Navajo Autumn: A Navajo Nation Mystery
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Navajo Autumn: A Navajo Nation Mystery

Paperback – Unabridged, March 4, 2013

Price
$12.99
Format
Paperback
Pages
188
Publisher
CreateSpace Independent Publishing Platform
Publication Date
ISBN-13
978-1482393187
Dimensions
6 x 0.43 x 9 inches
Weight
9.3 ounces

Description

Navajo Autumn by R. Allen Chappell - first in a new series, has been compared to the works of Tony Hillerman, and rightly so. Set on the Navajo Reservation, a land steeped in tradition, the fast-paced story and depth of characters draw readers into an intriguing look at the culture. Chappell not only wrote an interesting book, but told a great story. Natural born story tellers are a pleasure to read. Personally, I could not put this book down and read far into the night to find out how it was going to end. Bella online: Mystery book reviews by Edie Dykeman Fans of Tony Hillerman will enjoy this highly rated mystery! Law schoolgraduate Charlie Yazzie investigates the strange deaths of two verydifferent people in New Mexico, and the mystery leads deep into themystical culture of the Navajo. Kboards Review With the deserved success of Tony Hillerman's Leaphorn and Chee mysteries, other aspiring authors hustled to find their own place in this new niche. Some were good, many were not. What always makes the difference in this or any crime fiction is the writer's storytelling ability and his knowledge of setting andcharacters. R. Allen Chappell has all this in abundance. Kittling: Books The greater part of my life has been spent in the Southwest, a good bit of it in the back-country. I grew up with the Navajo, went to school with them, and later worked alongside them, forging enduring friendships along the way. Those friendships became the inspiration for this series. My writing focuses on the people of the Four Corners region, past and present. I tend not to romanticize my characters, preferring instead to paint them as I find them. They have much the same qualities, good and bad, as the rest of us. Though this book is a work of fiction, a concerted effort was made to maintain the accuracy of the culture and people, as I have come to know them. I hope you like them as well as I do. This story hearkens back to a slightly more traditional time on the reservation, and while the places and culture are real, the characters and their names are fictitious and any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental. Writer, poet, R. Allen Chappell's work has appeared in magazines, literary and poetry publications, and featured on public radio and television. Chappell grew up at the edge of the great reservation in the Four Corners area. He and his wife spend most winters on a small sailboat and summers at home in Colorado where he pursues a lifelong interest in Southwestern prehistory. He welcomes readers comments at [email protected] Read more

Features & Highlights

  • Newly revised and edited!
  • Thomas Begay is found dead-drunk under the La Plata Bridge ...not unusual for Thomas Begay. What is unusual, is the beautiful BIA investigator Patsy Greyhorse, found lying beside him ...not drunk, or even a Navajo, but very dead nonetheless. Long time friend Charlie Yazzi, fresh from law school, risks his career ...and even his life to help his old schoolmate. The Answer seems to lie with the Yeenaaldiooshii ...should one choose to believe in such things. In the far reaches of the reservation there still are traditional Navajos living their lives with few concessions to modern mores. Guided by their strong sense of cultural heritage these outliers remain a strong anchor for the Navajo Nation. This story follows the lives of such people, caught up in a plot that could have far-reaching implications for the entire tribe. "The depth of character and culture transcends that generally seen in novels of the genre."

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Not perfect, but engrossing with a wonderful sense of place

I am a big Tony Hillerman fan and have fallen in love with the 4 corners area in large part due to his works. I'm always looking for more great stories in that setting with the Dine as primary characters.

I wasn't sure what I was going to get with Mr. Chappell's work, but it was both inexpensive and relatively short, so I felt worth trying. And I am very glad I did! I found the story immediately engrossing and the narrative does a great job of establishing itself in the land and its people.

Like some other reviewers, I felt that I saw through the mystery quite early. But that didn't particularly disappoint me - I was more interested in how the characters were going to successfully resolve the central mystery and its related complications.

Other reviewers criticized the proofreading and grammatical structure of the story. I didn't find those issues to be a huge problem for me. Mr. Chappell is a good story teller and a good story is going to carry the reader past those things. A bad storyteller with excellent grammar is not preferable!

All that said, I did feel that the character development was inconsistent. Charlie is first established as a college-educated Navajo with ambitions. Later he is more of an altruistic friend who readily ignores his superiors. It was a tad difficult to get a fix on Charlie's character at first, but once I discarded the initial impression, it was fine. Still, not something readers should have to do.

Thomas was a bigger problem. A never-do-well drunk, his relationship with the mother of his ex is not really brought out till pretty far along in the book. And Thomas turns out to be stronger and better than the character you first meet. Two different people, in fact.

Forced to forgo drink for a while, Thomas suddenly becomes a sober, mature man working on his future. A nice ending, but I wasn't sold. Alcoholism doesn't let go so readily. I certainly WAS rooting for Thomas to turn things around, but there is simply no way it happens this quickly with this little pain.

Thomas runs into an abused woman with two children - children that turn out to be his! This would be a spoiler except that they exit the story as quickly as they entered it. Wow! I don't think the story needed this big revelation if it wasn't going to figure into things later. Grist for another story, in my opinion.

Finally, there is some snarkiness in the Prologue (actually placed at the end in the Kindle version) alluding to "mystery-novel Navajos". I didn't think this side-swipe was necessary. I wasn't looking for a Hillerman clone and I didn't find one. That's great! I have already bought the next novel by Mr. Chappell because I think he is a great story-teller with genuine insight into the character of the Dine and their land. I hope he can accept that without feeling the need to dig at a deceased author whose books have undoubtedly brought a lot of readers to Mr. Chappell's works.

Again, whatever issues I've raised, the fact is, this is a dynamite story that is (mostly) very well told. I am excited to have found Mr. Chappell and am eager to read his other books.

UPDATE: My issue with the Thomas's children being a "throw away" literary device was off base - they are the focal point of the next book in the series.

Also in conversations with the author, he clarified that when he refers to "mystery-novel Navajos" he was NOT casting aspersions on Tony Hillerman, but alluding to the cottage industry that came in his wake.

Finally, I am well into the follow on novel and enjoying it as I thought I would.
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Make sure you have plenty of time because you can't put this book down...

I must say Ron you're on your way to one hell of a writing career! I really enjoyed your first book! I'm not personally a fan of mysteries, but you definately changed my mind! It was a great story with some amazing story and character development... You set up some great plot points, and you kept the twists, and turns coming! I was already to put it down for the evening, and I hit the Witch Chapter, and couldn't stop from there!!!

P. S. Thanks for the signed copy!!! I couldn't bear to damage it though so I read it on the Kindle... lol
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Count me out - trite and unrealistic

I wanted to like this book as I am a big fan of Tony Hillerman, James D. Doss, and others writing about Native American investigators in the Southwest. While some of the writing I liked, there were a number of things that just irritated me and didn't seem to be realistic.
Spoiler alert - will reveal some plot details! Our hero Charlie is an attorney working for Navajo Tribal Law Enforcement. He happens to get involved in an investigation of Thomas, who has been implicated in a murder and then stolen a police car and escaped on to the reservation. Charlie is thanked for his help and ordered to not interfere with the case. He then decides to sneak out to where Thomas lives and helps this wanted fugitive escape to a more secret location. Charlie then intercepts an incoming witness at the airport, gets him drunk, and steals the evidence from him - the only copy of a computer disc, and then the witness is murdered. Charlie thinks the gal at the office is his only hope to decipher the computer disc - she goes out on a limb for him and breaks department rules and secretly prints out the disc for him and hides it, just because she likes him, or something - her motivation isn't explained. Turns out there is a big corruption and murder conspiracy in the tribe!
This kind of sloppy unprofessionalism, concealing evidence, lying, stealing, insubordination, and the rest of it didn't seem like the type of behavior that would ensure continued employment in a law enforcement agency. Instead, there is no consequence - the secretary is still "covering for him" at the office!
And the ending was just abrupt, no coda, no personal resolutions for the characters, just the promise of further adventures. Sorry, but count me out.
18 people found this helpful
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Disappointed

After Hillerman passed on I tried this author and could not get beyond the first chapter. Seems as though he read the Hillerman series and tried to do a take off with no success using similar names and places. Anne Hillerman has carried on the Navajo cop series in a good way. Others may like this....this is only my own perception and no harm intended.
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Move Off This Reservation!

I looked forward to having beautiful "pictures" of that area of our country a la Tony Hillerman. Some of the novel did just that. And that is all that was worthwhile for me. The story was a mixed up one that made little sense from the first page to the last. The characters lacked any kind of remembered characteristics. Read Tony's daughter's books.
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Don't spend money on these.

These are a poorly written copied from Hillerman. Read Hillerman instead for the real, true Navaho experience.
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Wrong turn on the res.

This book was a real disappointment.The book is more of a novella than a novel. The site descriptions are good but the author hasn't a clue to character development, much less plot development. Several Amazon reviews said they were looking for a new Tony Hillerman. Save your money.
this book ain't it.
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Don't bother

This writer needs to take more time with the story. It all felt so rushed. I won't be reading more as a result. Disappointing effort
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A story as boring as its title

I gather that the target audience of this book is a young adult male with no appetite for plot surprises or imaginative dialogue. The book itself is rife with grammatical and typographical errors: (1) Apostrophes that precede words to indicate dropped letters are turned backwards. The author apparently never learned how to fix this on his computer. (2) The text is rife with examples of straight quotation marks instead of smart quotes. A basic tutorial in Microsoft Word would have helped. (3) The author has no idea of the proper usage of an ellipsis. (4) I found at least four spelling errors (e.g., out maneuver instead of outmaneuver) that a copy editor, had the editor used one, would have spotted. The good news? At only 150 pages of large-point type, the book is soon over.
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Interesting story; not particularly well written; okay for a first book

Tony Hillerman he's not. But how many first books by any author are fabulous in all respects? Chappell has promise, and this first book is readable, interesting, and drew me in, albeit, not in an all consuming way. I have been able to get up and do other things, then go back to reading again. That says a lot, for me. So I have bought the next two, in hopes that his characters become more developed, rather than a little flat and just "plot movers", and that the stories and Navajo cultural details stay just as interesting as in the first book. So, worth reading, just don't expect the world this first time.
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