Hunted (The Profiler, 1)
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Hunted (The Profiler, 1)

Paperback – December 31, 2013

Price
$14.95
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Paperback
Pages
368
Publisher
MIRA
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ISBN-13
978-0778315841
Dimensions
5.44 x 0.98 x 8.24 inches
Weight
9.8 ounces

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From Booklist Rookie FBI profiler Evelyn Baine is called in to investigate a crime scene involving the Bakersville Burier, a serial killer whose calling card is leaving dead women half buried in the forests of Virginia. Although she is young and relatively inexperienced, her bosses think Evelyn has a knack for getting into the heads of the killers she is tracking—but this one eludes her, just as he eluded two previous FBI agents, who ended up dead. Is Evelyn next? When she is abducted (and released) early on, she initially doesn’t connect it to her new case, a plot element that seems a little hard to swallow. Then pieces from Evelyn’s past start coming back to her—like the time when her best friend was abducted when she was a preteen, and Evelyn should have been a victim as well. Right. There’s an awful lot of predictable twists and coincidences here, but Heiter’s characters are interesting, and the dialogue is realistic. Libraries where serial killer novels are popular might consider adding this debut novel, which is set to have a sequel. --Rebecca Vnuk a Publishers Weekly bestselling and award-winning author ELIZABETH HEITER likes her suspense to feature strong heroines, chilling villains, psychological twists and a little romance. Her research has taken her into the minds of serial killers, through murder investigations, and onto the FBI Academy’s shooting range. Her novels have been published in more than a dozen countries and translated into eight languages. Visit her at www.elizabethheiter.com. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. "BAINE. MY OFFICE. NOW!"FBI Special Agent Evelyn Baine spun the chair in her tiny cubicle, but her boss was already slamming the door to his office.She shrugged back into her suit jacket, buttoned it to cover the weapon at her hip and straightened her spine. Dan Moore's tone didn't bother her; the ASAC—Special Agent in Charge—was always curt with her. In fact, getting called into his office this early was a good thing. It meant she was getting a new case to profile.Her anticipation grew as she wove around cubicles in the unmarked office building in Aquia, Virginia, where the FBI's Behavioral Analysis Unit (BAU) was housed. This was her favorite time, early in the morning before most agents arrived, before the smell of burned coffee and stale air-conditioning permeated everything, when it was just her and her cases.She entered Dan's office and found him settled at his oversize desk. The head of BAU was, as usual, surrounded by an aura of stress that gave his skin a grayish hue and constantly slanted his eyebrows toward his nose. Today, he also looked frazzled."Take a seat." Dan popped three antacids into his mouth and took a swig of coffee. "Ever been to Bakersville?""No, but it's north of here, right? Small and rural?" She leaned forward, ready for another chance to take on one of society's worst predators. Ready for another chance to give someone else the closure she'd never had. "What happened there?"Dan frowned, maybe because he hadn't warmed to her in the past year despite her high success rate. Then again, maybe the antacids had gotten stuck in his throat.Evelyn didn't need to hear the answer to her question to know there were sleepless nights and more long hours in her future. When police had a problem so terrible they couldn't handle it themselves, they came to BAU. Given the number of profile requests faxed into the office every day, to actually get a profiler assigned meant a police department's problem was both unusual and deadly."Earlier this morning, two murdered women were discovered in the woods," Dan said. "There are a few preliminaries in the file I emailed you, though not much. I took a lot of it over the phone, but I think it's better if you go straight to the crime scene and get the specifics firsthand. Bakersville wants you on-site now.""Now? For only two murders?" The question might have sounded insensitive to her a year ago, but she'd been here long enough to understand that time was a commodity BAU agents didn't have. Normally, the police would have to strike out big before BAU swooped in."It's a weird one. The Bakersville police are leading the investigation and they've asked us to consult. Police Chief Caulfield wants a preliminary criminal personality profile immediately."Dan turned back to his computer, effectively dismissing her. "If you need help, ask Greg to go with you."Evelyn hid her annoyance. A year ago, Greg Ibsen had initiated her into the world of behavioral analysis. But she wasn't a rookie anymore. She didn't need anyone checking her work simply because she was the youngest agent in the office, the one with the least field experience. She'd earned her spot at BAU. And she worked her ass off every day to prove it."Is there anything else?""Just get to work. Bakersville's never seen anything like this. They're not equipped to handle this killer."She nodded and stood. "I'm on it." As she left his office, she couldn't stop herself from glancing at the partition near the coffeepot serving as a bulletin board for anything the agents found of interest. Next to an article on a new brain-mapping technique and a list of the Most Wanted, someone had thumb-tacked a sheet with the heading Predator Still at Large. Underneath was a computer-generated sketch of Dan.The spot-on sketch had everything from the dome-shaped head that was only bald on top to the thin, pinched lips, but Dan hadn't yet figured out who it was. Evelyn wasn't going to be the one to enlighten him.As soon as she was ensconced in her cubicle again, she quickly skimmed through the meager file in her email, then grabbed her briefcase. When she turned around, she almost slammed into Greg.He yanked his mug out of her way, sloshing coffee onto his shoes.She grimaced. "Sorry, Greg."He shrugged, setting his coffee down as he slipped out of his suit coat to reveal his standard dress shirt and some cartoon-character tie. "No worries. I'll spill it on myself later, anyway."Greg Ibsen had been at BAU seven years longer than she had, logging thousands more hours profiling complicated cases. Somehow, he was still the most easygoing guy in the office—even after he'd gotten stuck training the newbie Dan didn't want.Dropping into his chair, he said, "One of these days maybe you could sleep in a little. Stop making everyone else look lazy." The smile in his tone told her he was at least partly kidding.Evelyn fiddled with the thin gold band topped with a small diamond—once her grandma's—that she never took off. If her grandma realized how much time she spent working, she would've told her the same thing Greg often did: to get a hobby.But her grandma would have understood why she didn't. She'd been the one to pull Evelyn's life back together when her best friend, Cassie Byers, had been abducted. She was the only one who truly understood Evelyn's drive to find her, even seventeen years later.Pushing back memories of the woman who'd raised her and now needed extensive care herself, she peered at Greg around their shared cubicle wall. Unlike her blank one, his was filled with pictures of his wife, Marnie, and their adopted children, Lucy and Josh. "Dan just gave me a new case. I'm heading out the door.""Really? What did you get?""Serial killer."Greg's eyebrows reached for each other. "Really? And you're going to the site now?"Serial killers were what the unit was best known for profiling, but between evaluating terrorist threats and interpreting the behavior of arsonists, bomb-makers and child predators, they didn't always get priority."Dan said it was weird." And considering the cases they dealt with regularly, that was saying a lot."Weird, huh? Tell me about it when you get back.""Sure. Dan thinks I should ask for your help, anyway.""What? The little lady can't handle the big, scary serial killer alone?" Greg joked. "Didn't you hear that BAU has a no-womenallowed rule?"Evelyn wished Dan's attitude didn't bother her. "You know what a rule-breaker I am."He snorted, because that was just as much of a joke as her being unfit to work as a profiler. "Good luck with the case.""Thanks," she said. But luck had nothing to do with it.She'd worked toward this for most of her life and she was a damn good profiler. Whatever the case, however wily the criminal, she'd write a profile that would bring him to justice.The Bakersville, Virginia, police station squatted on a bare patch of land. The faded brick building with weathered windows seemed out of place amid the hundred-year-old pine trees bracketing it on three sides. It was off the main road through town, beside a mom-and-pop coffee shop and a neighborhood of starter homes.Evelyn slung her briefcase over her shoulder and trudged up the steps into the station. Inside, it was abuzz with uniformed officers. Two had a cuffed prisoner between them, obviously brought in on a drunk and disorderly charge. Others wore nervous, uncertain expressions, probably because of the murders.Evelyn walked up to the desk, where a young officer sat. "Evelyn Baine. I'm the criminal investigative analyst. Chief Caulfield is expecting me."The officer's gaze shifted over her questioningly, and Evelyn tried not to let it get her hackles up. Bakersville was rural, and despite the diversity surrounding it, almost entirely white.With the mocha-colored skin she'd inherited from her Zimbabwean father and the sea-green eyes she'd gotten from her Irish-English mother, she stood out.When she added, "I'm with the FBI," the officer's gaze traveled skeptically from her tidy bun, over her well-tailored suit to her sturdy heels, then squinted at the credentials she held up.Finally, he nodded and she tucked them back in her pocket, tugging down the hem of her blazer on the side where she wore her gun. The expensive clothes sometimes raised eyebrows, but they helped bolster her self-confidence when she arrived at a crime scene and had to establish credibility immediately."It's this way," the officer told her, leading her through a bullpen packed with cops.There were a few civilians, too, most demanding to know about rumors of a killer. One, a heavyset, bearded man, was asking about ViCAP.Surprised at the mention of the Violent Criminal Apprehension Program, the database the Bureau used to match unsolved cases of violent crime, Evelyn glanced back.The blue-eyed civilian was talking to an officer whose uncertain stance and red face labeled him a rookie. "I don't think we do that," the officer said with a shrug.Evelyn made a mental note that no one had cross-checked the murders. Most small towns weren't plugged into ViCAP. Once she saw the crime scene, she'd try to determine whether these were the killer's first crimes; if not, she'd access the database herself and see if she could track him before he'd come to Bakersville.The officer escorting her knocked on a door marked Police Chief Tanner Caulfield, then left her alone."Come in," a distinctly Southern voice barked.The man inside was young for a police chief. When he stood, he looked as if he had more than a foot on her five feet two inches and a past as a high school linebacker without quite enough bulk to make it into college ball.Evelyn thrust out her hand. "I'm Evelyn Baine, from the FBI's Behavioral Analysis Unit. I'm here to consult on your murder investigation."His thick eyebrows furrowed. He stared at her dainty hand with its short, unpolished nails, then took it carefully, as though he was afraid he'd break it. As he shook her hand, he was also shaking his head. "Sorry. You don't look like an agent.""Really?" Evelyn replied, frustrated by the too-common reaction. "What does an agent look like?""Bigger. But yours is a desk job, right?"His assumption annoyed her, but a year of consulting with outside law enforcement had shown her the best way to respond. He wasn't going to respect her unless he thought she could hold her own in the field. "I was a field agent for five years before transferring to BAU. I worked violent crime."Tanner's eyebrows jerked up, and he studied her a little more closely as he settled in his chair. "You're going to give me a profile of the killer, right? Something that'll tell us how to catch this bastard?""That's right. It's my job to study behavioral evidence the UNSUB doesn't know he left at the crime scene." That was what had always fascinated her about her job—turning an unknown subject (UNSUB) into an identified killer from clues he didn't even realize he was leaving behind. "From that, I can tell you how to locate him and how to interrogate him once he's in custody.""Okay," Tanner said slowly. "What exactly do you mean by behavioral evidence?""What I find at the crime scene helps me see how he thinks, what he's looking for in his victims, why he kills.""Uh-huh." Tanner sounded as if he didn't quite understand profiling, but that didn't matter.Because she understood Tanner. Her job wasn't just about profiling the perpetrators. It was also about profiling the people who called her onto their turf. Most of them only came to the FBI if they were desperate, and many of them resented it. She'd learned fast that sizing up whoever was in charge made her job easier.Five minutes in Tanner's office was all she needed to figure out that his position was a major source of pride and that he'd felt underqualified before he'd been tested with a serial killer. As long as she was careful with his ego, he'd be eager to listen to her."Let's get started." Energy hummed in Evelyn's veins. Time to nail another predator to the wall. And he'd never see her coming."Do you have the profile for me now?"Without knowing anything other than that there'd been two murders? Did Tanner think she was a psychic? "I'm afraid it doesn't work that way.""How does it work?""You have cops at the scene? Let's start there. I want to join them."Tanner frowned. "It's ugly, Agent Baine."Evelyn nodded. As a woman, she got this reaction a lot. "Trust me, I've probably seen worse.""Okay." He stood. "I'll take you."Evelyn followed him out to a patrol car and, ten minutes later, they were talking to Jack Harris to tell him they'd be joining the other cops on his property."I wanted him to know I was back. We wouldn't want him to think we were trespassing and shoot at us," Tanner told her as they returned to the car.Evelyn glanced at the elderly man watching them from his doorway. He looked as if he shouldn't be able to walk without assistance, let alone fire a weapon."Why are we driving? How far into his property are we going?"Tanner gunned the engine. "Pretty far."He pulled out of the driveway and headed back the way they'd come, then unexpectedly swung left onto a dirt trail. The police car slowed as it bounced over the uneven ground, and branches scratched both sides.Finally, he pulled to a stop behind several other patrol cars and the medical examiner's van. The forest seemed to have swallowed them. Tall oak, hickory and pine trees blocked out most of the sun as Evelyn followed Tanner deeper into the woods."Does this area get much traffic?""The woods?" Tanner grunted. "None. Harris has a hundred acres back here and he guards it with his shotgun. He's the one who found the bodies, and only because he thought he spotted someone trespassing.""So where you parked, that was the closest place to bring a vehicle to the crime scene?""Yes.""Then the killer knows the area. And he's not looking for attention.""He's not?"Evelyn had no idea how deep into the woods they were going, but she couldn't hear the cops yet. "He didn't expect these bodies to be found. So he's not looking for press coverage.""You might change your mind when you see the bodies," Tanner muttered.Evelyn held back her rebuttal. It didn't matter what state the bodies were in, the drop site told its own story. And this one was already telling her they had a killer who liked his privacy, who was careful and even-tempered. Someone who'd be hard to track down"There it is," Tanner finally said, pointing.Up ahead, crime scene tape had been strung around trees, and cops were working inside it. Two men in black coats with the words Medical Examiner's Office stenciled on the pockets were carrying a gurney. Read more

Features & Highlights

  • Terror stalks a small Virginia town
  • FBI rising star and criminal profiler Evelyn Baine knows how to think like a serial killer. But she's never chased anyone like the Bakersville Burier, who hunts young women and displays them, half-buried, deep in the woods. As the body count climbs, Evelyn's relentless pursuit of the killer puts her career—and her life—at risk. And the evil lurking in the Burier's mind may be more than even she can unravel.
  • Terror is closer than she thinks…
  • The Bakersville Burier knows he's got an FBI profiler on his trail. He knows who she is and where to find her. And he's biding his time, because he's planned a special punishment for Evelyn. She may have tracked other killers, but he vows to make this her last chase. This time it's
  • her
  • turn to be hunted!

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Sort of goofy......

After all these stars, I hate to be the dissenting vote, but I thought the story was a cheesy romance trying to pass itself off as a FBI thriller. The main character Evelyn is a cliche: a tortured childhood she keeps secret but the hunk in the story can sense this vulnerable side to her and (of course) falls madly in love with her. She's stoic and smart and can out-wrestle a 200 lb man........ good grief. I read it all the way to the end just to see who the bad guy was, but I was rolling my eyes the whole way.
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A Pulpy, Page Turning Thriller

Heiter brings a wonderful eye for detail to a story about an FBI agent, local cops, a serial killer, and all kinds of wonderfully shady characters. She's got the technical and procedural realities of homicide investigation and profiling down cold, but doesn't let them slow down the story. Things move fast, everyone and everything isn't always what you or the hero first think, and the ending is that great kind that makes you want to skip to the bottom of the page just to relieve the suspense.
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Fast-Paced FBI thriller

One of the most interesting books I have read in a long time. Not your your typical suspense book formula. A page-turner worth buying.
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Baine is flat, plot is standard, but good enugh start for this debut writer

Elizabeth Heiter's debut novel, 'Hunted' (Harlequin Mira 2014) is a solid start, but I'll need more to keep reading. This is the story of FBI profiler Evelyn Baine who struggles to stop a serial killer who buries his victims up to their necks after he's killed them. Baine--according to the best profilers in the BAU (think Criminal Minds)--is the best among them, but when this monster captures her and she barely escapes, it becomes personal. It also throws her off her game.

The meat of the story is Baine's efforts to prove herself in a male world despite her petite stature and stunning looks, wrestle with demons from her past that make her socially awkward around pretty much everyone, and fight a growing attraction to an HRT friend (the FBI's hostage rescue team). She spends much of the time doubting herself even while she excels at her job. In true romance fashion, the story is salted with a bubbling love interest she fights, but is distracted by.

This is Heiter's first in a series starring Evelyn Baine, FBI profiler (next one will be 'Vanished', due out in approx. a year). I love that character and eagerly read this type of novel. In Heiter's case, her main character is flat (gorgeous, troubled background, genius talent mitigated by constant self-doubt). I don't see a lot of growth between page one and page 363. The plot is standard, spiced with a few unique twists I won't share. I'll be honest--the focus on the boy-girl stuff gets in the way for me. It may not for you. It is more appropriately cataloged in the sub genre 'Romantic thriller'.

Still, this is only book one in Heiter's hopefully illustrious writing career. Many new authors start rocky and become mountains. I'd recommend it with reservations.
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Baine is flat, plot is standard, but good enugh start for this debut writer

Elizabeth Heiter's debut novel, 'Hunted' (Harlequin Mira 2014) is a solid start, but I'll need more to keep reading. This is the story of FBI profiler Evelyn Baine who struggles to stop a serial killer who buries his victims up to their necks after he's killed them. Baine--according to the best profilers in the BAU (think Criminal Minds)--is the best among them, but when this monster captures her and she barely escapes, it becomes personal. It also throws her off her game.

The meat of the story is Baine's efforts to prove herself in a male world despite her petite stature and stunning looks, wrestle with demons from her past that make her socially awkward around pretty much everyone, and fight a growing attraction to an HRT friend (the FBI's hostage rescue team). She spends much of the time doubting herself even while she excels at her job. In true romance fashion, the story is salted with a bubbling love interest she fights, but is distracted by.

This is Heiter's first in a series starring Evelyn Baine, FBI profiler (next one will be 'Vanished', due out in approx. a year). I love that character and eagerly read this type of novel. In Heiter's case, her main character is flat (gorgeous, troubled background, genius talent mitigated by constant self-doubt). I don't see a lot of growth between page one and page 363. The plot is standard, spiced with a few unique twists I won't share. I'll be honest--the focus on the boy-girl stuff gets in the way for me. It may not for you. It is more appropriately cataloged in the sub genre 'Romantic thriller'.

Still, this is only book one in Heiter's hopefully illustrious writing career. Many new authors start rocky and become mountains. I'd recommend it with reservations.
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Derivative Of Other Books In The Serial Killer Genre

I am probably not the best reviewer of this book as though I like mystery/suspense novels the sub genre of serial killers is decidedly not my favorite and HUNTED definitely falls in to that category. That said I found HUNTED to be very derivative of other such books with a female lead with a traumatic past starring in it (think Clarice in SILENCE OF THE LAMBS). I really need to make sure I don't pick any more books from this novel's imprint Harlequin Mira since every selection from that publisher that I have read has been pretty dreadful.
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Hunted Is a Hit

I don't read many thrillers, but I loved the aspect of a profiler, so I checked my terror at the page and dove in. Yes, it scared me silly. I think that's the point. The main character, Evelyn, was so finely drawn I felt like I really knew her. Heiter knows a lot about how the FBI works and she knows profilers, but she doesn't overwhelm with research. She knows just the right amount of detail to include. Serial killers are creepy, but Heiter adds the twist of this profiler being stalked. That's not a spoiler, it happens early, but it adds to the tension and ups the stakes. I also like the way Heiter fills out the story with some brief flashbacks to her past that lead to a teaser for the next in this series. Can't wait!
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Could have been better

I was very excited to read the novel based on the description but felt let down by the time I got to the end (which was predictable by the way). The beginning was fantastic, reminding me of a really good Hannibal episode. But then after a couple of chapters I didn't like the direction the book was taking. It has elements of a romance novel that I think will pick up a lot in the next book, which doesn't appeal to me. I will say the climax fight helped end the book on a strong note, but the stuff in between the beginning and the ending was not enjoyable to me personally.
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Obvious Freshman Effort at Procedural

A truly horrifying crime scene is discovered in the woods of Virginia near a town called Bakersfield. Evelyn Baine, an FBI profiler, is brought in to give advice to the local law enforcement. They don't appear to have a lot of respect for her opinion. Then it seems that an abduction attempt and the murders near Bakersfield have at least one point of connection.

I thought this book was only just okay because it seemed that the author kept pulling her punches. Finally I looked at the publisher and I realized that it was Mira. I tend to avoid Mira books due to the fact that I rarely read one that doesn't seem a bit watered down. Of course for many readers that would be a plus. So this is a tepid sort of murder story. I also was surprised that with only two deaths Evelyn started referring to the killer as a serial. The definition of serial killer requires three or more murders over a period of more than 30 days with a cooling off period after each murder.

So the story started off with a bang, then sagged into a middle section with some unresolved sexual tension between Evelyn and another agent. Then in the last couple of chapters it picked up steam. The author has promise but I think she needs to decide which genre she is going to write.
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Beautifully Done!

One of the strongest debuts I've read...in the sense that it doesn't read like a debut at all. Meticulously researched with characters that are achingly real. Evelyn is a refreshing break from the stereotypical law enforcement figure, and I'm excited to see what Heiter does with her in the future.
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