Black Water (Pendragon #5)
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Black Water (Pendragon #5)

Paperback – August 1, 2004

Price
$12.99
Format
Paperback
Pages
448
Publisher
Aladdin
Publication Date
ISBN-13
978-0689869112
Dimensions
5.13 x 1.1 x 7.63 inches
Weight
10.4 ounces

Description

D.J. MacHale is the author of the #1 New York Times bestselling Pendragon series and the Morpheus Road series. He has written, directed and produced many television series and movies for young people that have been seen on Nickelodeon, The Disney Channel, HBO, Showtime, PBS, Discovery Kids, and the broadcast networks. D.J. lives with his family in Southern California. Excerpt. © Reprinted by permission. All rights reserved. Chapter One Acolytes. That's what this was all about.It was also about saving humanity from being crushed by a villainous demon named Saint Dane, but that was a little much for Mark Dimond and Courtney Chetwynde to tackle right off the bat. They figured becoming acolytes was the best way to ease into the whole universe-saving thing. The two friends sat together on a musty old couch in a small New York City apartment. They were there to learn the mysterious ways of the acolytes. Not exactly dramatic surroundings, considering they were hearing words that would change their lives forever."You are the acolytes from Second Earth now," said Tom Dorney, whose apartment it was. "With Press gone, I'm no longer needed. It may be an easy job compared to what the Travelers do, but I think you'll agree it's an important one.""We do. Absolutely. Yessir," Mark and Courtney assured him.Dorney turned to look out his window and frowned. He was an old guy with short-cropped gray hair and excellent posture. He was once a soldier. Old habits die hard."Is there something you're not telling us?" Courtney asked.Dorney sighed and said, "It's just a feeling.""What?" she demanded."I don't know," Dorney said, troubled. "I didn't like what I heard about Veelox.""Yeah, no kidding," Courtney said."What I mean to say is, be careful. Saint Dane has finally had a victory, and there's no telling what's next. From this point on, I can't guarantee that the old rules still apply."This was chilling news for Mark and Courtney on their first official day as acolytes. Dorney's ominous warning was very much on their minds as they left his apartment and took the train back to Stony Brook, Connecticut. Just before the train pulled into Stony Brook Station, Mark announced, "I want to go to the flume.""Why?" Courtney asked."We'll bring some of our clothes to leave there.""But nobody told us they needed clothes," Courtney countered."I know. Just thinking ahead.""That's just an excuse to go there, isn't it?" Courtney asked.Mark didn't argue. "I guess I just want to see it again. To prove it's real.""I hear you," Courtney said. "I do too."When they got off the train, they both went home and gathered up a bunch of clothes they thought a Traveler from some distant territory might need on a visit to Second Earth. That's what acolytes did. They supported the Travelers on their mission to protect Halla. Courtney picked out a bunch of simple, functional things like jeans, T-shirts, a sweater, socks, hiking boots, and underwear. She debated about bringing one of her bras, but figured that was overkill. Mark gathered up a bunch of clothes that were totally out of style. It wasn't like he had a choice. That's all he had. He found sweatshirts with logos that meant nothing, no-name jeans, and generic sneakers. Style was not something Mark concerned himself with. He hoped the Travelers felt the same way.Mark brought one extra item, but hoped he wouldn't need it. It was the sharp poker from his parents' fireplace. It was a woefully inadequate weapon to deal with an attacking quig-dog, but it was all he could find.Shortly after, Mark and Courtney met at the iron gates in front of the empty Sherwood house. They silently walked around to the side and climbed the tree to get over the high stone wall that surrounded the spooky, abandoned estate. Once over, Mark held the fireplace poker out in front of him, ready to ward off a rampaging quig. Mark's hand was shaking like warm Jell-O, so Courtney gently took the weapon from him. If either of them had a chance of fighting off a charging quig, it would be Courtney.Luckily they didn't run into any of the yellow-eyed beasts. They made it through the big empty mansion, down into the basement, and into the root cellar that held the newly created flume. No problem. They emptied their backpacks and neatly folded the clothes in a pile. Courtney looked at some of the geek clothes Mark brought, and chuckled."Oh yeah, Bobby's gonna blend right in wearing a bright yellow sweatshirt with a red logo that says, 'Cool Dude!'" "Give me a break," Mark said defensively. "It's my favorite sweatshirt."Courtney shook her head in disbelief. When they were finished, they both gazed into the dark tunnel to the territories. The flume. They stood together, each with his/her own thoughts as to what the future might hold."I'm scared and excited at the same time," Mark said."Really," Courtney added. "I want to be part of this, but it's scary not knowing what to expect.""Can you imagine being a Traveler?" Mark asked while stepping into the mouth of the tunnel."Well, no," Courtney answered, "to be honest.""Well, I've thought about it a lot!" Mark declared. "It would be awesome, stepping into a flume and announcing the next amazing place you'd like to go.""It's pretty unbelievable," Courtney agreed."Look at this thing!" Mark said, scanning the flume. "It's kinda like having a jet fighter.""It is?" Courtney asked with a chuckle."Yeah. You know what it's capable of, but have no idea what to do to make it go.""It's not all that hard," Courtney said. "If you're a Traveler."Mark smiled, turned to face the dark tunnel, and shouted out, "Eelong!" He looked back to Courtney and said, "Could you imagine if -- ""Mark!" Courtney shouted.Mark saw the terrified look on Courtney's face. She was looking past him, deeper into the flume. Mark spun quickly and saw something he thought was impossible.The flume was coming to life.Mark jumped out of the tunnel and ran to Courtney. The two backed away toward the far wall of the root cellar, hugging each other in fear."D-Did I do that?" Mark asked."Or is somebody coming?" Courtney added.The light appeared from the depths of the tunnel. The musical notes were faint at first but quickly grew louder. The rocky walls began to crackle and groan. They had seen all this before, but only when the flume was activated by a Traveler. Never, ever had a flume been activated by a non-Traveler -- until now."I-I don't really want to go to Eelong," Mark cried. Courtney held him tighter, ready to hold him back if he got pulled in by the power of the flume.The gray walls of the tunnel melted into glorious crystal as the bright light and sound arrived at the mouth. Mark and Courtney didn't dare put their hands in front of their eyes because they were too busy hanging on to each other. But neither felt the tug of the flume, because someone was headed their way. Through the bright light they saw a tall, dark silhouette appear and step out of the tunnel. Oddly, the sparkling light didn't go away. The jangle of music stayed too. This had never happened before, at least not that Mark or Courtney knew. But none of that mattered as much as the man who now stood facing them.It was Saint Dane. He had arrived on Second Earth. The two had never seen him before, but there was no mistaking the tall demon with the long gray hair, piercing blue eyes, and dark clothes."And so it begins," Saint Dane cackled. "The walls are beginning to crack. The power that once was, will no longer be. It is a whole new game, with new rules."Saint Dane roared out a laugh. With a sudden burst of light from deep inside the flume, his hair caught fire! His long gray mane exploded in flames, burning right down to his skull. Mark and Courtney watched in horror as the flames reflected in his demonic eyes. Saint Dane laughed the whole while, as if enjoying it.Mark and Courtney didn't move, except to tremble.The fire burned away all of Saint Dane's hair, leaving him completely bald, with angry red streaks that looked like inflamed veins running from the back of his head to his forehead. His eyes had changed too. The steely blue color had gone nearly white. He fixed those intense eyes on the two new acolytes and smiled. He tossed a dirty, cloth bag at their feet."A present for Pendragon," Saint Dane hissed. "Be sure he gets it, won't you?" Saint Dane took a step back into the light of the flume. "What was meant to be, is no longer," he announced. With that, he began to transform. His body turned liquid as he leaned over to put his hands on the ground. At the same time his body mutated into that of a huge, jungle cat. It was the size of a lion. His coat was brown, but speckled with black spots. The big cat snarled at Mark and Courtney, and leaped into the flume. An instant later the light swept him up and disappeared into the depths. The music faded, the crystal walls returned to stone, and the light shrank to a pin spot.But it didn't disappear entirely.Before Mark and Courtney could get their heads back together, the light began to grow again. The music became louder and the gray rock walls transformed back into crystal."My brain is exploding," Mark uttered.A second later the bright light flashed at the mouth of the tunnel to deposit another passenger before returning to its normal, dormant state."Bobby!" Mark and Courtney shouted. They ran to him and threw their arms around him in fear and relief."What happened?" Bobby demanded, all business.Mark and Courtney were both supercharged with adrenaline. "It was Saint Dane!" Courtney shouted. "His hair burned! It was horrible!""He said the rules have ch-changed, Bobby," Mark stuttered. "What did he m-mean?"Bobby took a step back from them. Mark and Courtney sensed his tension."What did you do?" Bobby demanded. It sounded like he was scolding them."Do?" Courtney said. "We didn't do anything!"Mark and Courtney focused on Bobby. He was wearing rags. His feet were bare, his hair was a mess, and he had a coating of dirt all over his body. He didn't smell so hot either."What happened to you?" Mark asked."It doesn't matter," Bobby shot back. He was just as charged up as they were. "Did you activate the flume?"Mark and Courtney looked to each other. Mark said, "Uh, I g-guess so. I said 'Eelong' -- ""No!" Bobby said in anguish."What's the matter?" Courtney asked. "We're not Travelers. We can't control the flume.""Things have changed," Bobby shouted. "Saint Dane's power is growing. He's got his first territory. It's all about changing the nature of things.""So...that means we can use the flumes?" Courtney asked."Don't!" Bobby demanded. "It'll just make things worse."Mark remembered something. He ran back to the door of the root cellar and picked up the bag Saint Dane had thrown at them. "He said this was for you," Mark said, handing the bag to Bobby.Bobby took it like it was the last thing in the world he wanted. He turned the rotten bag upside down, and something fell onto the floor. Courtney screamed. Mark took a step back in shock. Bobby stood firm, staring at the floor, his jaw muscles clenching. Lying at his feet was a human hand. It was large and dark skinned. As gruesome as this was, there was something else about it that made it nearly unbearable to look at. On one finger, was a Traveler ring."Gunny," Bobby whispered. It was the severed hand of the Traveler from First Earth, Vincent "Gunny" VanDyke. Bobby took a brave breath, picked up the hand, and jammed it into the bag."Bobby, what's happening?" Courtney asked."You'll know when I send my journal," he said. He turned back and ran into the mouth of the flume, clutching the bag with Gunny's hand in it. "Eelong!" he called out. The flume sprang back to life."Is Gunny all right?" Mark asked, nearly in tears."He's alive," Bobby said. "But I don't know for how long.""Tell us what to do!" Courtney pleaded."Nothing," Bobby answered. "Wait for my journal. And whatever you do, do not activate the flume. That's exactly what Saint Dane wants. It's not the way things were meant to be."With a final flash of light and jumble of notes, Bobby was swept into the flume, leaving his two friends alone to begin their careers as acolytes.It wasn't a very good beginning.Copyright © 2004 by D. J. MacHale

Features & Highlights

  • Breaking the rules
  • Just when fifteen-year-old Bobby Pendragon thinks he understands his purpose as a Traveler -- to protect the territories of Halla from the evil Saint Dane -- he is faced with an impossible choice. The inhabitants of Eelong are in danger of being wiped out by a mysterious plague. The only way Bobby can stop it is to bring the antidote from another territory. Since moving items between territories is forbidden by the Traveler rules, if Bobby chooses to save Eelong he could endanger himself, his friends, and the future of every other being in Halla.

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One word for Pendragon: Captivating

I have read all 5 of these books. Pendragon is a constant page turner. I could not stop reading these books. I probably like this series so much because I'm 15 years-old and I can relate to 14 year-old turning 15 Bobby Pendragon. Once you start reading this series you will not be able to stop, unless you don't understand.All that's wrong with this series is that there is a fifteen year-old who has some hardships, so sometime he curses, although it does decrease throughout the series. D.J. MacHale does an excellent job putting these books together. Although "The Reality Bug" book was a bit confusing.

Altogether these books are a great adventure especailly for mid- teenaged guys, not saying that girls won't like it. If you end one book or even one chapter he ends with a captivating word and sends you to go on, it's almost irresistable!

Hobey-ho! Here we go!
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an amazing 5th book in the Pendragon series

D. J. MacHale successfully pulls you into another astounding novel from the Pendragon series! His highly creative worlds and unforgettable characters, makes you unable to resist the urge to stay up all night, turing the pages of this fast paced, intriguing story. Bobby Pendragon is faced with yet another world to save, and the obsticles he must overcome are staggering. If you enjoy fast paced adventure, other worldly settings, and balievable characters, you will not be able to resist this series!
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Pendragon Rocks!

First of all I have to say that these books are amazing. The way D.J. MacHale writes is very original and extremely hilarious. Furthermore, the plot is always original, suspenseful, and engaging. I have nothing but praise for these books, and Black Water is none different! Please read!
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Machale has done it again!

Black Water is the fifth in a series of amazing books. This time the rules have changed and the book is back with so many twists that I couldn't put it down. I got the book yesterday and read it straight through to the end. I am a total fan of the series and I can only say buy and read all the books! PS. Eelong is much more exciting than Veelox. Hobey-ho!
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An adult's review

First off, this book does suffer from some of the same problems the first four in the series did--it's told in a voice that may irritate adults, and there's a feel of too much exposition at times. That said, I was surprised at myself to see how excited I was to grab this as soon as I saw it. Problems aside, this is a great adventure series that sucks you in quickly, with entertaining characters and even more entertaining settings. This one may be my favorite yet.
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"Don't worry. It's pretty safe inside Leeandra."

I need to buy this book, if only because I'm mentioned on 76 pages of it, mostly in phrasings that Freud would have a field day with.

Thank you, Amazon, for the Search Inside! feature.
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Amazing!

The fifth installment in the Pendragon series was an amazing edition. This could be my new favorite installment, shunning out the never war as number one. MacHale goes farther into the fantasy area in this book (these books are a cross between sci-fi and fantasy), the territory of Eelong was a lot different than the other territories. ;) The territory is very unique and I congratulate MacHale's imagination. The only problem with the book and why I gave it only four stars was that the plot (though not greatly) resembled the plot of The Lost City of Faar just a little bit too much. But yet, both books are immensely different. And, wow, what an ending; suspenseful, sad,and yet still have you hanging on the edge of your seat waiting eagerly for the sixth book!
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Wonderful Young Adult Series

Wonderful Young Adult Series; It has fantastic writing that drags you in. I had the series as a teen and now I have gotten it for my teen!! Honestly one of my and her favorite series of all times
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and it's excellent. I wish every kid (and adult) would take ...

Don't know why the Pendragon series never got hugely popular; this is my second time reading it, and it's excellent. I wish every kid (and adult) would take the time, they wouldn't be disappointed. It's magical, suspense-filled, has villains, heroes, the works. I'm buying the series (again), because when my daughter left home, she took her copies with her and I want my own.
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Black Water Book Review I enjoyed the novel Pendragon

Pendragon: Black Water Book Review
I enjoyed the novel Pendragon: Black Water by D.J. MacHale. Readers should be warned that this is the fifth book of a series, so people who are interested should read the other novels first. There are several things I liked about it, like the variety of characters, the way the author changed the point of view, and the interesting concepts the author had.
One part of the book I enjoyed was the wide variety of characters. The main character is Bobby Pendragon, otherwise known as the “lead traveler,” basically meaning he is the leader of the group. He is smart on his feet and has a strong sense of justice. Another character is Kasha, a talking cat that likes to go with her gut. Boon, another cat who is a bit more outgoing than Kasha, likes to seek out fun things. Spader is an optimistic and likeable guy that almost always knows what to say. These are just some of my favorite characters from the novel.
One technique MacHale used very effectively was changing the point of-of-view in the book. By changing the point of view from one character to another in every chapter or sometimes in between chapters, MacHale let me know what was happening from all the sides of the story. Another way he did this was by building suspense with one character and then changing to another to leave me longing for the first character’s next appearance. McHale has become a master of using cliffhangers since he has used them through the series.
There are several interesting ideas the author put into the book that made me enjoy the novel. One idea I liked was instead of a normal sun, there was a sun belt in the sky that stretched across the planet. Another interesting idea the author had was making cats more intelligent life forms that live in tree houses in the sky. The author used another interesting idea by making a lizard in the book with sharp claws and a pig nose. These are just some ways MacHale made this world more interesting to picture in my head.
I enjoyed this book because of the variety of the characters, the ways the author changes the point of view, and the interesting concepts the author had. This was one of my favorite books, and if readers liked the Percy Jackson series by Rick Riordan, they will probably like this series. Make sure you start at the beginning of the series or it might be kind of confusing, but this book is one of the better books in the series so far.
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