bit childish in my opinion. Will stick with the series though and hope it picks back up.
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Not as good as the others.

I love this author, but I feel like she’s running out of ideas for the mercy verse and is probably grasping at straws at this point. This book was harder to visualize, was less well thought out and harder to understand than the others in the series. It’s definitely not at the same level of moon called or iron kissed. I feel like maybe she needs to take some time to get back to her origins as far as the series goes.
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Not bad, but not really good either.

This felt like a predictable short story crammed on top of half a story with a forced for time chapter added for a resolution. I enjoyed the actual smoke bitten part of the plot, but it was predictable and could have been done in about 60 pages. The "consequences from the previous book" part of the plot was entertaining as well until it came to a forced resolution in the last chapter which actual felt like an editor forced it it be added instead of letting the story run its course over the next book or two. There was a lot more story there and I know Patricia is more capable than this. Good book by most other author standards, just an ok Briggs book.
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3.5 stars: loved the fae storyline but Christy the crutch needs to go

Adam and Mercy’s encounter with the witches has affected their mate bond, and Mercy is not sure what to do or how to “fix” the problem. At the same time, Underhill has opened a doorway in their backyard and something nasty escaped: a creature of smoke who can take over people and force them to kill. Add to that an invading pack of wolves intent on taking over and Mercy has a lot on her plate.

Aiden is nice addition to Mercy’s growing family, and his connection to Underhill makes him part of the story here. Though I miss seeing Stefan, I’m glad to see him on the back burner for a while in favor of the Fae. I love the mythology they bring to the world building, and seeing Mercy use her brains and instincts to out-maneuver them when necessary. The reveal of just what the creature is was fun and the future consequences of the story have a lot of potential.

What I didn’t like was the family drama. Briggs needs to kill off Christy; she has become a crutch. Her and the angst she causes the pack has become repetitive and annoying. Mercy has gone through hell with the pack and they still fall for Christy’s vapid machinations, even Adam?! It’s just not believable any longer, especially given how important Mercy is to Adam and Jesse. And it’s not like she’s a dominant either. She should arouse their protective instincts as well. Unfortunately, I think Briggs has fallen into a trap some writers do when they have a popular couple – they feel the need to put tension into the relationship to prop up every plot instead of just allowing the couple to be a good team.

Overall, I enjoyed the Fae-driven story and still love the characters, but I think killing Christy the crutch would make for better stories going forward.
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Still going strong!

Smoke Bitten is enjoyable and another example of how resilient Mercy can be and how strong her support system is. Of course, Mercy realizing this is part of a learning experience for her. This book is full of the usual characters including the pack, the vampires we love, and the Fae. There are interesting developments and of course conversations that give you chills in both good ways and bad.

Underhill is kicking up trouble, and in the midst of this we get to see more of Aiden and him learning how much he means to Mercy. This is something that stands out in this book, Aiden’s growing place in the family and I’m excited to see this develop further. In addition to the prisoner that has escaped Underhill, there is also a Werewolf pack that is encroaching on their territory and something else that Adam is dealing with on his own. A lot happens in this book, but nothing is left hanging.

Twelve books into this series and it is still going strong and I don’t ever want them to end. I definitely give this book 5 stars because we see a lot of growth and touch basis with a lot of characters, including Bran. There are fun moments in-between the drama and seriousness and moments that just make you so happy. All bases are covered and characters grow. I can’t recommend this enough.
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Not A Fan Of This One

I wanted to like Smoke Bitten, as I am a fan of Mercy Thompson, but the book was just more of the same. It might be time for author Patricia Briggs to move on to a new set of characters, as the Mercy series has gotten stale.
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Book series

Love this book series